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ananthpak 30th December 2011 03:41 PM

"na main 'ghalib' na 'faiz'.............."
 
"koi mere armaano ka sabab na pucho.......

koi mere khayaalo ka mazhab na pucho......

main likhta chand alfaazo mein khayaal mere........

koi mere alfaazo ka adab na pucho...........

na main 'ghalib' na 'faiz' na koi aur sukhanwar.......

koi mere jazbaaton ka matlab na pucho..............."

Taish 3rd February 2012 09:13 AM

ahcha hai, kaafi ahcha hai.... likhte rahiye... bahut saadgi se apne khayaal pesh kiye haiN aapne....

ananthpak 3rd February 2012 02:15 PM

Bahot bahot shukriya..........aapka.......taish ji

Praneeta 30th June 2014 02:23 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ananthpak (Post 435149)
"koi mere armaano ka sabab na pucho.......

koi mere khayaalo ka mazhab na pucho......

main likhta chand alfaazo mein khayaal mere........

koi mere alfaazo ka adab na pucho...........

na main 'ghalib' na 'faiz' na koi aur sukhanwar.......

koi mere jazbaaton ka matlab na pucho..............."

Too good! This is my favourite so far. :)

ananthpak 2nd July 2014 03:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Praneeta (Post 460647)
Too good! This is my favourite so far. :)

Bohat bohat shukriya...............thanx dear :)

mujib66 2nd August 2014 03:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ananthpak (Post 435149)
"koi mere armaano ka sabab na pucho.......

koi mere khayaalo ka mazhab na pucho......

main likhta chand alfaazo mein khayaal mere........

koi mere alfaazo ka adab na pucho...........

na main 'ghalib' na 'faiz' na koi aur sukhanwar.......

koi mere jazbaaton ka matlab na pucho..............."

wah bohut achha shayerana bayaan hai.
kafia ka istemaal bhi lajawaab hai.
mubarak ho.

ananthpak 7th August 2014 09:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mujib66 (Post 464010)
wah bohut achha shayerana bayaan hai.
kafia ka istemaal bhi lajawaab hai.
mubarak ho.

Bohat bohat shukriya Mujib ji......... :)

zarraa 9th August 2014 01:53 AM

Waahhh!!! Bahaut hi asardaar qalaam hai !!! Dherron daad Ananthpak ji !!!

Hassan 10th August 2014 02:03 PM

wahh wahh! Ananth sir!

Bohat bohat khoob! :)

likhte rahiye, milte rahiye,

DuaooN ke saath,

Fathomless 10th August 2014 04:22 PM

bahot khoob Anantbabu..............

aadeil 11th August 2014 11:46 AM

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh...
Anantji, behad khubsurat qitta likha hai.......

na main 'ghalib' na 'faiz' na koi aur sukhanwar.......
koi mere jazbaaton ka matlab na pucho..............."

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!! bahot khub...... :)

ananthpak 11th August 2014 04:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by N@zneen (Post 464887)
bahot khoob jij bahot hi khoobsurat khayaal pesh kiya apne.....dheron daad :)
waise jij hum aur aap ghalib aur faiz to nahin hain lekin bht se logon ko galatfehmi hai ghalib aur faiz hone ki :D

Shukriya saali sahiba............ :)

ananthpak 11th August 2014 04:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by zarraa (Post 464909)
Waahhh!!! Bahaut hi asardaar qalaam hai !!! Dherron daad Ananthpak ji !!!

Bohat bohat shukriya zarraa sahab ....aap ki hausla aaffzaayi ka behad shukrguzaar hun :)

ananthpak 11th August 2014 04:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hassan (Post 464956)
wahh wahh! Ananth sir!
Bohat bohat khoob! :)
likhte rahiye, milte rahiye,
DuaooN ke saath,

Thanx a lot hassan bhai...... :)

ananthpak 11th August 2014 04:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fathomless (Post 464966)
bahot khoob Anantbabu..............

Bohat bohat shukriya shan bhai...... :)

ananthpak 11th August 2014 04:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aadeil (Post 465011)
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh...
Anantji, behad khubsurat qitta likha hai.......
na main 'ghalib' na 'faiz' na koi aur sukhanwar.......
koi mere jazbaaton ka matlab na pucho..............."
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!! bahot khub...... :)


Bohat bohat shukriya aadeil sahab...... :)


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