yaad aaungi....................
*** yaad aaungi *** tum meri hasti ki haqiqat naa bhula paoge, mujh jaisa kisi aur ko paoge to yaad aaungi, humne saath saath bitaye hai kai mausam, yaadon ke panne gar paltoge to yaad aaungi, sard raaton ke mehekte hue sannaton me, koi haseen khwaab sajaoge to yaad aaungi, meri aankho ke jugnu dil tera lubhate the, sham dhale jab diye jalaoge to yaad aaungi, isi andaaz me hote the mukhatib mujhse bhi, pyaar se gale kisi ko lagaoge to yaad aaungi, khushbu se meri behekta tha chanchal mann tera, kisi dilnashi phool ko chumoge to yaad aaungi, tumhare ashk mai apne honto se chura leti thi, apne haathon se khud inhe pochoge to yaad aaungi, saawan ke mausam me baahon me muje kas lena, baarishon me akele jab bhigoge to yaad aaungi, dard-e-zindagi se kabhi tum hoke nidhaal, kisi deewar ko jab thamoge to yaad aaungi, yaaron ki mehfil pe hai aaj ghuroor bahut, jab kabhi tut ke bikhroge to yaad aaungi, |
Lamha,
Just one word...................... Amazing........ :) How can u write such beautiful dear..... Let me know the secret??? ...........Keep writing Sweety......... God bless you!! Purvi |
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i like it. it's gooooood & full of dard,, keep it up |
haaye kya likha hai, seedha dil me utar gaya................ waise woh kon kambakht hai jisne apko bhulne ki bewakufi kari hai, par is poem ka ek-ek shabd seedha dil me utar jaata, itna dard....................itna gussa......................sach kahun, yeh apki likhi hui ab tak ki sabse best poem hai........................ The Only word to describe it is "Qatil"...............Kya "Qatil" likha hai apne............
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very good lamha jee,
its really very fantastic, sach mein aapne kuch beete pal yaad dila diye.... Its awesome... Bilkul dil se nikli hui....Great feelings...Ab shabd nahin hain .... |
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sard raaton ke mehekte hue sannaton me, koi haseen khwaab sajaoge to yaad aaungi, meri aankho ke jugnu dil tera lubhate the, sham dhale jab diye jalaoge to yaad aaungi, isi andaaz me hote the mukhatib mujhse bhi, pyaar se gale kisi ko lagaoge to yaad aaungi, khushbu se meri behekta tha chanchal mann tera, kisi dilnashi phool ko chumoge to yaad aaungi, tumhare ashk mai apne honto se chura leti thi, apne haathon se khud inhe pochoge to yaad aaungi, saawan ke mausam me baahon me muje kas lena, baarishon me akele jab bhigoge to yaad aaungi, dard-e-zindagi se kabhi tum hoke nidhaal, kisi deewar ko jab thamoge to yaad aaungi, yaaron ki mehfil pe hai aaj ghuroor bahut, [/quote]jab kabhi tut ke bikhroge to yaad aaungi, Well........ Sabse pehle to tum jaise pyari si dost ko bhool kaun sakta hai......... ! jo bhoolega woh sabse bada duffer hoga....... aur lamha....... as baqs always says, jyada gamgeen mat likha karo................... :D one sher for you :p Lamhe judai ke bekarar karte hai, Halaat mere mujhe lachaar karte hai, Nazro ko padhlo kabhi, khud hi pata chal jayega, Kitna pyar aapse karte hai |
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Achi tarha chori karti hoooo..........:p phir usko modify bhi karti hooo :rolleyes: Har pal guzre ga udaasi ka to yaad aaoon ga Roothe ga jab koi tum se to yaad aaoon ga Kabhie kabhie khushi se tum muskuraaoo gi tum Dekho gi phir aaina to yaad aaoo.n ga Jab kisi din pao gi mujhe khuwaab mein Bedaar hogi jab neend se to yaad aaoo.n ga Rooth kar kisi se jab tum udaas betho gi Na manaye ga tumhein koi to yaad aaoo.n ga Jab kehna chaho gi kisi se apne dil ki baat Na mile ga tumhein koi to yaad aaoo.n ga Anjaane mein daairi ke warq jab bikhrein ge Sameto gi jab tum unhein to yaad aaoo.n ga Logo.n ke hujoom mein tum shayad mujhe bhool jao Per baitho gi jab tanhaa to yaad aaoo.n ga Hum na hoon ge to kon hansaaye ga tumhein Dukhe ga jab dil tumhara to yaad aaoo.n ga Kis kis se chupaaoo gi tum apna Haal-e-Dil Pooche ga koi daastaan to yaad aaoo.n ga :D |
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Well Lamha that ghazal (original) was for you from the person above me....hahaha :D
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it's not funny BAQZ.............................................. ..............:mad::mad: |
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is ghazal ka meri ghazal se koi lene dena hi nahi hai...iske ehsaas aur meri ghazal ke ehsaas me zameen aasmaan ka fark hai.....BAQZ....maine apni ghazal bahut dil se aur mehnat se likhi hai, hosake to thodi izzat karna sikho....:( tumhare reply ka shukriya....................... |
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Zameen Asmaan ke farqq dooor se dekhne par kahin doooor ek hojate hai , u can see zameen aur aasmaan meeting in somplace.... tou wohi concept par tou ye ghazal nahi churai na (Ooops tumhare dil se likhe ehsaaaaas) hahaha |
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:mad::mad::mad::mad::mad::mad::mad:.................................................. ............................................. |
