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"Mahfil-e-Ishq" sabke liye khuli bazam
Dosto ajj hum ek naya silsila shuru karne ja rahe hai.N
jisme app sab ka tahe dil se suwagat hai....:) Title se hi appko andaza ho gaya hoga ki kerna kiya hai phir bhi meiN thoda sa explain kerna chahoNgi... Kerna sirf itna hai , ki app ne apne chahat bhare ahsaso.N ko ash'aar ke sahare bayan kerna hai, chahat se bharpoor, umda khayalooN ko app apne ash'aar meiN bhi bayan ker sakte haiN aur kisi aur shayar ke ash’aar se bhi, mager ager apna sher na to "NM" ya " Not Mine" ya phir shayar ka naam ager maloom ho to zaroor likhna hai, hum ek saath do sher post nahi kareNge....ek member ke sher ke baad doosra member sher post karega...................... Umeed hai app sab ka bharpoor saath milega :) sabse phela sher main "Meer Taqi Meer" saheb ka likh rahi hoon. "ibtidaa-e-ishq hai rotaa hai kyaa aage aage dekhiye hotaa hai kyaa" -Meer Taqi Meer |
KISI KE ISHK MEIN HUM NE AJEEB KAAM KIYA
KI KHUD HI KHUD KO MITAANE KA INTZAAM KIYA. PRASHANT VASL in KASH AISA KABHI HUA HOTA(published'1976) |
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welcome prashnat ji.....:) "Ibadat rab ki aur soorat yaar ki ho, sajda rab ka aur rasam pyar ki ho, ashiqo ke mahzab ka kaya kahna, zikar rab ka aur baat yaar ki ho" -NM |
Chaliye hum bhi aa gayeN.......:)
Jis simt bhi dekhoun, Nazar aata hain kay tum ho Ae Jaan-e-jahan,yeh koi tumsa hain kay tum ho |
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welcome dear....:) teri bahho mai aakar sakoon milta hai mujhe, kaya meri tarah yoon hi bekarar ho tum...... -sunita virender |
teri nigahon se aisi sharaab pi main ne
ki phir na hosh ka dawa kiya kabhie main ne woh aur honge jinhe maut aagyi hogi nigahe yaar se paayi hai zindagi main ne NM |
mehfil kahe jise hum
teri yaadon ki anjuman hai hai gul se rishta mera meri zindagi chaman hai |
ruswaiyon se kaise jeete rahe hum ab tak
tanhaiyon mein jo hai teri yaad ka sahara |
saahil bhi pareshaan lehron ki dillagi se
tera intezaar humko jeena naya sikhaye |
marte the hum bhi jaana
jeene ki khaatir ab tak tera ishq yeh sikhaye marne mein kya maza hai |
ishq hai pyaare khel nahii.n hai
ishq hai kaar-e-shiishaa-o-aahan [kaar-e-shiishaa-o-aahan=(to) work with stone and glass] ~ jigar moradabadi |
Ishq Pagal Kar Gya To Kia Karo Gay Soch lo
Saniha Aisa Hua To Kia Karo Gay Soch Lo |
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"dil-e-naadaa.N tujhe huaa kyaa hai aaKhir is dard kii davaa kyaa hai " ~Ghalib ~ |
Ishq ne Ghalib nikammaa kiya
Warna hum bhi aadmi kaam ke thhe by Gaalib jii |
"Dhadka hai dil-e-yaar tere zikar se phele,
jab bhi kisi mahfil meiN teri baat chali" -NM |
Koii do mast aanKho.N me.N ham bhi Khogaye the Woh kyaa zamaana thaa ki aashiq ham bhi hogaye the Guruur-e-husn unko bhi thaa, shaq-e-sitam woh bhi raKhte the Hame.N Khushio.N se hochuki thi nafrat, unke gham bhaagaye the Hello friends! I am new here and those are the line I wrote just for this thread. My Urdu is not very good since I never studied it formally. I listen to Ghazals and try learning Urdu through them. Do let me know if I make mistakes and help me improve my Urdu. -Prasad :) |
