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Qasid

6th July 2015 07:28 AM

tell me dear, will you be mine !!

When I walk
When I shine
Tell me dear, you will be mine !!

Despite the need
Despite the pain
when the matter's beyond
just loss and gain
when i look up and there's sunshine
tell me dear, will you be mine !!

I don't just care what people say
those aren't the rules by which i play
but when clock comes to half past nine
tell me dear, will you be mine !!

when i quietly walk these empty streets
yes you can hear when my heart beats
and when everyone says that you're damm fine
tell me dear, will you be mine !!

Madhu 14

6th July 2015 10:21 AM

Very nicely written mast ji........simple yet deep... ...too good!!
Keep writing...

sameer'shaad'

6th July 2015 10:28 AM

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Originally Posted by mast (Post 481114)

amazing ... truly amazing bro.......................

just like a miracle in front.... keep writing lovely romantic posts like this.... take care

Reps added...... from the bottom of my heart.

Shaad....

Qasid

8th July 2015 08:07 AM

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Originally Posted by Madhu 14 (Post 481122)

Very nicely written mast ji........simple yet deep... ...too good!!
Keep writing...

Thanks Madhu, appreciate your pat on the back for this...trying to do different things in different genre and good words are always a boost..

Qasid

8th July 2015 08:08 AM

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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 481126)

Bhai thanks for the appreciation...I will keep trying such experiments all i need is you by my side :)

Dhaval

8th July 2015 09:43 AM

Heart touching and romantic.... keep writing anu bhai

Dhaval

Qasid

8th July 2015 09:20 PM

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Originally Posted by Dhaval (Post 481250)

Heart touching and romantic.... keep writing anu bhai

Dhaval

Dhaval bhai - Thanks for your appreciation and liking my poetry..

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