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"suna hai tumhari aik nazar se qtal hote hai log, aik nazar hame bhi dekh lo, ki zindgi acchi nahi lagti" -nm |
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aapka behad sukriya Shaad bhai or Sunita ji..
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waaaahhh bahut khub ek se bhad kar ek sher kahe aap sabhi ne.. padh ke dil kush ho gaya bahut..
aaj ka sher.. आईने के सामने खड़े होकर खुद से माफ़ी मांग ली मैंने, सबसे ज़्यादा खुद का ही दिल दुखाया है औरों को खुश करने में.. nm |
Aslam wo keh rha hai apne dard mujhko de Dar bhi raha hu.n aur diye jar aha hun mein -noor_noor(Aslam ji) |
Waaaaaahhh! Tabaah jii aur sunita dii bahut khoob sher share kiye aap dono ne....
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Baat karni mujhe mushkil kabhi aisi to na thi..
jaisi ab hai teri mahfil kabhi aisi to na thi.. (Bahadur shah zafar..) |
Tum aaye ho tumhe bhi aazma ke dekh leta hoon.
tumhare sath bhi kuch door jake dekh leta hoon. NM |
muddat huii ke dil meraa dha.Dkaa bhii nahi hai,
shaayad ise bhii teriii zaruurat nahii rahee......!! Shaad... |
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Behad khoob sher hua hai janaab. kamaal bas kamaal |
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"tumne to rula kar hi rakh diya eh zindgi, ja kar pooch meri Maa se kitne laadley thy ham" -nm |
waah SuNita ji, Shaad bhai, or Madhu ji bahut ache sher pesh kiye apne..
har ek sher apne aap m kimti hai aaj ka sher.. Talash sirf sukunn ki hoti hai, naam rishtey ka chahe kuch bhi ho.. तलाश सिर्फ सुकून की होती हैं, नाम रिश्ते का चाहें कुछ भी हो.. nm |
Dil waloN ki mehfil me hai kisko sukooN hasil,
K dil aur sukooN ki humne kabhi bante nahi dekhi Bhushan joshi |
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Aaj ka sher
Doston,
Aaj ka sher..... इन हौंसले को संभालो यह बिगड़ जाएंगे यह इश्क़ है इससे हम बाज़ कहा आएंगे |
Waaaaaaaahhhhh....kya khoob sher kahe bhushan ji aur mast ji.....bahut khoob!!
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bahut bahut shukrguzaar hoon aap sabkaa jo aapne mere sher ko pasand kiyaa.......
aur aage badhte hi jaise nazar gayee Bhushan ji aur mast bhai ke sher pe to yaqaayaq hi waahhhh nikal gaya...... bahut khoob sher hue hain.. likhte arhiyee Shaad.... |
ek mausam zindagee kaa aapke sang kyaa huaa,
baaad uske saare mausam aapkii yaadon ke they... Shaad.... |
Mast bhai, Sameer bhai aur Madhu ji....aap sab ki housala afazai ka tahe sil se shukriya....
Mast ji bohot hi joshila sher likha aapne....aur Sameer bhai mausam jaroor badlega |
Gum-e-ulfat mein zindagi bitaye tw kaise ,
Teri chahat mein zindagi bitaye tw kaise, Tum khti ho k bhool jao mujhe, Tum hi btao teri yaad ko seene se mitaye tw kaise.... |
Ham bhi qayel haiN wafa-e-ustawari ke magar
Koi pooche kon kis ko um'r bhar acha laga Ahmed 'faraz' |
Aaj kaa sher.....
gar tumko taras aa rahaa hai haal par mere, shamsheer pe de marenge sar apnaa khud hi ham.... Shaad..... |
[QUOTE=sameer'shaad';479491]Aaj kaa sher.....
[B][I]gar tumko taras aa rahaa hai haal par mere, shamsheer pe de marenge sar apnaa khud hi ham.... Waaaaaahhhh! Shaad ji....sher me jo josh aur andaaz hain ki bas...bolta huye alfaz ho jaise bahut asardaar......bahut sari daad is behtareen sher par.... Likhte rahein... |
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Madhu ji aur Bhushan saahab...... tahe dil se mashkoor hoon aapkaa jo aapko ye kalaam pasand aayaa......
Shaad..... |
Younhi mosam ki ada dekh ke yaad aya hai
Kis kadar jald badal jaate hein insaan janaan.. (Ahmed faraz) |
karuu.N na yaad magar kis tarah bhulaa_uu.N use
Gazal bahaanaa karuu.N aur gun_gunaa_uu.N use Ahmed Faraz |
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ishQ ki misaal meiN bus itna hi kaheN ge!
be-misaal saza hai yeh be-gunahoN ke liye... (not mine) |
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shukriya hassan ji... |
"mohabat ke baad mohabat mumkin hai "Faraz" magar toot kar chahna sirf aik baar hota hai" -Ahmad Faraz |
paani ki rawani dekh kar mujhe wo yaad aa jata hai,
chehra hi mukar diya mera pani ki lahron ki tarah.... |
aap sab users mujhe bata sakte hain ke aap sab online kab milte hain....
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समझदार मैं एक हूँ बाक़ी सब नादान, इसी भरम में आजकल घूम रहा इंसान.. nm |
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"khusboo ki tarah aaya wo tez hawaoN meiN, maanga tha jise hamne din-raat duaoN meiN" -Bashir Badr |
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