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welcome kulkarni ji.....aapne bahut accha sher likha hai....hume pasand aaya :) "yoon to rahti hai tasavur mein unki surat, magar mil jayeN to taskeen si ho jati hai" _NM |
kuchh to havaa bhii sard thii kuchh thaa teraa Khayaal bhii
dil ko Khushii ke saath saath hotaa rahaa malaal bhii [sard=cold; malaal=sorrow] - Parveen Shakir |
"jab tera tasavur chupke se mujhe chu jaye,
mujhe apni har saans se teri hi kushboo aaye" -NM |
berabt ehsaasaath ko tu afsana na bana
apni hikmat se kisi ko deewana na bana NM |
"Hum dil to kaya rooh mein uttar jayeNge,
aap chahoge agar chahne walo.n ki tarah" -NM |
ji bhar ke kar le pyaar aur zindagi luta
woh bewafa sahi tu to wafa nibha apni kahani **** khabar yaar to rakh dard -e -zabaani **** zara dil se sada laga |
ji bhar ke kar le pyaar aur zindagi luta
woh bewafa sahi tu to wafa nibha apni kahani ch-od khabar yaar to rakh dard -e -zabaani bhool zara dil se sada laga |
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"gali ke mod par yeh kisne dard bhari lai mein mahiya gaya,
muje kisi se mohabat to nahi magar dil-e-betaab bhar aaya" -NM |
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Bahut achchaa sher hai. Lekin hame.N 'dil se sada laga' ne kaa matlab samajh me.N nahin aayaa. Mai.N Urdu abhi abhi siiKh rahaa huu.N. To aap please mujhe bataa_iye uskaa matlab kyaa hotaa hai. |
prasad ji thanks a lot
dard-e-zabaani bhool zara dil se sada laga sada yaani awaaz ab yahan dil se sada laga ka matlab hai jab hum kisi ko pyaar karte hain izhaar karne mein jhijhakte hain darte hain ki kahin sab khatam na ho jaaye but agar us ke dil mein bhi kuch ho to hamaari baat ko samjh sakti hai yaa sakta hai bade bade shayar likhte hain ki agar do log raazi hain but izhaar na hua hai to shuruwaat mein un ke dil ek doosre se izhaar kar lete hain aur yeh shayad sahi bhi hai jab hamaara dil yaa dimaag kisi cheez ko samajhta hai usi ke baad zabaan se iqraar karta hai ki koi cheez acchi hai kharaab hai bas yehi express karna chaha hai ki pehle dil se dil ko samjha baad mein zabaan se kehna hope aap ko ab koi doubts nahi honge aur haan aap ek baat note kijiye main apni gazal mein (dard) word baar baar use karta hoon but dard ka matlab takleef har baar nahi zyaada tar mere dard ka matlab hota hai ehsaas kyunki dard aur khushi dono ehsaas hi to hain jaise apni indians maan mein hota hai khushi ke aansu aap ko ek sher bhi pesh karta hoon ismein bhi doubts hon to pooch len plz MILA HAI SABR AUR TANHAAIYON KE DAUR JAHAN KHUSHI KA HAI JASHN WAHAN HAI GAM KITNA main bhi koi khaas urdu nahi jaanta bas koshish karta hoon aap bhi kijiye aur ho sake to aap meer taqi meer ke kalaam refer kijiye is se aap ko tehreer banane mein bahot hi khaas tareeke milenge zyaada typical urdu aana zaroori nahi hai zaroori hai lafzon ki dhun ko samajhna aur un ko un ki sahi jagah pe naqsh karna app aur kuch bhi poochna chahte hain to bila jhijhak pooch sakte hain aap ka yeh adna dost waqt bewaqt aap ke kuch kaam aa jaaye |
