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tabaah 21st August 2014 01:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by zainy (Post 465870)
Zakham Kya Kya Na Zindagi Se Milay
Khwaab Palkon Se Be-Rukhi Se Milay

--Fakhira Batool

wahhh..

Aap ki aankh se gehraa hai meri rooh ka zakhm,
Aap kya sochen ge, meri shab-e-tanhaai ko..
nm

Mujeeb 21st August 2014 03:32 PM

yahaN likhaa sher na to kisi ke she'r ka jawaab hai or naa hee kissi ke liye message , jo sh'er acha lagta hai appke saath share ker daita hoN aur iske ilaawa kuch bhee naheeN , ager phir bhee kisi ki dil azaaree huwi ho tu gunehgaar hoN maiN unkaa or muaafi ka talabgaar hoN .


Socha tha ik zakhm hai bhar jayega,
kya khabar thi rag-o-jan mein utar jayega,

theek likha tha meray haath ki lakeeron mein,
tu agar pyar karega to bikhar jayega...!!!

NM

aadeil 21st August 2014 03:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by N@zneen (Post 465924)
Haael raha darmiyaaN hajar kii taraH
Wo tera farz tha, merii dosti thi

waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh!!!
Naaz,
you are really improving with your shers..... kya khub khayaal hai....

saNg-o-khisht darmiyaaN kii vajah to nahi
dar bhii taamir kiya hai divaaroN ke biich

zainy 21st August 2014 07:50 PM

Aazma le saath mera, teri yaadoN ke siwa kuch bhi nahi
YuuN girebaN meiN jaaNk kar, dil ki tauheen tou na kar

Nm

Hassan 21st August 2014 08:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Madhu 14 (Post 465882)
Waah....hassan ji...

Kiske daaman me chupa ke muh ro le ham
ki har daman bheega hai yanha pani se

Kisase kahein dard e dil apna
Har dil jakhmi hai apni hi kahani se..

Quote:

Originally Posted by tabaah (Post 465915)
bahut khuub Hasaan ji bahut khub.. wahhh.....


Jo kabhi be’panaah chahta tha,
Ab mujh se panaah chahta hai..
nm

wahhh Madhu jii.. bohat khoob.. tabaaH saheb.. bohat khoob...

sunehray jazboN ki Qadar karna, rafaqatoN meiN waQar rakhna
andhair nagri meiN dil jalaa ke khiyal rakhna hisaab ho ga!


-nm

Hassan 21st August 2014 08:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tabaah (Post 465917)
wahhh..

Aap ki aankh se gehraa hai meri rooh ka zakhm,
Aap kya sochen ge, meri shab-e-tanhaai ko..
nm

Quote:

Originally Posted by N@zneen (Post 465924)
Haael raha darmiyaaN hajar kii taraH
Wo tera farz tha, merii dosti thi

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mujeeb (Post 465932)
yahaN likhaa sher na to kisi ke she'r ka jawaab hai or naa hee kissi ke liye message , jo sh'er acha lagta hai appke saath share ker daita hoN aur iske ilaawa kuch bhee naheeN , ager phir bhee kisi ki dil azaaree huwi ho tu gunehgaar hoN maiN unkaa or muaafi ka talabgaar hoN .


Socha tha ik zakhm hai bhar jayega,
kya khabar thi rag-o-jan mein utar jayega,

theek likha tha meray haath ki lakeeron mein,
tu agar pyar karega to bikhar jayega...!!!

NM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aadeil (Post 465933)
waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh!!!
Naaz,
you are really improving with your shers..... kya khub khayaal hai....

saNg-o-khisht darmiyaaN kii vajah to nahi
dar bhii taamir kiya hai divaaroN ke biich

Quote:

Originally Posted by zainy (Post 465939)
Aazma le saath mera, teri yaadoN ke siwa kuch bhi nahi
YuuN girebaN meiN jaaNk kar, dil ki tauheen tou na kar

Nm

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaH!!!
aik se bhad kar ke aik shair... meHfil ko chaar chaand laga diye aap sabhi ne! :)


woH bhi apne na huway dil bhi gaya hathoN se
aise aanay se toH behtar tha na aana dil ka..


-Nasir Kazmi

Fathomless 21st August 2014 09:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by N@zneen (Post 465924)
Haael raha darmiyaaN hajar kii taraH
Wo tera farz tha, merii dosti thi

mind blowing.........keep it up my friend

Mujeeb 22nd August 2014 07:25 PM

har baar woh kiyoN mujhy choR jaata hai tanha
mai mazboot bahut hoN mager pathar to naheeN

NM

Hassan 22nd August 2014 09:41 PM

hum tumhe chahte haiN aiteraaf kese kareN!
hujoom-e-shehar ko apne khilaaf kese kareN!

