uske aansuo par taras kha ke pee gaya
 

dostoyeh share mera nahi hai, par mujhe behad pasand hai, so mai appko bhi sunana chahati hu.

gaur farmayega:

"Lehro'N se khelta hua lehra ke pee gaya,
mai sakki ki nazar par bal kha ke pee gaya,
maine chod di thi, par roney laggi sharab,
mai uskey aansuo par taras kha ke pee gaya"

hum to samjhe the ki barsaat main barsegi sharaab,

barsaat aayi to barsaat ne dil tod diya...

hi all, i tis not mine.. but i must share with u all .. here..

kal tak to kaheta tha ki bistar se utha jata nahin ,
aaj uth gaya duniya se , bata itni takat kahan se aa gayi....

arz kiya hai...

saaki ne naa dekhe honge humse sharaabi,
ki maikhana pee gaye peete peete..

saaki ne na dekhe honge humse sharabi,
ki maikhan bhi gaye peete peete...

hello dost

appke share ka reply kar rahi hu:

arz kiya hai:

"kahdey meri laash par kahtey hai woh has kar,
aji tum to kahtey thy ki mujhe neend nahi aati"

Jara Gaur Farmaiye
meri urdu bahut achchhi nahin hai, maafi chahunga, yadi koi galti ho jaye to.

" Dekha ki -e-bo mast nigahon se baar baar,
jab tak sharaab aayi , kai daur ho gaye".

" kaun Kahta hai ki aasmaan main suraakh nahin ho sakta,

Ek patthar to tabiyat se uchhalo yaaro. "

mujhe to urdu ke bahut kum words hi yaad rahtey hai.

"milla baharo ko fareb teri berukhi se verna,
yeh pedoo se pattey jadney ka mousam na tha"

"jaam nahi to na sahi, ankho se hi pilla de saaki,
kaise uth jau maikhane se abhi hosh hai bakki"

" Dil ne bahut samjhaya akele safar karne ko,
hum karwan ke saath gaye aur rasta bhatak gaye".

" Bo kagaj ki naav tumhari kaise doob gayi Zafar,
tum to yaar bade maahir they aisi naav chalane main".

"kismat ne mujhe dhokha diya har pal,
meri naav waha doobi jaha pani tha kum"

" Buland hausale Fateh ki buniyaad hua karte hain,
kaanpate hathon se talwaar na uthaya kijiye".

" Bhulana humko na itna assan hoga,
gujarish ye hai ki koshish to kijiye".

"jab jab tumey bulaya tum aur yaad aaye,
jatey nahi hai dil se ab tak tumarey saaye,
tumse bichdney ka jab bhi khayal aaya,
tanhai to kaya hum mahfil mai bhi gabraye"

bahut khoob Sunita ji, Bahut khoob, kafi dinon ke baad koi umda sher suna hai. tahe dil se taarif karna chahoonga.

Atul

Atul ji appne appna naam to bataya, bahut bahut shukriya. aur mera share appko pasand aaya, yeh pad kar accha lagga.

arz hai:

"aaj phir dil se ek awaaz aai hai,
is liye humne ye shayari bnai hai,
aapko bhulane ki koshish kaise karen hum,
nas nas mein teri yaad samaai hai"

appki dost

"Achchhi Surat bhi kyaa Shai hai,
jisne daali buri nazar dali".

Atul

"us par hi na janey kyu aa gaya appna dil,
vaise masoom se surat wale to kai firtey hai"

"Maloom hai ki safar na assan hoga ye,
kadam fir bhi teri or badhe jate hain"

Atul

"socha tha ab na jayegey us taraf,
par rasta kuad hi mud jaye to kaya kare"

appki dost

"Ab to pairon par bhi bas na raha hamara,
khud -ba-khud tere ghar ki or chale jate hain".

Atul

"appne pairon par lagga lo tum bandishy,
jaha jo bhi aaya hai qatal hokar gaya hai"

"mere katilon ki talaash main kai log jayenge jaan se,
mere katal main mera haath hai, kisi ko bhi pata na hoga".

Atul

" Hum to sar par kafan baandh ke aaye hain,
barna hum aur apse is tarah guftagu karte".

"tu etna shatir hoga yeh humey andaza na tha,
khar ishq mai tu akhir appni manzil to pa gaya"

SALAM...........


