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Pyarali Rajan 20th September 2005 08:09 PM

"Maa tey Maa" Gujarati
 
"Maa tey Maa"

Ek yug thi ankhon taari chabbi ney chey tarsey
Savan na jem taari yaad maa ae varsey!

Sahiney dukhona dungaroney amoney laad ladavya
Hansta hansta ae dukho ney haiyyeh lagadya!

Faryad kadiye dukhoni na aavi zaban per taari
Shun shun na viti pyari “Maa” per amaari!!

Puri kari Ishwarey icchhao darek amaari
Madti nathi amoney bus dua o tamaari!!

Darek bhulo aney gunahoney amara karjo maaf
Em svarg naa dwar amara matey karjo saaf!!

Farishta pan taney karey juki ney salam
Tevo madey taney svargma darajjo aney mukam!!!

Rajan!!!

Parul 20th September 2005 08:26 PM

Rajan ji,

Tamari Kavitaa vaanchi ne aankh bharaayi aavi. tamari kavita pasand aavi. kharekhar asardaar chhe darek shabd. amari daad kubul karsho. bas vanchyaa j karu aem laage chhe. gujarati ma ane ae pan tamari kavita... shu vaat chhe. I feel lucky!

Bas aamaj lakhta rehsho!

Dhanyvaad, sadaa khush raho.

:)

@};-

meena chheda 21st September 2005 04:04 PM

Re: "Maa tey Maa" Gujarati
 
ek yug se aankhe, tumhari chhavi ko tarasti hai
saavan ki tarah tumhari yaad mai wo barasti hai

sah kar dukho ke pahaad, humko laad ladaye
haste haste oon dukho ko hriday se lagaye

fariyaad kabhi dukho ki n aayi jubaan tumhare
kya kya na biti pyari maa par humari

poori ki bhagwaan ne humari sabhi chahte
milti nahi bas humae aapki duaa-ae

harek galti or gunaah karna humare maaf
is tarah swarg ke dar karna humare liye saaf

faristae bhi tumhe kare juk kar salaam
is kadar mile tumhe swarg mai makaam.

meena chheda 21st September 2005 04:05 PM

rajan,

maa maate na ahesaas badal aapne abhinandan.

Amanush... 21st September 2005 04:14 PM

Bahout hi soundar kavita hai...Rajan Ji ! Hum ko bahout pasand
aayi...!

Thank you so much!

Meena Ji...!

Iss ka anuvaad karne ke liye aap ka dil se shukriya...!

Apna khayaal rakhiyega

:)

Pulkit_gupta 21st September 2005 04:24 PM

ek yug se aankhe, tumhari chhavi ko tarasti hai
saavan ki tarah tumhari yaad mai wo barasti hai

sah kar dukho ke pahaad, humko laad ladaye
haste haste oon dukho ko hriday se lagaye

Very beautiful words...!


fariyaad kabhi dukho ki n aayi jubaan tumhare
kya kya na biti pyari maa par humari

poori ki bhagwaan ne humari sabhi chahte
milti nahi bas humae aapki duaa-ae

Nicely said...!


harek galti or gunaah karna humare maaf
is tarah swarg ke dar karna humare liye saaf

faristae bhi tumhe kare juk kar salaam
is kadar mile tumhe swarg mai makaam.

Beautifullll...!

Rajan bhai!

Ek bara fir aapke shabd aur aapki soch dil ko chho gaye hain... bahut hi pyaara likha hai aapne is baar bhi.. Accha laga ise padhkar...Aise hi likhte rahiye...apna khayal bhi rakhiyega....:)

Didi... main hindi version ka intezzar hi kar raha thha :)

Pyarali Rajan 21st September 2005 06:19 PM

Parul Ji,

Tamey always mari post karel rachnao ney vancho cho, pasand karo cho aney tamaro tey bra maa abhipray pan aapo cho, bahuj khushi thai chey aney pachi tey maney kaink lakhva matey prarit karey chey!! "Matusri" matey jetlu lakhai tetlu ochoo chey - Janeta tey Janeta j, tetli niswarth vahal ni asha anya pasethi rakhi naa shakay!!

Tamaro abhaar!

Rajan!!

Pyarali Rajan 21st September 2005 06:26 PM

Meena Bahen!!

