Ghazal : Kuch Din Jo BacHe PaDhe HaiN ... !
Kuch Din Jo BacHe PaDhe HaiN Sab Kaam AdhuRe PaDhe HaiN ... Koi Shikaayat NahiN Kisi Se Dil Ke Parde KhuLe PaDhe HaiN ... Tanhaaii Kaa Koii Sabab NahiN Chehre KyoN UtTRe PaDhe HaiN ... Jo Din SameT Ke Rakhe The HaaTh Se ChhooTe PaDhe HaiN ... Ghar MeN Masroof RehNe Se Uss Ke Baal BikhRe PaDhe HaiN ... Koi NahiN Kartaa Mohabbat"Naresh" Zamaane Ko SamjHe PaDhe HaiN .. |
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bahot khoob Naresh bhaiyaa.................... accha laga aapko padhna.... :) |
bahut achhe naresh saaheb ...
ye ghazal nahi aapke baaloN ki safedii hai daad qubool farmaaeiN |
Tasleemaat Mehra Saahab!
Waah! Buhat aalaa ghazal! Buhat aala takhayyul buhat gehraai mayn doobi! Dil say daad paysh e qidmat haye qabool farmayayn! Duagoh Ahmad |
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Koi Shikaayat NahiN Kisi Se Dil Ke Parde KhuLe PaDhe HaiN ... bahut khoob Naresh ji rajinderseep |
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Sabhi ashaar lajawaab hain.........:) |
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HaaTh Se ChhooTe PaDhe HaiN ... bahot khoob .. wah matla aor maqta bhi asardaar hain behad umda ghazal ............................................... |
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bahut khoob naresh jee..............................
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Naresh Mehra saheb
namaste bhai aapki yeh Ghazal nazar se piNhaa rahi, maiN sharmiNdaa hooN do-ek jageh aapne zabaan ka istemaal ba-khoobi kiya hai, aapko dilii mubarakbaad mashq jaari rakhiye rab raakha maikash |
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naresh jee
namaste subha subhaa aapki peshkash par nazar padiii. . . khoob likhaa hai aapne. . .yuunhi likhate rahiye aage bhee. . . khush rahiye . . .apnaa khayaal rakhen duaaon ke saath ijaazat aapka Dhaval |
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Naresh Jee Aadaab!
Badi hi khoob kalaam kahi hai janab.. behad gehre aur khoob khayaal rahe... :) sabhi ashaaroN meiN gazab ki gehraai hai ... Is khoobsurat kalaam par meri hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... :) Bazm meiN aate rahiye.. shaad O aabad rhaiye.. Khuda Hafez... :) |
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umeed hai aap meri baat maanenge :) aapka dost, Pradhyuman - Bismil |
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