SHUKRIYAA AAP KA JOH AAPNE MERE ASHAAR KO PHIR SE YAHA DORAYA THAX ONCE AGAIN GOD BLESS U.....................

balekum salaam

sir app kis ashaar ki baat kar rahey hai, mai samji nahi. agar app last wala kah rahey hai, to pls dont mind yeh maine kuad joda hai. aur agar appke kisi share se milta hai to pls mujhe maaf karey. mujhe b pasand nahi hai ki mai kisi ka likha phir likhu.

appki dost

atul ji appka reply nahi aaya, i m waiting........!

Mai akela hi chala tha janibemanzil ki taraf,
Log aate gaye aur karwa banta gaya.

Atul

Sunita ji,
ye lines mujhe bahut pasand hain. jitni baar sunta hoon utna aur sunane ki ichchha hoti hai.

please parh kar reply jaroor kariye. ki apko kaisi lagi?.

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E Khuda Aaj Ye Faisla Karde,
Use Mera ya Mujhe Uska Karde.
Bahut Dukh Sahe He Maine,
Koi Khusi Ab Toh Muqadar Karde.
Bahot Muskil Lagta Hai Usse Duur Rehna,
Judai Ke Safar Ko Kum Karde.
Jitna Duur Chale Gaye Woh Mujhse,
Use Utna Kareeb Karde.
Nahi Likha Agar Nasib Me Uska Naam,
To Khatam Kar Ye Zindagi aur Mujhe FANAA Karde.
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atul ji yeh shayri bahut hi acchi hai, es ke jawab dena to bahut mushkil hai, phir bhi koshish jaroor karugi.

"eh mere dost aisa bhi kabhi hua hai kaya,
jo hum mangey woh kabhi milla hai kaya,
aur yeh baata aisa bhi kabhi hua hai kaya,
jisey hum dil se chahey woh kabhi milla hai kaya,
bin mangey to bahut kuch mil jaata hai jaha,
par waffa ke badley kabhi waffa milli hai kaya,
jiska mahboob ka naam dil par woh likh deta hai,
uska naam hattho ki lakeero mai kabhi likha hai kaya"

appki dost

-sunita virender

kaya baat hai didi aapki hazir jawabi ka
pata nahi itne acche shawad dhood ke kahan se lati ho
jawab padkar maza aa gaya

dilip

dilip agar appko mere yeh shawad acchey lagey to bahut kushi ki baat hai, vaise maine to atul ke likhey ka jawab hi diya hai.

thanks alot

tumari didi

Re: uske aansuo par taras kha ke pee gaya
 

Bohat khoob jee

aaj kaafi dino baad ish mehkhane mein aaya aur aapki post dikh gayi jaisa socha tha vaisa hi khoobsurat sher padhne ko mila


Dard-e-dil walo ka bas yahi thikana hai
mere ghar k pass khula ek mehkhana hai
dard-o-ghum ki har dawa yaha milti hai
is liye hi hamara yahaaN aana jana hai....


koi dum nahi mere sher mein bas taang adane ki aadat jo hai...hahaha


Shukriyah sunita jee itna acha likhne k liye

"Kar diye taj mahal ke tukade tukade humane
Faink kar abe yamuna main patthar"

Re: Re: uske aansuo par taras kha ke pee gaya
 

Diggaj ji bahut accha lagga appko es mahkhane mai dekh kar, aur appney jo share likha hai bahut lajwaab hai. umeed karti hu es mahkhane mai aana janna nahi chodeygey app.

"dard had se gujar jaye to tu hi batta kaya karey,
tere ghar ke paas wale mehkahne mai aakar marey,
2 gunt piney ko milley na miley tere se nazar jaroor miley,
jo nasha teri nazro mai miley woh sharab mai kaha miley"


appki dost

"taj mahal ke tukade karke kaya samjtey ho,
tum bewaffeai karne wallo ke kudha ban gaye,
aji janab ishq to dil mai hota hai taj mai nahi,
aise sitam sahney ke baad ishq aur nikharta hai"

-sunita virender

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reason : Bad choice of words

Taj ke sitam
 

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Sunita and Dilip
 

How is life, ye jindagi galey laga ley...