for all gujarati
Tu jiyan jay chhe, hun te badha ma chhu
pan kai nakki nathi hu sama chhu aam bandhayeli fhhu astitva ma tara aam humukt chhu, hawa ma chhu Tu bandh aankhe khole koi kitaab tu vanche chhe te katha ma chhu Tu chale chhe te gati j nahi Tu thobhe chhe te jagah ma chhu Tu jage chhe te samaj chhu hu Tu unge chhe te nisha ma chhu Tari aankho no prem chhu hu Tu ruthe chhe te khafa ma chhu Tara wicharo no ansh chhu hu Tu bole chhe te sabdo ma chhu Tu anubhave te sugandh bhini Tara manita ful ma chhu Tu swase chhe te swas swas Tu jive chhe te sada ma chhu Have to mane pan khabar nathi Tari mate hu kyaN kyaN chhu -sanam gujarati;-) |
Great
Hello,
Your post was great. I liked it very much..Bahu saras vichaaron no bahu saras sher.. But friend, you should not have written " For all Gujarati ". I know that you wrote it innocently.,today you have written "for all gujarati", tomorrow somebody will write " for all Hindis" and then " for all Indians " and " for all americans" and on and on it will go... At shayri.com we all are one family and whole world is our home,so we should not divide it among ourselves... I am sorry if i wrote anything wrong or if i hurt you..Do forgive me if so..But i liked your poem ..it was great.. Bye Take care Hamza |
TASLIM
assalamo alaykum
dear hamja, thanks for reading my share. I wrote "for all gujarati" because the sher is in gujarati and any other person may not understand it. And when we can not understand something, we take that thing as "rubbish" and i don't want to make that thing. That's y i wrote "for all gujarati" because if any one is interested in it,he or she will definately read it. Ur thinking of "one family" is really nice. I appreciate u. Again thanks for reading bye and take care sanam |
A re re...
W.Salam,
I am very very sorry for my previous post..Really..See I wrote that because whever i go or whenever i meet any person on net..They say "you are gujarati..that heartless people who make different classes of people among themselves"...I cant bear this. So i insisted on not making any class here on shayri.com..I wrote it just as what it came in my heart..I am sorry if i hurt your feelings..I will tell you one thing that " Aapne humein samjhaane mein bahut thande dimaag se kaam liya iska shukriya. " Your post was great.. I come again and again to read your post..Thank you..reply ki ummeed rahengi... Bye Take care Hamza... |
no prob
assalam alaykum
Thanks for ur message. Well muje itna bura nahi laga jitna aapne sincerely and seriously likha hai.Actually that ppl r crazy who departs people in cast,religious and so on... But we should not take thing so seriously. There r diff ppl in this huge world.So they got diff thinking and so we have to face it. But so wat. TENSION NAEE LENE KA! Again thaks for reading my poem okay bye and take care sanam |
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