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K@J@L 29th April 2005 09:34 AM

Dosti ke unkahe rishte!!!!!!!!!
 
hye all...
my this thought is dedicate to all friends round the world,who has good friends,and who feel the friendsheep as miracle.....

Dosto ko bhulana aasaan hota hoga
Dosti ko bhulana aasaan nahi yaaro!!!

Kuch lamho ki narazagi par ruthana aasaan hota hoga
Dil main base lamho ko bhulana aasaan nahi yaaro!!!

Sabdo se teer chalana aasaan hota hoga
pyaar bhare sabdo ko bhulana aasaan nahi yaaro!!!

bichadne ki baat karna aasaan hota hoga
bichad kar gam sehna aasaan nahi yaaro!!!

Galtiyo ko dohrana aasaan hota hoga
use samaj kar sahi raah chalna aasaan nahi yaaro!!!

ek lakdi ko kaatna aasaan hota hoga
bandhi hui lakdi ki mazbuti ko lalkarna aasaan nahi yaaro!!!

bichadne ke liye Dil par chubhe hue gamo ko yaad karna aasaan hota hoga
bichadne ke baad pyaar se baate hue lamho ko yaad karna aasaan nahi yaaro!!!

KYA GAM HAI TUJHE,KYA BHUL HAI HAMARI,KYA BAAT HAI TERI,KYA BAAT HAI HAMARI,in sawalo ko sochna aasaan hai dost,
Par inka jawab dhundhana aasaan nahi yaaro!!!

Ek haath badhake sir ko jhukana mere liye aasaan hai dost
par is haath par apna haath rakh kar is sir ko jhukane se pehle hi chumna tere liye aur bhi aasaan hai Dost!!!

NA HUM KEHTE HAI KI BHUL HUI AAPSE
HUM BHI APNI HARKAT PE JAB HUE Sharminda
IN Sharmindiyo ko baatna aasaaan hai yaaro!!!!!!!!!!!!


:) :) :)

K@J@L 5th May 2005 10:37 PM

hello friends....

mere thought itne bhi bure nahi hai ki aap me se koi ek reply bhi nahi bhej raha....

anyway ill try my level best in my coming nagma.....named....uski ek jhalak pesh kar rahi hoon....

"PYAR-Ek Ehsaas.....Dil se Dil Tak"

Chaand 6th May 2005 12:44 PM

Dosto ko bhulana aasaan hota hoga
Dosti ko bhulana aasaan nahi yaaro!!!


Dosti...ek jazba hai...koi vyaktivishesh nahi...so...sahi kaha aapne ise bhulaya nahi jaa sakta.


Sabdo se teer chalana aasaan hota hoga
pyaar bhare sabdo ko bhulana aasaan nahi yaaro!!!


Ye kahi na baat aapne pate ki.....ye shaayad mere liye theek hai...:) ...kyoNki wakai ..baat keh dena ek alag baat hai per ...un shabdoN ki gehraai mehsoos karna or bhula dena bahut mushkil hai.

Galtiyo ko dohrana aasaan hota hoga
use samaj kar sahi raah chalna aasaan nahi yaaro!!!


Galati ekbaar ho to maaf kar do
Galati do baar ho to samjha do...
per galti baar baar ho ...to dekho....ke kaheeN ye aapka charitra hi to nahi ban gaya hai.

(kisi mahaan lekhak ne likha hai)

or aapne jo kaha....mai salaam karta hooN use....per sachmuch galatiyaaN samajhne ke baat unhe theek karna itna mushkil kyoN hota hai...ye samajh nahi paya (shaayad hamaare aatmbal ki kami)....or aatmbal...wo kahaaN se aata hai...(pata nahi).


NA HUM KEHTE HAI KI BHUL HUI AAPSE
HUM BHI APNI HARKAT PE JAB HUE Sharminda
IN Sharmindiyo ko baatna aasaaan hai yaaro!!!!!!!!!!!!


Ji....kya baat hai ek gaane ke bol yaad aa gaye...

Yaar hamaari baat suno ...eisa ik insaan chuno...
Jisne paap na kiya ho...jo paapi na ho....