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Aapkaa bahut bahut shukriyaa, dost! Mere ek sawaal ke jawaab keliye aapane waqt nikaalaa aur itani achchi-achchi baate.N bhi ki to mujhe behad Khushii hu_ii. Aapkaa samkhaane kaa tariiqaa bhi mujhe pasand aayaa. Abhi abhi mai.N ne apani ek Ghazal ko pesh ki "Aapki Shayri" forum me.N. Mujhe aur bhi bahut Khushi hogi agar aap uske baare me.N kuchh liKh de.Nge to. Mujhe taariif kaa shauq zyaadaa nahi.N hai to aapko meri uss naa-qaabil-e-taariif Ghazal ki ko_ii taariif karne ki zaruurat nahi.N hogi. Aap bas meri apani Ghalatiyo.N ko samajh ne me.N meri madat kare.N taaqi mai.N achchaa liKh sakuu.N. Aapke waqt keliye shukriyaa. |
"Barso.n baad ek shakhas dekha mahboob sa,
ab zehan mein to nahi par naam tha bhala sa" -NM |
dil mein jo dard hai
usko bhulaana behtar gum mein rona kaisa uski yaadon jaana behtar |
Na jhilmila teri ankhieN keh mer na jaaoN
Nigah-e-Qatil ka waar sehan ker na paaoN Tere Jaado-e-husn ne behkaya hai iskader darrta hoN keh badnaam tujhe ker na jaaoN :) Mujeeb |
hum ne dekhi hai in aakhon ki mehakti khushboo
haath se chu ke in rishton ko ilzaam na do ek ehsaas hai yeh rooh se ise mehsoos karo pyaar ko pyaar hi rehne do koi naam na do (NM) |
TUM PER HI KHATAM YE SAARI CHAHAT HOGI,
PHIR NA KISI AUR PER YE INAYAT HOGI, KUCH IS TARAH SE KARENGE YAAD TUMHE, NA ZAMANE KO SHIKWA NA TUMHE SHIKAYAT HOGI,... (nm) |
Dear
Appne bhut ache shayri ke ha hamen bhut ache lage plz ase he likhte rahe our ham parte rahe........ Insaf Khan |
Na tha wo apna jise apna bana bathe
Muqadar ka likha tha zakham kaha bathe. plz Reply |
Hum hai mushtaaq aur woh bezaar
Ya Illahi yeh kyaa maajra hai ! |
Darte darte afsaana-e-dil
Aaj unse hamne keh to diya Yeh yaad nahin ghabraahat mein Kya yaad raha, kya bhool gaye NFAK |
"tum tanhai mein jab mere dil par dastak dety ho,
soye hue armaano.n ko aake jagga detey ho, yeh alag baat hai ki mera wajood hai tumse juda, magar khayaalo.n mein aakar ek kasak si jaga dety ho" -NM |
Yeh jado hai behki umar ka piya're
Sambhal ker zara tu Jiyaa jaa're Tujhko pyar hai kitna us se Mujeeb Pehle us se , tu khud ko azmaa're |
Nice
bheed ka sath dene ki chahat
har kissi ko nahi hoti hai pyaar ke liye zinda hai jo unko yeh hasrat nahi hoti hai kissi ek ke liye hi manzil ban jawo rab se har pal ibadat yahi hoti hai sab ko manane ki arzoo rehti nahi na hi feer aur kissi ki jaroorat hoti hai!!!! @@@DIL SE@@@@ |
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bahut khoob bhai jaaN :) "madhosh raat ka aalam na poochiye, kyuN na so paye hum sarri raat, ab humse aise sawaalat na poochiye" -sunita virender |
Pyaar na Maango
yar kabhi kisi katil se pyar na maango, aur