Hassan 22nd August 2014 10:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by N@zneen (Post 466039)

Wow! PS how romantic :) tum to rumanii sher o ghazal k baadshah ho ;)

thankyou dear! :) aur tum tareef karne waali malkaa ho! ;-)

zainy 23rd August 2014 01:29 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by N@zneen (Post 466035)
Chalo anaa kii deewar giraa deteiN haiN
Mere yaara ek dusrey ko maNa leteiN haiN


Humne Sookhi hui ShakhoN pe Lahu Chhirka tha FaraZ..
Phool Agar Ab bhi Na khilTay Tou qayamaT Hoti....

Mujeeb 23rd August 2014 03:52 AM

Abhi mohabbat ka ism-e-aazam laboon pe rehnay de jan-e-MOHSIN
Abhi hai chahat nai nai si, abhi hain jazbay jawan jawan se

MN

Praneeta 23rd August 2014 10:44 AM

mujhe dost kahne wale zara dosti nibha de
ye matalba hai haq ka koi ilteja nahi hai

sunita dii

ananthpak 23rd August 2014 11:22 AM

Iss mehfil-e-shayri ka bhi kuch ajab hai silsila yaaron

Koi dard sunaata hai aur hum daad dete hain

ananthpak 23rd August 2014 11:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by N@zneen (Post 466063)

Wah! jij bahot khoob...............................:)

Bohat shukriya saali sahiba :)

ananthpak 23rd August 2014 11:38 AM

Gustakhi maaf :)
Ghalib revisited :)

hazaaroN adayein 'eisee ke har ada pe dam nikle
bohot nikle mere alfaaz lekin fir bhee kam nikle

tabaah 23rd August 2014 07:56 PM

Waqt ka pata chalta nahin apnon ke sath,
Apnon ka pata chal jata hai waqt ke sath...

nm

sameer'shaad' 23rd August 2014 10:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tabaah (Post 466112)
Waqt ka pata chalta nahin apnon ke sath,
Apnon ka pata chal jata hai waqt ke sath...

nm

waaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh..................... sau fee sadii sach baat kaahi hai...

Hassan 23rd August 2014 10:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tabaah (Post 466112)
Waqt ka pata chalta nahin apnon ke sath,
Apnon ka pata chal jata hai waqt ke sath...

nm

wahhh wahh! tabaaH saheb.. bohat khoob..

tum apni neend bharay shehar meiN talaash karo!
jo aankh raakh huii us meiN khwaab kia ho ga?


-Mohsin Naqvi

Hassan 23rd August 2014 10:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ananthpak (Post 466065)
Gustakhi maaf :)
Ghalib revisited :)

hazaaroN adayein 'eisee ke har ada pe dam nikle
bohot nikle mere alfaaz lekin fir bhee kam nikle

Quote:

Originally Posted by ananthpak (Post 466060)
Iss mehfil-e-shayri ka bhi kuch ajab hai silsila yaaron

Koi dard sunaata hai aur hum daad dete hain

wahh wahh sir... bohat bohat khoob...

tabaah 25th August 2014 06:21 AM

sukriya Shaad shaheb or Hassan bhai..

Dopaher Tak Bikk Gaya Bazaar ka Harr ek Jhoot
Or Main ek Sach Lekar Shaam Tak Baitha Raha..
nm

lekhraj 25th August 2014 11:30 AM

Yaki'n maano khataye saaf dikhti hai hume unki...
ishq andha nahi hota, ye bas dildaar hota hai...

- Lekhraj

zainy 25th August 2014 05:07 PM

Ye bhi kya kam hai k hum teri tamanna mein jiyen
Lutf-e-manzil naa sahi, hasrat-e-manzil hi sahi....

Nm

Madhu 14 25th August 2014 07:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by zainy (Post 466335)
Ye bhi kya kam hai k hum teri tamanna mein jiyen
Lutf-e-manzil naa sahi, hasrat-e-manzil hi sahi....

Nm

Wah zainy ji.... Bahut khoob

Tere sang zindagi ho aisi kismat hi nahi
Uspe ye sitam tera ki yaad me apni Marne bhi nahi deta.

lekhraj 26th August 2014 11:17 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Madhu 14 (Post 466343)
Wah zainy ji.... Bahut khoob

Tere sang zindagi ho aisi kismat hi nahi
Uspe ye sitam tera ki yaad me apni Marne bhi nahi deta.


Kitni nadaan si hasrat hai tumne zindagi se ki...
:
Ishq bhi karte ho...aur kismat ki baat bhi..???
:)

Madhu 14 26th August 2014 02:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by lekhraj (Post 466451)

Kitni nadaan si hasrat hai tumne zindagi se ki...
:
Ishq bhi karte ho...aur kismat ki baat bhi..???
:)

Waah bahut khoob lekhraaj ji..

