gajal
Subah ki pahli dhoop ho,
Ya shaam ki khushbu hawa maie lahrati ho Raat ki khamoshi ho... Ya chandni ka aalam ho..... Jab kabhi bhi meri nazar Aashmaan par thharti hai.. Lagta hai wahi gajal muskuraai hai Chaman maie jab kaliya muskurati ho Ya phool apni khushbu bikhaer rahe ho Patzhad ka pilapan ho ya basant ki hariyali Jab kabhi meri nazar Chaman par thharti hai... Lagta hai wahi gajal muskuraai hai Jab kabhi bhi sawan ki rut maie Zula julti hu.... aur tab.. Aankho ke saamne tera chera chha jata hai Aur ban jaata hai hamara rishta bhi Ek suhani gajal. |
Shayad har pyaar bhara rishta ek kaamil ghazal hi hota hai.. kaii jazbaat, utaar, chaRaav hote hain.. lekin phir bhi ye ghazal adhoori nahi hoti, kyonki isme pyaar hota hai.. bohat hi pyaara kalaam hai meena.. behad pasand aaya..:)
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ji
afshan dost,
tahe dil se tumhari aabhari hu. pyaar ka roop hota hai ek gajal |
meena ji
bohat khoobsurat nazm hai yeh. khoobsoorat ehsasaat aur jazbe ki sachchaaee aur mehboobiat aur chahat ki khuahish. is duniyan mein hassaas aur purkhuloos mohabbat bhara dil rakhne walon ki tarjumani ker di aap ne meena ji. aur yaqeen manen is kaa haq bhi ada ker diya. magar dost yeh kam hi hota hai magar ham jaise loag isi ek umeed per wisle mehboob ki khuashism mein umr guzaar dete hain. anyway again meena ji you won the show. isi tarah likhti rahen ham sarahte rahen ge. musharrafhusain |
thanx
mushi dost,
aapki tahe dil se aabharai hu k aapne meri nazam ko wakt diya aur oose is tarah saraha bhi.... jab bhi dost koi reply dete hai to yunh lagta hai jaise kisi sukhae ho rahe paudhhae ko pani ya khaat milae... |
very good meena bahut pyari gazal likhi hai apne
bye punnu |
thanx
punnuji,
tarif ke liyae shukriaa. |
first it's ok par plzz ap mijhse badi hain to punnuji mat kahiye acha nahin lagta. kya main apko didi bula sakti hoon
bye luv punnu |
i am tarun from indore m.p
can u friend ship with me Muhabatoon mein her ek lamha wisaal ho ga ye tay hua tha, Bicher ke bhi ek doosre ka khayal ho ga ye tay hua tha, Ye kya ke sansein ukher gayi hain, saffer kay aaghaz sey hi yaro, Koi bhi thuk ker na raastey mein nidhaal ho ga ye tay hua tha, Wohi hua na badaltay mausam mein tum ne hum ko bhula dia na Koi bhi rot ho, na chahatoon ko zawal ho ga ye tay hua tha, Juda huey hain tu kia hua ke yahi to dastoor-e-zindagi hai Judaiyon mein na qorbatoon ka malal ho ga ye tay hua tha, chalo ke ab sari kashtiyon ko jala dein gumnam sahailoon per, ke ab yahan say na wapsi ka sawal ho ga ye tay hua tha |
aaj ki is duniya me dost kaha milte hai hume ek acha dost chaiye aap hai hai dosti ki raaj to reply sam....
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Zakham Khaana To Apni Aadat Hai Muskurana To Apni Aadat Hai Roshni Ho Ke Ghup Andeihra Ho Dil Jalaana To Apni Aadat Hai Aap Kab Tak Sanbhaliye Ga Humein Larrkharrana To Apni Aadat Hai Hein Sitamgar Khafa To Honey Do Sar Utaana To Apni Aadat Hai Raah Chalti Hui Museebat Ko Ghar Bulaana To Apni Aadat Hai Uss Ki Aankhon Say Kya Gila Raahi!! Doob Jaana To Apni Aadat Hai ! |
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Namaskaar diii aaj arse baad aapko pada hai, ahsaas bahut acche lage, aapne jis bholepan se pyar ka vistaar se varnan kiya hai, hume behad accha laga.....diii aapki kami mahsoos hoti hai bazm meiN, waqt nikaal kar aaya kijiye....plssssssssssssss regards aapki :) |
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