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ruchika 8th October 2008 10:16 AM

Chotii sii meri Khawaish...
 
Chotii sii meri Khawaish...aayi thi mere paas...

khil-khilakar dilaya usne apne hone ka aiehsaas....
itthlakar, itraakar ghum rahi thi...yahi kahin mere aas paas....

muskraakar, sharmaakar kar rahi thi...apni khushi ka iizhaar...
Palke bichaiye kar rahi thi..apne pura hone ka intzaar..

per nadan thi anjaan....thi is baat se Beikhabar ..
Kii reh jayegi wo yunhi adhuri sii...
Aur Naa kabhi hogi puri uski ye aas...

per phir bhi choti si meri khawaish aayi thi mere paas.....

mausam 9th October 2008 05:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ruchika (Post 310826)
Chotii sii meri Khawaish...aayi thi mere paas...

khil-khilakar dilaya usne apne hone ka aiehsaas....
itthlakar, itraakar ghum rahi thi...yahi kahin mere aas paas....

muskraakar, sharmaakar kar rahi thi...apni khushi ka iizhaar...
Palke bichaiye kar rahi thi..apne pura hone ka intzaar..

per nadan thi anjaan....thi is baat se Beikhabar ..
Kii reh jayegi wo yunhi adhuri sii...
Aur Naa kabhi hogi puri uski ye aas...

per phir bhi choti si meri khawaish aayi thi mere paas.....


Apke ehsaas bahot pasand aaye..........:)yunhi likhti rahiye..........

khwahish ke upar ek mera pasandidia sher arz karna chahungi...


dil me.n hai mulaaqaat kii Khvaahish kii dabii aag
mehandii lage haatho.n ko chhupaa kar kahaa.N rakhuu.N



mausam:)

ruchika 10th October 2008 01:37 PM

thanks dear... acha laga ki aapko mere khayalat pasand aaye...
Khvaahish per jagjit singh ki ek gazal mujhe bhi bahut pasand hai..sayad aapne suni ho....

Hazaroon khvaahishe aisi..ki har khvaahish pe dum nikle....
Bahut nikle mere armaan.. phir bhi kam nikle...


Khvaahishe to bahut hai per her ek puri ho jaruri to nahi....

Take care.....

mausam 10th October 2008 05:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ruchika (Post 311003)
thanks dear... acha laga ki aapko mere khayalat pasand aaye...
Khvaahish per jagjit singh ki ek gazal mujhe bhi bahut pasand hai..sayad aapne suni ho....

Hazaroon khvaahishe aisi..ki har khvaahish pe dum nikle....
Bahut nikle mere armaan.. phir bhi kam nikle...

Khvaahishe to bahut hai per her ek puri ho jaruri to nahi....

Take care.....

haan bahut kam aise khusnaseeb hote hain jinki khwahishen puri hoti hain.....:) waise khwahish karne mein koi burai nahin bas use pura karne ki ummed nahin rakhni chahiye...........:)

tc..
mausam

sunita thakur 10th October 2008 10:54 PM

ruchika jee...............aapki khawahis padi...acchi lagi aur es khawahish mein chuppa dard bhi humne mahsooos kiya.....likhti rahiye.

kush rahiye
god bless u

rocker09 11th October 2008 12:05 AM

Aas dil mein hai tumhain panain ki,
Hum ghalti kar nahin saktay tumhain bhulani ki,
Ho sakti hai doori aap se lekin,
Himat hum bhi rakhtay hain faslay mitaney ki.

baagi 12th October 2008 03:05 PM

bahut achche ahsaas lage apke.......nikalna kurd se adam ka sunte aaye hai lekin
bade beabru hokar tere kuche se ham nikle.
khuda ke vaste parda nakavi se utha jalim
kahi aesa na ho ya bhi vahi kafir sanam nikle.
take care.

ruchika 13th October 2008 10:49 AM

aap sabko mere ehsaas pasand aaye ... thanks.... aage bhi koshish rahegi ki kuch acha likh sahkun.... aur aap sab yunhi sath dete rahe....

Baatoin baatoin main pyare se rishtey ban jate hai ...
sath chalte chalte muskil safar bhi aasan ho jate hai...

take care...


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