apne hi gale ke liye talwar na maango. husn walon me mohabbat ki kami hoti hai aur chahne walon ki takhdeer buri hoti hai. un hi ke marey to hai hum zindagini me. hain 4 lafz mohabbat ki is kahani me. |
Har khushi Hai Logon Ke Daman Mein,
Par Ek Hansi Ke Liye Waqt Nahi. Din Raat Daudti Duniya Mein, Zindagi Ke Liye Hi Waqt Nahi. Maa Ki Loree Ka Ehsaas To Hai, Par Maa Ko Maa Kehne Ka Waqt Nahi. Saare Rishton Ko To Hum Maar Chuke, Ab Unhe Dafnane Ka Bhi Waqt Nahi. Saare Naam Mobile Mein Hain, Par Dosti Ke Lye Waqt Nahi. Gairon Ki Kya Baat Karen, Jab Apno Ke Liye Hi Waqt Nahi. Aankhon Me Hai Neend Badee, Par Sone Ka Waqt Nahi. Dil Hai Ghamon Se Bhara Hua, Par Rone Ka Bhi Waqt Nahi. Paison ki Daud Me Aise Daude, Ki Thakne ka Bhi Waqt Nahi. Paraye Ehsason Ki Kya Kadr Karein, Jab Apane Sapno Ke Liye Hi Waqt Nahi. Tu Hi Bata E Zindagi, Iss Zindagi Ka Kya Hoga, Ki Har Pal Marne Walon Ko, Jeene Ke Liye Bhi Waqt Nahi...... |
Welcome Gajanand ji
"tere pyar ne hume har mushkil meiN sambhalna seekha diya, aankho.n mein aansu hote hue bhi muskurana seekha diya" -sunita virender :) |
Hi Sunita
"rone De Tu Aaj Humko, Tu Aankhein Sujane De
Baahon Mein Le Le Aur Khud Ko Bheeg Jane De Hai Jo Seene Mein Quaid Dariya Wo ***** Jayega Hai Itna Dard Ki Tera Daman Bheeg Jayega. " |
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"pyar ka mausam hai rone ki na baat karo, pal 2 pal ka jiwan hai koi kushi ki baat karo" -sunita virender |
Phoolon se ashiqui ka hunar seekh le
TitliyaN khud rukegi sadayeN na de.. bashir badr... |
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"na samet apne zulfe.n enko khulla rahne de, bahar garami bahut hai ghata ka ahsaas rahne de" -sunita virender |
Hi Friends..............
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
Zindagi ek raat he,
Jisme na jaane kitne khwaab he, Jo toot gaya woh sapna he, Jo mil gaya wahi apna he...... |
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Pyaar ka mausam he magar, Pyaar karnewal hi saath no ho agar, toh koi kya kare, |
ZARA SI BAAT HAI LEKIN ZAMAANE TU NAHI SAMJHA
MUHABBAT JISM KA RISHTA NAHI ROOHON KA RISHTA HAI. PRASHANT VASL(from GHUTAN:majmua/1984) |
Mudat guzar Gai ibaadat meiN Teri sanam
ajj chahata hai dil tujhse muhabbat kerey Mujeeb |
Haseen Palo.n Ko Abaad Kar Rahe The,
Chand Se Aapki Baat Kar Rahe The, Bada Sukoon Mila Ya Jankar, Aap Bhi Hamein Yaad Kar Rahe The,... (NM) |
Sapno mein roz mulqaat kerte haiN
Be-Qaabo mere jazbaat kerte haiN . Woh noor sa chehra keh , chaand bhi mangna chaandi her raat kerte haiN Mujeeb |
TU KISI KHWAB KI MAANIND HASEEN HAI LEKIN
KHWAB TO KHWAB HAI DUM BHAR MEIN BIKHAR JAAYEGA MUJH KO HAR LAMHA SATAAYEGI RAFAAQAT* TERI ISHK TAA-UMRA MERE DIL PE SITAM DHAAYEGA HAR GHADI PHIR BHI TUJHE PAANE KI VAHSHAT* KYON HAI .....SOCHTA HOON KI MUJHE TUJH SE MUHABBAT KYON HAI. *Rafaqat-Dosti **Vahshat-Unmaad,pagalpan from a PRASHANT VASL nazm in GHUTAN(published in 1984) |
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aur tum khaabo.n meiN haqiqat ka chehra doondte ho, nadaaN hi to ho" -sunita virender |