(from : Roti)
per eccept karna kuchh mushkil hoga hai is baat ko.


aapke ye Vichaar bahut pasand aaye Kajal ji....

per kuchh kehna chaahuNga aap hi nahi baaki sabhi dostoN se bhi....(bura na maaniyega).

yahaaN sab dostoN ka apna apna taste hai...jiyaadatar log...ishq or Dard section hi parhte haiN....so kai baar baaki forum ki posts per kam hi reply padte haiN....so kam reply milna ya reply na milna ye nahi darshata ki aap achchha nahi likhte....chance ki baat hoti hai ..kai baar achchhi post nazroN se nikal jaati hai.

so ...aap bas likhiye...ye mat sochiye ki kitne reply padte haiN aapki rachnaaoN per....kyoNki aapki kaabliyat...aap jaanti haiN....doosroN ko judge banaaeiNgi...to aasha ke saath niraasha bhi mil sakti hai....ham aaine isi liye dekhte haiN...kyonki jaante haiN wo hame hamari asli soorat dikhaate haiN...doosre galti kar sakte haiN...per aaine galati nahi karte.

(Tu bas Karam kiye ja, fal ki Ichchha ko tyaag de ey Insaan.)

(from : Holy Geeta...by Krishna)

Veise ham insaanoN ke liye ye kuchh mushkil hai..mujh to yahi lagta hai....:D ...per chhoti chhoti koshisheiN to kar hi sakte haiN ham bhi.

Take care...

Khush raho...YooNhi likhte raho.

Chaand

K@J@L 8th May 2005 10:46 AM

:) hye chaand!!!!!!!!

sabse pahle to aapka bahot bahot sukriya ki aapne mujhe itna pyaar bhara reply bheja:)

actually when i wrote this DOSTI thought,i thought ill get good replys from all my friends of this section...
kyonki is shayri ko maine apne dil se likha hai, to jab mujhe ek bhi reply na mile to thoda bura laga LEKIN NOW I AM HAPPY AUR AAPKA TAHE DIL SE MAIN SUKRIYA KARTI HU YE SAMJHANE KE LIYE
"HUMESA APNA KARM KARNA CHAHIYE AUR PHAL KI ICCHA USPE CHOD DENI CHAHIYE"

WAISE IS SHAYRI KI MEHFILO MAIN ABHI TO MAINE SIRF EK HI KADAM BADHAYA HAI AGAR AAP JAISE DOSTON KA SAATH RAHA TO MANZIL DUR NAHI.....:)

aur aaj ke baad main kabhi is baare main sikayat nahi karungi.....


thank you so much......................

kush001 8th May 2005 01:13 PM

UFFFF
KAJOLJI
DOSTI KE UNKAHE RISHTEY KYA BBAT LIKHI HAI AAPNE REALLY MERE PASS SHABD NAHI THIS THE BEST WORDS I HAVE EVER READ IN THIS PORTAL KEEEP IT UP

KEEP WRITING

$hivani 10th May 2005 05:45 PM

hi
 
hi k@j@l!!!!!!!!!
i came here after a long time and urs is the first poetry i read...........its a very very beautiful composition.....hope u will write more and more.....

K@J@L 29th May 2005 09:41 AM

hye shivani

thank you so much for ur beautiful reply.........
just keep in touch.....:)

meena chheda 1st June 2005 03:54 PM

Re: Dosti ke unkahe rishte!!!!!!!!!
 
Quote:

Originally posted by K@J@L
hye all...
my this thought is dedicate to all friends round the world,who has good friends,and who feel the friendsheep as miracle.....

Dosto ko bhulana aasaan hota hoga
Dosti ko bhulana aasaan nahi yaaro!!!

Kuch lamho ki narazagi par ruthana aasaan hota hoga
Dil main base lamho ko bhulana aasaan nahi yaaro!!!

Sabdo se teer chalana aasaan hota hoga
pyaar bhare sabdo ko bhulana aasaan nahi yaaro!!!

bichadne ki baat karna aasaan hota hoga
bichad kar gam sehna aasaan nahi yaaro!!!

Galtiyo ko dohrana aasaan hota hoga
use samaj kar sahi raah chalna aasaan nahi yaaro!!!

ek lakdi ko kaatna aasaan hota hoga
bandhi hui lakdi ki mazbuti ko lalkarna aasaan nahi yaaro!!!

bichadne ke liye Dil par chubhe hue gamo ko yaad karna aasaan hota hoga
bichadne ke baad pyaar se baate hue lamho ko yaad karna aasaan nahi yaaro!!!

