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Yeh Bhi To Ho Sakta Hai...
Namaskaar Dosto.N,
Aaj bazm me.N hazir hooN ek choti si koshish le kar. Meri ye rachna adhoori hai,kacchi hai aur is layak nahi.N hai ke SDC par post ki jaye par fir bhi maiN aap sabke samne apni ye koshish "yeh bhi to ho sakta hai.." rakh rahi hooN. Galtiya.N jaruur bataiyega. ~##~ Pesh hai : Yeh bhi to ho sakta hai…. Chupke chupke mujhe dekhna adat me shamil uski, Mujhko apna maan liya ho,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai…. Meri khushiyo.N ki parwaah mujhse jyada karta hai, Jajbaato.n ko jaan liya ho,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai… Kal tak mujhse laDna milna itna hi to kaam tha uska, Mera sapna dekh liya ho,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai… Aj suna hai dilli(Delhi) ko jaanewala hai vo shehjada, Kuch man me.N Thaan liya ho,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai… Uske baad kaise jee pauNgi darti rehti hooN, Vo bhi meri yaad me.N taDpe,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai… Ek jhalak pane ko pahunchi uske ghar chupke se, Usne mujhko dekh liya ho,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai… -Ritu ......Ek Mausam |
Ritu Ji....Namaste ! Aapki tehreer ke ehsaas bahut khoobsurat bane hai...padhke apne se lage....aapki iss peshkash ke Lafz ......kahi mann me Ghar saa kar jaate hai.....
bahut umdaa khayalon ko......seedhe-saadhe lafzon me bayaani .....asardaar lagi mujhe.....aise hi aur bhi behtar ehsaason ke saath likhti rahen..... Yeh do khayaal ... bahut khaas lage mujhe Uske baad kaise jee pauNgi darti rehti hooN, Vo bhi meri yaad me.N taDpe,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai… Ek jhalak pane ko pahunchi uske ghar chupke se, Usne mujhko dekh liya ho,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai… dil se daad hazir hai......qubuul farmaayen.... khush rahen.... apna khayal rakhen... duaaon ke saath.... |
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likha theek ho.......ye bhi ho sakta hai..:confused: nahi yehi hai...likha theeek hai mai galat hu........ye bhi to ho sakta hai magar mai to kabhi galat hota hi nahi:D ab shehzaade sahab dilli pahuch gaye hai....vikasji ko numbar unka de dijiyega... unhe spevial invitation dena hai meeting ka.... dekhte hai tumhari kavita se kitna dimag bhrasT hua hau...damage access karte hai:D phir kahenge tumhare layak hai ke nahi ya badal gaye hai:D |
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Keep writing and sharing... |
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Arrey kaha.N aap mujhe chane ke jhaaD per chaDha rahe hai.N..........??? bahut jyada keh diya aapne. Aapne paDha,Reply kiya accha laga... God Bless You But, Chane ke jhaaD par mat chaDaya kijiye. Aapki Dost, Ritu:) |
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radhe radhe ahsaas bahut sundar hai.......dil se daad hazir hai kubul karen....yun hi likhti rahen duaon ke saath |
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Bahut hi acha likha hai aapne,,,,,,,dil ko chu gai aapki ye koshish...... Ek jhalak pane ko pahunchi uske ghar chupke se, Usne mujhko dekh liya ho,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai… ye uprokat panktiya mujhe behad pasand aai:);-) Aise hi likhte rahiye......!!!! Aapki dost Kavita |
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Bahut Bahut shukriya Apki Dost Ritu:) |
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Hosla afja'ii ka dilse shukriya Khush rahiye, God Bless You apki dost, Ritu:) |
Aj suna hai dilli(Delhi) ko jaanewala hai vo shehjada,
Kuch man me.N Thaan liya ho,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai… This one is best one ................... baki bhi achey hai khayal lekin beech mai kafiyaa hi change kar diyaa aapne .. fir bhi i like really this one .... natural sa thougth hai , mujeh aise sher abhut achy lagte hai, |
lagta hai tuje kisi se pyar ho gaya hai
tabhi to itni achi achi baate bayan karti hai bahut acha likha hai tune khush rehna hamesha tera bhai dinu |
Aj suna hai dilli(Delhi) ko jaanewala hai vo shehjada,
Kuch man me.N Thaan liya ho,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai… AHAAAAN...........hahahaha............:D:) Does this couplet has something to do with the thread..."lets meet everyone".....;) |
yeh bhi to ho sakta hai…
ji nice creation.........................:) |
Ritu Jee Aadab!
Bhai wah wah aur bus wah kahne ko jee chaha raha hai..... :) Kya ahsaas kya andaaz aur kya khoob bayani ki hia aapne.... :) Behad khoob khayaaloN ko lafzoN mein dhala hai aapne....... wakai aap ki is peshkash per dil shaad ho gaya..... :) Dil se daad nikli hia kabool kijiye......:) Aise hi khubsurat kalaam likhati rahiye..... Khush rahiye... Khuda Hafez......:) |
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Khush rahiye God Bless You Aapki dost Ritu |
Apni kaamzaab koshish ko yuN hi adhura maan lia,yeh bhii to ho sakta hai........
