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Ahmad Hyderabadi 16th October 2014 05:30 AM

Time To Raise The Bar Mate!!!
 


Time To Raise The Bar mate...



Time to raise the bar mate
Look beyond the war mate!
Needn't look too far mate,
You too can be a star mate!


Stop being a judge mate,
Stop holding the grudge mate!
Something you don't like mate,
Doesn't mean you strike mate!


Planet is our home mate,
All are free to roam mate!
Nobody owns the land mate,
Time to change ya stand mate!


Not everybody's same mate,
Life is not a game mate!
None else to blame mate,
Own up with ya name mate!



.........................................
Ahmad Hyderabadi

maikasH 16th October 2014 03:12 PM

Bravo!! Ahmad bhai

applaud you for this wonderful piece, very well said, indeed

maikash

Hamdam 16th October 2014 11:46 PM

Ahmad bhai ...

I wish we were schoolmate :)

beautiful poem ..
Life is not game mate ,
own.it with ya name mate..

really good ...

Sanjay Sehgal

Ahmad Hyderabadi 24th October 2014 06:19 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by maikasH (Post 470207)
Bravo!! Ahmad bhai

applaud you for this wonderful piece, very well said, indeed

maikash

Aadaab Maikash Bhaee!!

Woww!! Kya baat haye...... bhaee my effort's been rewarded many times over!! Aapki daad dil kay qareeb janaab!! Bayhad mashkoor wa mamnoon hoon aapka!! Thanks Heaps Bhaee!! :)

Duago
Ahmad

Ahmad Hyderabadi 24th October 2014 06:21 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hamdam (Post 470249)
Ahmad bhai ...

I wish we were schoolmate :)

beautiful poem ..
Life is not game mate ,
own.it with ya name mate..

really good ...

Sanjay Sehgal

Aadaab Sehgal Saahab!

So very kind of you Sir to appreciate this tiny effort!! Sir I do wish You were my schoolmate too... but I wasn' even born Sir when u were already writing your gems of poetry!! much obliged! Thanks once again....Sir!


Duago
Ahmad

sameer'shaad' 24th October 2014 09:53 AM

Ahmed bhai aadaab..... what a poetry, what a work bhai.

do keep writing....

Shaad....

sameer'shaad' 24th October 2014 09:53 AM

Ahmed bhai aadaab..... what a poetry, what a work bhai.

do keep writing....

Shaad....

bhushan 5th December 2014 07:52 PM

Very beautiful poem........usually we see preaching is done upside down from the elders or the saints to the youngers or to the people on the lower stratum on Spiritual lines......but here it came from a mate...

Good work mate......

With best regards.

Bhushan joshi


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