KYA GAM HAI TUJHE,KYA BHUL HAI HAMARI,KYA BAAT HAI TERI,KYA BAAT HAI HAMARI,in sawalo ko sochna aasaan hai dost,
Par inka jawab dhundhana aasaan nahi yaaro!!!

Ek haath badhake sir ko jhukana mere liye aasaan hai dost
par is haath par apna haath rakh kar is sir ko jhukane se pehle hi chumna tere liye aur bhi aasaan hai Dost!!!

NA HUM KEHTE HAI KI BHUL HUI AAPSE
HUM BHI APNI HARKAT PE JAB HUE Sharminda
IN Sharmindiyo ko baatna aasaaan hai yaaro!!!!!!!!!!!!


:) :) :)


priy kajal,

maan mai aaj subah se dosti ke ahesaas oomad rahe thhe... kai chhoti chhoti galtiya khud ki nazar aa rahi hai..
aankho mai nami hai, dil mai dosti hai... aur .....
khaire....

bahut hi khubsurat andaaj mai dosti k maaine bayaan kiye hai tumne...
humesha isi tarah share karti rahna humare sath tumhare ahesaas

meena

K@J@L 24th June 2005 11:25 PM

:) hye Meena,

thank you so much for apriciating my work

aksay1 31st March 2006 12:44 PM

pyaari si shayri pyaari ladki ke liye
 
Hoton pe aaye jo ghare sunhare ye who lawz the tum ko the khene magar jab ye dekha ke kuch tum na bole to hum hi kya khete hum the akel

Saari jindgi koi kisi ka saath nahin deta ye to main bhi janta hoon magar kuch door to saath chal sakti ho

shayar_abhishek 1st April 2006 10:54 AM

nice:)

surbhi_lov1 3rd April 2006 07:21 PM

hi kajal
nice very nice sach dosti ke ye rishte unkahe hi hote hai
bye

shahzad20 26th July 2006 12:38 PM

VERY GOOD
 
HI,
BAHOT KHUB
LIKHA TUMNE
I HOPE U WILL BE SEND MORE . AND WOULD BE VERY GOOD.



duaaon ki bheerh main ik dua humari hogi,
jis main mangi khushi hum ne tumharee hogi,j
ab bhi koi khushi miley aapko,
samjho dua kubool humari hogi


TAKE CARE
AND REPLY

WAITING.............

BYE

gulzaar Jr 26th July 2006 03:35 PM

hii
That was fantastic. It goes to show that creativity has no age. Keep up the good work. God bless - Krishnan

mateen 27th July 2006 06:09 PM

leher aati hai aur kinare se simat jati hai
yaad aati hai aur dil me bas jati hai
fark itna hai ki lehar be waqt aati hai
aur yaad her waqt aati hai........!




ab aur hame kisi ko apne ki hasrat nahi
kisi ke pyar me mar jane ki zaroorat nahi
kyun ki app jaisa dost hame jabe se mila
hai kisi aur ko dost banane ki fursat nahi.....!






FOR U PLS REPLY

mateen 27th July 2006 06:13 PM

bahoot door hai hamare ghar se
tumhare ghar ka kinara per hum
puch lete hai hawa se HAAL PATA tumhara...!

dheerendra 3rd January 2007 05:24 PM

Sukriya bahut hi acchi baat apne kahi hai.
keep it on.

maine kabhi neeche di hui lines likhin thi aur chahte the ki aise logon ko bhool jayen par apne sahi likha hai ki bahut mushkil hota hai bhulana.

" Dosti ke mayne badal rahe hain log
haath main khanjar liye hhgoom rahe hain log
mauka mile to pyar karte hain log
na mile to vaar kartein hain log
phir bhi aise pyar ko dilon main basaye
na jaane kyon ghoom rahe hain log
"

Thanks

rajeshtnp 5th May 2007 08:16 PM

nice shayri
 
This is a very nice shayri and i like it very much.

rajesh

my this thought is dedicate to all friends round the world,who has good friends,and who feel the friendsheep as miracle.....

Dosto ko bhulana aasaan hota hoga
Dosti ko bhulana aasaan nahi yaaro!!!