Saras anuvaad karel chey! Tamey vanchyoo hashey key Pulkit Ji ney pan tamara tarafthi anuvaad ni asha hati!!! Tamara help matey ghano j abhaar!

Maa matey kain pan kehvapanoo na hoi!! Maa kharekhar Maa j hoi chey, jem tamey kahyoo tem bhavnao no bhavsagar!!

Abhaar aney sneh sahit,

Rajan!!!

Pyarali Rajan 21st September 2005 06:30 PM

Amanush Ji,

Aapko yeh Kavita pasand ayi, bahot khushi hui!! Meri mother kaa jab 1989 mai dehant hua tha, jab mainey yek likhi thi!!

Phir sey pasand karney key liye thanks!!

Rajan!!!

Pyarali Rajan 21st September 2005 06:35 PM

Pulkit Ji,

Aapney yeh Kavita padhi aur aapney pasand bhi ki, bahot bahot shukriya!! Her ek stanza ko le kar aapney taarif ki bahot hi accha laga!!

Meena Ji translate karney may sahayta kartey hai varna yeh ahsas aap tak pahoch naa pata!

Thanks once again Pulkit Ji,

Rajan!!

A aziz 17th March 2008 02:36 PM

rajan,

maa maate na ahesaas badal aapne abhinandan.
wah wah rajan bhai

Dhaval 20th March 2008 12:01 AM

Pranaam Rajan jee:

tamaari aa rachna maaraa hraday maa vasi gayii.. !

KhuSh raho.. jai Shree kriShnaa..!

aapno

~ Dhaval

Pyarali Rajan 21st March 2008 02:43 AM

Thanks Azizbhai!
Ek "maa" na j raday thi sadantar vahal nu nisvarth zarnu vahetu rahey chey, tevu maru manvu chey....

Take care!

Rajan!!!

Pyarali Rajan 21st March 2008 03:32 AM

Dhaval Ji!

Kharekhar maa vishey prasansha na shabdo pan ocha padey chey...
tamari lakhel rachnao vanchvano labh madey chey, khubaj saras lakhi shako cho tema koi shanka na madey....

All the best!

Rajan!!!

maansi7 7th May 2008 10:11 PM

badha j frnds ne kem cho? maa ni yaad ma j hati ne aa kavita wanchi, be wars thi india jawayu nathi mari mummi khub yad aawe che ,rajan bhai aankho bhini thai ne na rahi gai warsi warsi ney ma mate tarsi gai.

maansi7 7th May 2008 10:35 PM

ma vishe lakhwa mate aankh kori thati nathi,,,,,,,mane mali shaku ewi koi raah mane malti nathi

Pyarali Rajan 11th May 2008 04:20 PM

MaansiJi!!


"ma vishe lakhwa mate aankh kori thati nathi,"

Tamey kharoo kahyoo...Aajey Mother's Day naa tamney reply kerta ghani khushi thai chey..."Maa ni toley koi nahin...."

Hamesha khush rehsho!!

Rajan!!

Nirmohi 11th May 2008 05:01 PM

:)
 
Saras Lakhyu chhe...:)

I'm fortunate enough to read it on mother's day...

Keep it up...:)


-Dr.Ashish

Pyarali Rajan 11th May 2008 11:39 PM

Thanks Ashish Ji!

Rajan!

nihar 15th January 2009 07:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pyarali Rajan (Post 153502)
"Maa tey Maa"

Ek yug thi ankhon taari chabbi ney chey tarsey
Savan na jem taari yaad maa ae varsey!

Sahiney dukhona dungaroney amoney laad ladavya
Hansta hansta ae dukho ney haiyyeh lagadya!

Faryad kadiye dukhoni na aavi zaban per taari
Shun shun na viti pyari “Maa” per amaari!!

Puri kari Ishwarey icchhao darek amaari
Madti nathi amoney bus dua o tamaari!!

Darek bhulo aney gunahoney amara karjo maaf
Em svarg naa dwar amara matey karjo saaf!!

Farishta pan taney karey juki ney salam
Tevo madey taney svargma darajjo aney mukam!!!

Rajan!!!


BAHUJ SUNDAR RITE TAMARA EHSAAS DEKHAY CHE AAMAJ LAKHTA RAHO

Pyarali Rajan 17th January 2009 10:08 PM

Thanks Nihar Ji!!
Tame pan aavvij reetey protsahit karta rehsho to lakhvu saral thashey....

Rajan!!


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