Ritu ji......bahut badia qabilay tareef.aisi adhuri gazleiN or nazmeiN agar kuch aur bhii heiN to jhat se post kar deiN. rajinderseep |
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Ehsaaso.N ko likhen me.N kafiye par itna dhyan hi nahi.N diya. Next time dhyan rakhuNgi. Shukriya apna kimti waqt aur ra'i dene ke liye. Dil se shukriya, God Bless You Apki Dost Ritu:) |
bahut khub
ahsas ko bahut hi acha likha dil ko choo gaya daad hajir he sada khush rahe |
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koi hume.N chahe tab to kuch baat bhi ho..." Choti si koShiSh aapko pasaNd aayi,accha laga. Aise hi aate rahiye, God Bless You. Apki Choti Ritu:) |
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bahut khub AHSAS KO ACHE AUR SARAL SABDO ME LIKHA SADA KHUSH RAHO APKI DIDI SHAKUNTALA |
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M damn sure about it......:D;-):p:cool::D |
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God Bless You Thanks again. Apki Dost Ritu:) |
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Aap bhi outstanding reply dene lage.....:D Keep it up......:p:D bahut bahut shukriya........ Apki daad aur daad dene ka style dono.N hi bahut khoob rahe. Khush rahiye God Bless You Apki Dost Ritu:) |
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aapka khayal toh n'ek hai aadhi adhuri ghazals post karne ka par kya karu.N har aadhi adhuri ghazal ko post karna accha nahi.N hota... kaash Ajay jee aur Ghayel sahab ki najar is post par paDhe.. Apke sath ka dil se shukriya, GOd Bless You Ritu |
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Kaisi ho? Aapka reply dekh kar bahut khushi hui aur 2-2 reply dekh kar to aseemit khushi hui KyoNki aisa bahut kam hota hai ke meri post par koi 2 baar reply kare.......:D Sada khush rahiye. Bahut si duao.N ke sath, Apki choti Ritu :) |
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Choo gaye aapke jazbaat-e-dil .. padhke laga shayad aapne apni koi adhuri si chahat likhi ho main ye hi dua karta hoon ke jo aap chahti hain vo aapko mil jaye !! Khuda salamat rakhe.. keep writting !! |
Nice work...............................
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To mohtarma humare sare reply's outstanding hi hote hai....... :p:D Par is reply mein kahiN aur ke jalne ki buu aa rahi hai..... :D Achcha hai! Par aaplog jagaa per badlaa nahi lete yeh bura hai..... :p Jee shukriyaa ...... :) |
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bahut hee badiya lines hain.......... too nice keep it up |
Chupke chupke mujhe dekhna adat me shamil uski,
Mujhko apna maan liya ho,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai…. Meri khushiyo.N ki parwaah mujhse jyada karta hai, Jajbaato.n ko jaan liya ho,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai… ye hi hua hoga pakka... khoob likha afsana . good |
Dear Ritu ma'am
hone ko to kuch bhi ho sakta hai, aapki khush-fahmi bhi :) aur galatfahmi bhi :( khair, aapne likha khoobsurat hai :) dil ki be-qaraari bayaaN ki hai aapne, aapki es confusion ko "yeh bhi to ho sakta hai" woh aakar clear kar hi deN to behtar hai :) aur haan aapki es confusion par woh aapni "HAAN" ki stamp laga deN to hume bhi accha lagega, vaise yeh Mohtarm hai kauN jinka zikar opper kuch dostoN ne bhi kiya hai ;) meri baat ka bura mat maniyega, sabke review padkar hamara bhi dil kiya ki aapse kuch chuhalbaazi ho jaye :p pyar bahre ahsaas hamesha bane raheN....ameeN |
So very well written Ritu ji. Well expressed..:)
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achchhi gazal hai ritu ji ...aisa hi ho
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bahut bahut shukriya apka. Quote:
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hosla-afja'ii ka dil se shukriya. yun hi sath dete rahe.N. Quote:
bahut naTkhat ho aap..........:p thanks for reply. God bless you all. Aapki dost, Ritu:) |
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Ab koi khush ho ya ho khafa..........:D |
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Aap to baksh do....:D:mad::D Vaise abhi tak confusion state hi hai.................... |
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yun hi waqt dete rahjiye Duao.N ke sath, Apki dost Ritu:) |
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Apne ehsaason ko badi khoobsoorti ke saath jis andaaz mein aapne alfaazon mei taraasha hai taareef-e-qabil hai... mohabbat bhari is rachna ko humaare saath share karne ka bahut bahut shukriya... Duaaon k saath.... |
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