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sameer'shaad' 24th November 2016 07:15 PM

!~* Ashqon ki qataaron me..*~!
 
mere ashqoN kii qataaroN me jis kaa chehraa hai,
dil-e-naadaaN kaa muqaddar usii pe Thah'raa hai.

tamaam umr miTaaoge miT sakegaa nahii,
ye rang mohabbat kaa bahot gahraa hai.

khabar uDaa do zamaane me merii maiyyat kii,
wo yoon na sunegaa, zaraa saa bahraa hai.

use khayaal me laanaa bhi ab to mushkil hai,
baDaa hi keemtii hai laakh us pe pahraa hai.

sunaa hai "Shaad" wahaaN Phool khila karte hain,
tumhaare ghar me to veeraaniyaaN haiN sahraa hai.

Shaad....

shakir ali 01 25th November 2016 01:33 PM

sameer sahab be had khubsurat
lafzon ka karvan sajaya he
purasar asahar he sabhi

bahut......khub.....

SHAKIR Ali

Madhu 14 25th November 2016 07:53 PM

sunaa hai "Shaad" wahaaN Phool khila karte hain,
tumhaare ghar me to veeraaniyaaN haiN sahraa hai.


Waah shaad sahab mere dil ki baat likh di ho jaise aapne aajkal ajeeb sa soonapan hai dil me..aise me aapki ye ghazal sukoon de gayi hai.....bahot sari daad..

Salamat rahiye
Likhte rahiye....
Shaad rahiye.....

sameer'shaad' 26th November 2016 09:52 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by shakir ali 01 (Post 495261)
sameer sahab be had khubsurat
lafzon ka karvan sajaya he
purasar asahar he sabhi

bahut......khub.....

SHAKIR Ali

tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon main aapka Shakir saahab..............

tashreef laate rahiyegaa

Shukriyaa

Shaad...............

sameer'shaad' 26th November 2016 09:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Madhu 14 (Post 495264)
sunaa hai "Shaad" wahaaN Phool khila karte hain,
tumhaare ghar me to veeraaniyaaN haiN sahraa hai.


Waah shaad sahab mere dil ki baat likh di ho jaise aapne aajkal ajeeb sa soonapan hai dil me..aise me aapki ye ghazal sukoon de gayi hai.....bahot sari daad..

Salamat rahiye
Likhte rahiye....
Shaad rahiye.....



Madhu ji aadab.... khushi huii jaankar ke aapko ye adnaa se ehsaas pasand aate hain.....

aur meri khushnaseebi kah loon jo har dafaa ki tarah is baar bhi aapka saath milaa, aur ummeed karta hoon aage bhi miltaa rahegaa......

agar is kalaam ke ek lafz se bhi aapke dil ko rattee bhar bhi sukoon haasil huaa to main isme apni kaamyaabi samjhunga....

aatii rahiyegaa, saath banaae rakhiyega....

Shukriyaa. tc

Shaad.........

Qasid 12th January 2017 06:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 495258)
mere ashqoN kii qataaroN me jis kaa chehraa hai,
dil-e-naadaaN kaa muqaddar usii pe Thah'raa hai.

tamaam umr miTaaoge miT sakegaa nahii,
ye rang mohabbat kaa bahot gahraa hai.

khabar uDaa do zamaane me merii maiyyat kii,
wo yoon na sunegaa, zaraa saa bahraa hai.

use khayaal me laanaa bhi ab to mushkil hai,
baDaa hi keemtii hai laakh us pe pahraa hai.

sunaa hai "Shaad" wahaaN Phool khila karte hain,
tumhaare ghar me to veeraaniyaaN haiN sahraa hai.

Shaad....

Are jaane kaise yeh umdaa rachnaa mere nazar se chookh gayi.....nayaab sher jis par muqarrar niklaa use dohraa raha hoon

khabar uDaa do zamaane me merii maiyyat kii,
wo yoon na sunegaa, zaraa saa bahraa hai.


khaaksaar ki daad qubool farmaiyegaa

sameer'shaad' 15th January 2017 10:25 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Qasid (Post 495508)
Are jaane kaise yeh umdaa rachnaa mere nazar se chookh gayi.....nayaab sher jis par muqarrar niklaa use dohraa raha hoon

khabar uDaa do zamaane me merii maiyyat kii,
wo yoon na sunegaa, zaraa saa bahraa hai.


khaaksaar ki daad qubool farmaiyegaa

behad shukriyaa janaab.

aap tashreef laaye mahfil me jaan aa gayee...

aate rahen.............

Shaad.........

bhushan 4th February 2018 11:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 495258)
mere ashqoN kii qataaroN me jis kaa chehraa hai,
dil-e-naadaaN kaa muqaddar usii pe Thah'raa hai.

tamaam umr miTaaoge miT sakegaa nahii,
ye rang mohabbat kaa bahot gahraa hai.

khabar uDaa do zamaane me merii maiyyat kii,
wo yoon na sunegaa, zaraa saa bahraa hai.

use khayaal me laanaa bhi ab to mushkil hai,
baDaa hi keemtii hai laakh us pe pahraa hai.

sunaa hai "Shaad" wahaaN Phool khila karte hain,
tumhaare ghar me to veeraaniyaaN haiN sahraa hai.

Shaad....


Waaaah waaah.....kya khoob likha hai shaad bhai. Maza aa gaya.
Daad kubul farmayeN

Aapka apna
Bhushan

sameer'shaad' 22nd February 2018 02:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bhushan (Post 496398)
Waaaah waaah.....kya khoob likha hai shaad bhai. Maza aa gaya.
Daad kubul farmayeN

Aapka apna
Bhushan


behad shukriyaa aapki daad aur duaon ke liye Bhushan saahab....... aate rahiye

Shaad...

TheDemonPrince 15th March 2018 09:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 495258)
mere ashqoN kii qataaroN me jis kaa chehraa hai,
dil-e-naadaaN kaa muqaddar usii pe Thah'raa hai.

tamaam umr miTaaoge miT sakegaa nahii,
ye rang mohabbat kaa bahot gahraa hai.

khabar uDaa do zamaane me merii maiyyat kii,
wo yoon na sunegaa, zaraa saa bahraa hai.

use khayaal me laanaa bhi ab to mushkil hai,
baDaa hi keemtii hai laakh us pe pahraa hai.

sunaa hai "Shaad" wahaaN Phool khila karte hain,
tumhaare ghar me to veeraaniyaaN haiN sahraa hai.

Shaad....

Kya mast peshkash hai Sameer bhai.
tamaam umr miTaaoge miT sakegaa nahii,
ye rang mohabbat kaa bahot gahraa hai.

Thodi si modify kardi, sorry.
khabar uDD bhi jaye zamaane me merii maiyyat kii,
wo yoon na sunegaa, zaraa saa bahraa hai.

Poori nazam aapki bohat khoob hai.
Bura na maniyega, bas maine apne dil se apki nazam pe kuch likh diya.
Muaf kar dena. :)


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