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Aihai... ab photo ley lo apne " I phone " se khud ki phir mujhe mail kar deyna..... :p :D |
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leave that thread |
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:mad::mad::mad::mad::mad:......................... .................................................. .................. |
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Cuz mujhse koi kuch ho..... I JUST DONT CARE.....hahaha :p |
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mai kisi ki LAMHA nahi hu....SHAAN bhi sab ki tarah mera dost hai....samjhe??.............now just shut up...............:mad::mad: |
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(it seems somebody is jealous here) :D:p |
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:p :p :p |
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thank u sooooooooooooo much diiiiiiiiiii............aap khud ek bahut achchi shayara hai , mai aapko kya secret batau diiiii....yuhi apna saath aur pyaar banaye rakhiyega.............thanx a ton....:):):) |
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shukriya RANI........yaha aake muje padhne ka bahut bahut shukriya dear............keep coming......:):) |
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'Qatil' to aap ka reply hai dear......izzat afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya NALIN........shayri me thoda sa dard mil jaye to uska mazaa hi kuch aur hota hai...hai na??....yuhi apna saath banaye rakhna dost.......:):) |
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thank u soooooooooooooo much ARU.....meri is ghazal ko padh kar agar aapko beete pal yaad aagaye to isse bada compliment aur koi ho hi nahi sakta dear....yuhi saath dete rehna....thanx a ton..:):):) |
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thank u soooooooo much sweetie......tumhe ye ehsaas pasand aaye, meri mehnat safal ho gayi...yuhi apna saath aur pyaar muj par banaye rakhna dear..........take care sweetie....:):):) |
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saath dene ka bahut bahut shukriya dear............itna pyara sher likhne ka bhi shukriya SHAAN............yuhi saath dete rehna.....:):) |
Dear Lamha.........
Really it's a amazing poetry... Aisa laga dear ke tumne zindagi ka har khushgawar aur memorable yaadon ko yaad kar kar yeh creation kii hai... So superB.. Now really aisa lag raha hai... ke mere alfaz tarif nahi kar payenge............ It's so sweet and nice post dear...... Keep writting Keep Up... Quote:
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Andaze bayan ek hua to ehsaas bhi ek hi nazar aa rahe hai aapko....... Kahir koi baat nahi... per sudhar jaiye Bhai Bus yehi chahunga...................... |
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Cuz am just wondering... mujhe Sudhar ke tumhe koi commission milne wala hai kisi se... And fore most thing.... Bhigda hi kab tha... jo sudhar jao.... :p Aur Mujhe bariki se likha hova ya mota mota likha hova koi farak nahi padta, Bluffing hamesha bluffing hi hoti hai...... :p :D |
hey lamha.. :)
kya kahe aab hum... :) lafz nahi hai tarefoo ke liye... bahut hi badiya haiN.. ek dam.. jabardast.. rocKing gal..;) its..like wow.. post..;) yUH hi likhate rahiyee.. -- OMi Quote:
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thank u sooooooooooooooooo much SAMEER.....tumhara reply padh kar bahut achcha laga...aur tumhe meri ye koshish pasand aayi uske liye tahe dil se shukra guzaar hu....yuhi apna saath banaye rakhna......take care dear....:):):) |
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thank u sooooooooooooooooooo much OMI........tum yaha aaye aur itni izzat afzai ki uske liye bahut bahut bahut shukriya...yuhi saath banaye rakhna dear.....:):):) |
Ur most welcum..:)
Aap ne likha hi badiya haiN.. to tareef to karni hi padegi naa ;) and abt sath..;) woo to banake hi rakhenge ji.. :D :D Quote:
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thanx once again OMI............................................... ...........:) |
Seems like even this will be moved to Chit Chat section.....hehehehe
cuz of this faltoo ki Thanx... no u deserve it.... :D |
Hi
Hello Lamha ji how are you? very nice thoughts and feeling keep it up
mushkan |
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Per yeh Start koun karta hai.............:confused: Kyunki mera manana hai aisa kehne wal aisa kar hi nahi sakta hai...:rolleyes: |
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hey SAMEER..............chill yaar....tum bhi kis se bahes kar rahe ho yaar.... anyways...............thanx buddy...:):) |
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thanx MUSHKAN........................................... ........................:) |
hmmm..... yet again... thanx no thanx u deserve it...hahaha
and the story continues........ :D |
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