Phoolo Ki Aarzu Mein Bade Zakhm Khaaye Hai
Lekin Chaman Ke Khaar Bhi Ab Tak Paraaye Hai |
Mohabbat Farz Jaisi Hai Nibhaana Seekh Jaoge Dilo Pe Qarz Jaisi Hai Chukaana Seekh Jaoge Labo Pe Phool Jaisi Hai Khilaana Seekh Jaoge Nazar Mein Aag Jaisi Hai Lagaana Seekh Jaoge Tum Tak Faasla Jo Hai Mitaana Seekh Jaoge Kabhi Jo Dil Mein Aa Beithe Zamaana Bhool Jaoge NM |
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"tera chehra hai phool jaisa, tera jisam hai chandni jaisa, pariya.n tujse roop udhaar maange,tera aana hai bahaar jaisa" |
mahak rahii hai zamii.n chaa.Ndanii ke phuulo.n se
Khudaa kisii kii muhabbat pe muskuraayaa hai . bashir badr |
AASHIKI AANSUON KI DAGAR HO TO HO
AB KATHIN ZINDGI KA SAFAR HO TO HO. UTH GAYE JAB RAHE-ISHK MEIN YE QADAM PYAR MURDA UMEEDON KA GHAR HO TO HO. by PRASHANT VASL... |
"safar-e-ishq par chale ho, bahut umango.n ke saath,
raah meiN dushbariya.n bhi aayeNgi, himmat na haarna" -sunita virender |
E_eshq Hi aisa hai Zalim jo rulata hai uskeliye Dil Rota hai........... |
sukriya sunita ji ..............
**** Us marz ko marz-e-ishq kaha karte hain Na dawa hoti hai jis ki na dua hoti hai *****NM Quote:
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Justajo-e-nafas* ko behkaawe* meiN samajhne lage Pyar
Ik dost ne ki jaan nisaar*, kaha ke surkhro* hum huwe Justajo-e-nafas = Dil ki Khuwahish Behkaawe = theek raaste se hath jaana , khumaari meiN hona , Nisaar = Fida kerna , qurbaan kerna (devote ) Surkhro = kaamyab hona (accomplishment) |
hello Mujeeb ji kaise ho aap
Ae Jaan Meri Yaado Ko Tu Dil Mein Basaa Lena.. Badnaam Na Ho Aansu Daman Mein Chupaa Lena.. Mein Yaad Agar Aau Toh Bharna Na Kabhi Aahe.. Tu Meri Nishaani Ko Seena Se Lagaa Lena.. |
"pyar kiya hai pyar kareNge,
tere bin ek pal na raheNge, na kar sakega juda khuda bhi, usko bhi dil ki yeh baat kaheNge" -sunita virender |
Deewangi meri kuch is kadar badhne lagi haiN
Jis simt bhi dekhu nazar aaye tu hi tu haiN:p ..mausam |
Tujhe bin dekhe rehe nehin pati hun
Dil ki baat tujhse kehe nehin pati hun jab tu samne gujarta hai meri main khamosh rehe kar nazar jhuka leti hun yeh woh gunah jo main bar bar karti hun |
Tere ishq main jiti hun tere ishq main marti hun
tere liye zalim main kya kya karti hun ......... |
ishq ne hume itna majboor kar diya hai har taraf tu hi tu nazar aata hai Log kehete the pagli hai Diya ab kehete hain sayad kiska Deewani hai |
wah diya ji ....bahut khoob kaha aapne :)
"ishq ka jazba ensaaN ko kis kadar diwana bana deta hai, bin baat ke bhari mahfil mein muskurana seekha deta hai" -sunita virender |
TERI MUSKURAAHAT SE JO JHAANKTI HAI
MAIN HAR LAMHA WO IK NAMI DEKHTA HOON BAHUT KHUSH HAIN HUM TUM JUDA HO KE LEKIN MASARRAT* MEIN MAIN KUCHH KAMI DEKHTA HOON. *masarrat-khushi prashant vasl |
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aisa rishta tere saath bana leNge hum" -sunita virender |
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