Madhu 14 26th August 2014 02:15 PM

Kusur tera nahi mere hath ki lakeeron ka hai
Jise bhi chaha vo kisi aur ka nikla. ....

tabaah 27th August 2014 03:38 PM

Is jahan mein mazdoor sa darbadar koi nahin,
Jis ne banaye sab ke ghar us ka ghar koi nahin..
nm

lekhraj 28th August 2014 10:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Madhu 14 (Post 466484)
Kusur tera nahi mere hath ki lakeeron ka hai
Jise bhi chaha vo kisi aur ka nikla. ....


Vo jiske aaj hai, kal unse bhi naa ho shayad...
:
Yu gairo_n ki mohabbat pe nazar mat daalo...

Ashwani Tyagi 29th August 2014 08:13 PM

Rules for this thread
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 453386)
Pyaare DostoN, BhaaiyoN aur Behno.....

Shayri ke silsile ko aage badhaate hue hum is nateeje par pahoche hain ke hum aaj se ek nayaa silsilaa shuru karenge.... jaisaa ke Title hai "Sher of the Day"
isse aapko andaaza to ho gaya hogaa ke isme karnaa kya hai..
Magar main zaraa ise aur tafseel me bataana chahungaa....

Rules Kuch is tarah se haiN..

1) Members isme ek din me ek sher post kar sakte haiN.

2) sher kisi ka bhi ho sakta hai, khud ka ho to neeche apna naam likheN, kisi aur ka post kar rahe hon to neeeche asli Shayar ka naam likheN, aur agar maloom na ho to "Not mine" likheN...

3) kewal ek hi sher likheN, yaani 2 lines ka ek sher.

for ex-
Jaan-E-Mohsin Tu Bhi Ziddi Tha Ana Mujh Me Bhi Thi
Dono Khud Sar They, Jhuka Tu Bhi Nahi Main Bhi Nahi.......!!

-Mohsin Naqvi




To chaliye aaj se shuru karte hain is naayaab silsile ko... meri appeal hai aap sab members se ke zyada se zyada log isme shareeq hoN aur apne pasandeeda sher se mehfil me chaar chaand lagaaeN......

Merii tarf se pehlaa sher kuch yooN hai...


Mumkin hai ke mehboob teri Aankhon me hai "Shaad",
Us chehraa ke jaisaa hi Tujhe Dikh rahaa hai ChaanD

-Shaad


Uffffff mistake hote hote bachi saad bhai naya hu na...

tabaah 31st August 2014 09:12 AM

कौन कहता है दुआओ के लिए हाथो की जरूरत होती है,
कभी किसी माँ की आँखों में झांक कर देखिये..

Koun kehta hai duaon ke liye haatho ki jarurat hai
Kabhi kisi maa ki aankho me jhaank ke dekhiye.
nm

Madhu 14 31st August 2014 09:56 PM

Mere ghar ka sannata dekhkar kanhi vo laut na jaye.
Isliye har shaam Mahfilein saja lete hain.......

zainy 1st September 2014 01:17 AM

Inn BaadloN Ka Mizaaj Bhi Mere Mehboob Jaisa Hai,dostoN
Kabhi Toot Ke Barasta Hai ,Kabhi Be-rukhi Se Guzar Jata Hai.

NM

lekhraj 1st September 2014 01:21 PM

Har vo shayari...Jisme tujhe mahboob likha hai..
:
Zamane ne suni, aur kaha kya khoob likha hai...

sameer'shaad' 1st September 2014 01:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by lekhraj (Post 467062)
Har vo shayari...Jisme tujhe mahboob likha hai..
:
Zamane ne suni, aur kaha kya khoob likha hai...

kya baaat hai..... waaahhhh.......................... :)

sameer'shaad' 1st September 2014 01:37 PM

sher arz hai.....

Tujhko pukaarne ka hauslaa bhi naa rahaa.
ye bhi na ho sakaa ke tujhe bhool hi jaate..


Shaad......

tabaah 1st September 2014 09:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 467065)
sher arz hai.....

Tujhko pukaarne ka hauslaa bhi naa rahaa.
ye bhi na ho sakaa ke tujhe bhool hi jaate..


Shaad......

wahhhhhh..... shaad shaheb kya khub likha hai.. superb..

tabaah 1st September 2014 09:20 PM

Ujrre huye iss dil ke har ik zakhm se pucho,
Iss sheher mein kis kis se mohabbat na hui thi
Mohsin saheb..

Hassan 1st September 2014 09:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tabaah (Post 467104)
Ujrre huye iss dil ke har ik zakhm se pucho,
Iss sheher mein kis kis se mohabbat na hui thi
Mohsin saheb..

mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai 'Faraz'
magar toot ke chahna sirf aik baar hota hai


-Ahmed Faraz

lekhraj 2nd September 2014 10:31 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hassan (Post 467111)
mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai 'Faraz'
magar toot ke chahna sirf aik baar hota hai


-Ahmed Faraz

Wah Wah..bahut khoob..

Yaaro'n kitab-e-ishq ka ye pahla sabak hai...
:
Chaaho agar kisi ko..to bas toot kar chaho...


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