Kuch lamho ki narazagi par ruthana aasaan hota hoga
Dil main base lamho ko bhulana aasaan nahi yaaro!!!

Sabdo se teer chalana aasaan hota hoga
pyaar bhare sabdo ko bhulana aasaan nahi yaaro!!!

bichadne ki baat karna aasaan hota hoga
bichad kar gam sehna aasaan nahi yaaro!!!

Galtiyo ko dohrana aasaan hota hoga
use samaj kar sahi raah chalna aasaan nahi yaaro!!!

ek lakdi ko kaatna aasaan hota hoga
bandhi hui lakdi ki mazbuti ko lalkarna aasaan nahi yaaro!!!

bichadne ke liye Dil par chubhe hue gamo ko yaad karna aasaan hota hoga
bichadne ke baad pyaar se baate hue lamho ko yaad karna aasaan nahi yaaro!!!

KYA GAM HAI TUJHE,KYA BHUL HAI HAMARI,KYA BAAT HAI TERI,KYA BAAT HAI HAMARI,in sawalo ko sochna aasaan hai dost,
Par inka jawab dhundhana aasaan nahi yaaro!!!

Ek haath badhake sir ko jhukana mere liye aasaan hai dost
par is haath par apna haath rakh kar is sir ko jhukane se pehle hi chumna tere liye aur bhi aasaan hai Dost!!!

NA HUM KEHTE HAI KI BHUL HUI AAPSE
HUM BHI APNI HARKAT PE JAB HUE Sharminda
IN Sharmindiyo ko baatna aasaaan hai yaaro!!!!!!!!!!!!


:) :) :)[/quote]

shaminder 23rd October 2007 08:57 AM

Hello everyone i am new here in this site. I want to share my thoughts and facts of life with you guys.
Life is a gift of GOD, but most of us we didn't know about this thing.

Jehra Rejhan Naal Puroea "HAAR" Ta Ohnu Kehnde Nay,
Jehra Musibat Wich Khar Javay "YAAR" Ta Ohnu Kehnde Nay,
Jehra Panni Wang Pavitar Hovay "PYAR" Ta Ohnu Kehnde Nay,

shaminder 23rd October 2007 08:59 AM

Zakham jab meray senay k bhar aayengay,
Aaansu bhi moti ban kar bhikhar aayengay,
Yeh mat puchna kis-kis nay dhokhay diye,
Warna kuch aapno k bhi chehray utar aayengay.

krenil 27th October 2007 02:33 AM

hi kajal i am krenil
 
tum bahut achha likhti ho maine paheli bar tumhari shayri padhi hai
this is for you
khuda se pani manga to sagar diya
phul manga to bagicha diya
ghar manga to mahel diya
paisa manga to aapka number diya
to kab aau paise lene

nihar 4th November 2007 07:28 PM

wah Wah Wah
bus Yahi Alfaz Nikal Rahe He
aap Ne Kya Likha He
bus Aap Ko Salam Kar Rahe He


very Nice Keep Sending
your Friend Nihar

waiting For Your New Post
plz Send Me Your Post Through Pm

Arshiyan 9th November 2007 12:22 AM

Highly positive towards........
 
Roz Taaron Ki Numayeesh mein khalal Padta Hain,
Chand Pagal Hai Akele hi Safar Pe nikal Padta Hai,
Yunhi Aankon mein Mein Gujar Jati Hai Raat Sari,
Ab To Neend Bhi Dekh Hume Rukh Badal Leta Hai

amrit_762 13th November 2007 06:48 PM

asqui aag hai daman bachaye rakhna, na milana kisi se nazrein-2 jhukaye rakhna.
baat-2 mein ban jaye na koi afsana, na vicky ke siwa kisi or ki rah mein ankhien bichaye rakhna...

amrit_762 13th November 2007 06:55 PM

no way
 
jitni bhi tarif ki jaye aapki shyari ki utni hi kam hai , ur very good .i like it love u

amrit_762 13th November 2007 07:24 PM

no way
 
asqui aag hai daman bachaye rakhna, na milana kisi se nazrein-2 jhukaye rakhna.
baat-2 mein ban jaye na koi afsana, na vicky ke siwa kisi or ki rah mein ankhien bichaye rakhna...

crezy_rafik 18th November 2007 02:05 PM

bewafai
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by K@J@L (Post 128142)
hello friends....

mere thought itne bhi bure nahi hai ki aap me se koi ek reply bhi nahi bhej raha....

anyway ill try my level best in my coming nagma.....named....uski ek jhalak pesh kar rahi hoon....

