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Haan main toh ik beti hoon
Dekh ke jise ho gaye the udaas
haan main toh ik beti hoon Jiske aane se tooti, har aas haan main toh ik beti hoon Apnon ke liye nahi thi kabhi khaas haan main toh ik beti hoon Bojh samajhne ka hai riwaz Haan main toh ik beti hoon Dee seekh sada chup rehne ki, chheeni mujhse meri aawaaz haan main toh ik beti hoon Baapu ki chinta ka kaaran, bhai ke sehti hoon mijaaz Haan main toh ik beti hoon Tum samjho mujhko sadaa paraaya tum mein basti par meri saans haan main toh ik beti hoon |
Dee seekh sada chup rehne ki,
chheeni mujhse meri aawaaz haan main toh ik beti hoon aapka naam to nahi janta par itna zaroor kahunga ki ye panktiyaaN mujhe kuch yaad sa dila gayiN..........khair, koi baat nahi.......apki is acchi peshkash par meri taraf se Daad kabool karein .....!!! aapka. |
shukriya secret admirer ji aapne mujhe padha aur haunslaa afzaayi ki
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ye wala bhi bahut achha hai par pata nahi kyuN i feel like ki ye aapka bahut pehle ka likha hai ..
khair daad phir se haazir hai apna khyaal rakhiye |
Abid Afzal Majaaz ki taraf se daad qabool kijiey.
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main bhi kr sakti hoon roushan tera naam kya huaa jo main ek beti hoon main bhi dila sakti hoon kalpna chawla jaise, sunita willium jaise sania mirza jaise, sarojni naydu jaise indra ghandhi jaise aur raani jhansi jaise tere naam ko ek pehchaan kya hua jo main ek beti hoon sadion se main deti aai tere vansh ko ek naam kya hua jo main ek beti hoon kabhi maa, kabhi beti, kabhi patni, kabhi pemika kabhi sati kabhi switari kabhi apsra to kabhi devika mere sab roopo,n ko kiya toone bhi to salaam kya hooa jo main ek beti hoon |
aadab
Behen bohut hi acha likha hai aapne ne,
aaj ke zamane ko dekh ke , main har behen se yahi kenha chahta hun, jiyo toh aise jiyo , ke izzat ki baarish hojaye , doh din ki bhi agar zindagi ho, toh babul tere naam kar jaye.. Quote:
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shukriya aap sabka isey padne aur mera housla badaane ke liye.
kshitz pata nahi aapko aisa kyun laga magar ye purana nahi hai. rashmi ji & ehtishaamulhaq ji aapke khyalat jaan kar bohut accha laga kaash sab log is baat ko aur beti ke dard ko samjhe. aaj ke zamaane mein bhi pade likhe logon ki iss tung soch par gussa aur sharm donon aati hai, aur sabse zyada dukh tab hota hai jab ye soch kisi aurat ki hoti hai. kuch hi din pehle kisi ko beti hone par mubarakbaad di par us insaan ka chehra aise utra tha jaise koi chhuut ki bimaari aa gayi ho, mera mubarakbaad dena bhi jaise bura laga, tabhi ye khayaal aaya. |
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atyadhik samvedansheel..... no words to speak with, i am just speechless.
Shaad... |
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Apki Dost Masti |
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Yeh mere dil ke bohut kareeb hai. Regards Sarika |
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AAp jaise umdaa shayar ne isey padaa aur apna aashirvaad diya, iskey liye dil se aapka ek baar phir shuriyaa. -Masti |
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Bohat khoob sarika ji. ..dil ko chu lene waale ehsaas hain... |
Kaash ki ma baap samajh sakte ki ladkiyan bojh nahin hoti, nazuk si ladkiyan apno keliye to apni sari khushiyan qurbaan karne taiyar hojati hain, har ek roop me har kadam par kabhi beti kabhi behen kabhi ma kabhi premika bankar qurbani deti hain, ek ladki hone ki wajahse zindagi bhar ladki hone ka karz utarti rehti hain phir bhi kahin na kahin kami reh jati hai qki wo to ladki hai.
Sarikaji afsos hua jaankar us aurat k bare me jisne ladki ko janam di aur usse mu mod li jab janam dene wali maa k ye ehsas hain to bakiyon ko kya kehna, Khuda ki di hui rehmat hoti hain betiyan inse mohabbat karni chahiye. Sarikaji apke har ek shabd me dard aur afsos hai, ye rachna mere dil ko chu gai. |
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lekin samaaz ki dharna...inke prati aisi kyuN hai...samajh se parey hai.....bahut ho behtareen peshkash ...daad....is par ek Qatta aapki nazm ko smarpit... … विदा हुईं जो बेटियां तो दिल को लू गयीं, परदेस क्या गयीं बाबुल की निकल रू गयी । खामोशियाँ जो छायीं थीं रुख्सती के वक़्त, हलक के शब्द ला ज़ुबाँ पे दिल को छू गयीं । __________हर्ष महाजन sabhaar Harash Mahajan |
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Apki Dost Sarika |
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Kab samjhenge log ki jis din hum apni soch badal lenge us din samaj badal jayega, uss din beta beti baraabar ho jayenge. "Khuda ki rehmat hoti hai betiyan" bilkul sach kahaa magar jo taraste hain unko kabhi kabhi nahi milti hain betiyan, uske liye bohut kismat chahiye. yaad hai mujhe when I was carrying Suhani, anubhav (Mast) used to pray everyday for a daughter koi galti se bhi keh de ki beta ho gaya toh? Gussa aa jata tha unko. Suhani ke hone har jaise ki samaaj ka ek warg aata hai duaein dene aur paise mangne toh jab anu ne unhe 2100 rs. diye toh woh bolne lage ladki hai isliye ye le rahi hu ladka hota to double leti, anu ka gussa satven aasmaan par pohunch gaya aur unke muh se nikla ladka hota toh iske aadhe bhi naa deta :p:p Shukriya. Apki Dost Sarika |
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Aur bohut hi khubsoorat likha hai aapne, dil se daad kabool kijiye. Regards Sarika |
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Sarika aapko padhna bahut achcha lagta hai mujhe kyun ki aapke ehsaas mere dil ke bahut kareeb hote hain...jaise kisi ne bas mere khayalon jo awaaz di ho...is baar bhi vahi hua....:) dil kush ho gaya padhkar..bahut kuch badla hai samaaj mein par ab bhi bahut baki hai...betiyon ko apne hak ke liye..ab bhi bahut struggle karna hai...aur aisi kavitayein...logon ke dilon ko zaroor jhakjhorti hongi.... Likhti rahiye...aise hee... khush raho.... |
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Dear Sarika..................lafz nahi hai mere paas...aik aik lafz dil ko chuu gya...! god bless u dear Quote:
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Sach keh rahi hain abhi aur bohut waqt lagega mansikta badalne mein. Badlaav to aa raha hai magar gati bahut dheemi hai. |
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