"PYAR-Ek Ehsaas.....Dil se Dil Tak"

apno ne zahar ja jam dediya,gairon ne bewafa naam de diya,woh kahte hai ki bhul na jana hame ,aaj unho ne hi bhari mahfil mai anjaan kah diya

crezy_rafik 18th November 2007 02:09 PM

apno ne zahar ja jam dediya,gairon ne bewafa naam de diya,woh kahte hai ki bhul na jana hame ,aaj unho ne hi bhari mahfil mai anjaan kah diya

Govind143 11th December 2007 02:10 PM

Sory but this is also my feelings.

Suna hai yeh doston ke baare me,
meri kismat ke phool hain ye log,
jab bhi dete hain zakhm dete hain,
is kadar bausool hain yeh log,
dusmano ne to dusmani ki hai,
doston ne bhi kya kami ki hai.

Govind143 11th December 2007 02:19 PM

dosti
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by $hivani (Post 129318)
hi k@j@l!!!!!!!!!
i came here after a long time and urs is the first poetry i read...........its a very very beautiful composition.....hope u will write more and more.....

Suna hai yeh doston ke bare me, meri kismat ke phool hain yeh log.
Jab bhi dete hain zakhm dete hai, is kadar bausool hain yeh log,
dusmano ne to dusmani ki hai, doston ne bhi kya kami ki hai.

SinnerX 23rd December 2007 08:15 PM

"...Achi soorton wale meri tasbeeh ke daane hai...,
Nazron mai firte rehte hai, ibadat hoti rehti hai..."

SAMEER RUBI 30th January 2008 11:50 PM

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SAMEER RUBI 30th January 2008 11:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SAMEER RUBI (Post 268069)
Jnnejbhibjwbjlhlber

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narayan_p88 17th February 2008 10:54 PM

:)
:)
hiiiiiii
phul me gulab accha lagata he,
nindo me khwab acchs lagata he.
Aap hamesha phulo ki tarah hasate rahiye,
apke hasane ka andaz hame accha lagta he.

this is for u..
can u make friendship with me?

byee

narayan_p88 17th February 2008 11:12 PM

just joke
 
i was cooking chicken when i added hara DHANIYA
duess what heppand?

chicken started dancing n sisging "HAM PE YE KISNE HARA RANG DALA...MAR DALA...MAR DALA..
NARAYAN:)
:)

narayan_p88 2nd March 2008 10:05 PM

gf
 
i was cooking chicken when i added hara DHANIYA
duess what heppand?

chicken started dancing n sisging "HAM PE YE KISNE HARA RANG DALA...MAR DALA...MAR dala

Raj Ausekar 17th March 2008 08:27 PM

Hamre baare main hum kuch nahin jante kyoun ki hum hamre
nahin rahe....
sirf use hi yaad karte hain jisne hume yaadon ke sune sune jangal main akela chod diya....
hamara safar abhi bhi jari hain
rasta hain magar manzil nahin hain koi....
sirf chalte raho chalte raho
is safar main mera makam na koi....

G_Hemant 29th April 2008 04:11 PM

:)Hi.

$hivani ji,

Mai naya hoo "shayri.com" me ..... tarif karna bhi nahi sikha...... par thaks for writing this shayri. wakai aapne tarif-e-kabil likha hai.

thanks

Hemant

prateek 7th August 2008 02:00 PM

shayri kya hoti hai yeh toh hume nahin pata bus dosti ka naam sunna toh apne aap join ho gaya

vikram badshah 27th September 2008 10:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by meena chheda (Post 134235)
priy kajal,

maan mai aaj subah se dosti ke ahesaas oomad rahe thhe... kai chhoti chhoti galtiya khud ki nazar aa rahi hai..
aankho mai nami hai, dil mai dosti hai... aur .....
khaire....

bahut hi khubsurat andaaj mai dosti k maaine bayaan kiye hai tumne...
humesha isi tarah share karti rahna humare sath tumhare ahesaas

meena

BAHUT HI KHOOBSURAT TAREEKE SE DOSTI KI AHMIYAT BATAI HAI APNE


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