Ghazal : Kuch Iss Tarah ... !
Kuch Iss Tarah Taaroof Karaayaa Mujhe NighaaoN MeN Der Tak Basaayaa Mujhe ... Band Thii TumSe Ghuftaghuu SaaloN Se Ek Khat Ke Jawaab Ne Bulwaayaa Mujhe ... Dosti Kaa Huqe Aise Adaa Kiyaa Tum Ne Adaawat Se Har Qadam Bachaayaa Mujhe ... Jab Iraade Jal Ke Sab Khaak Ho Gaye The Kyon Ummeed Ne Har Dum Jagaayaa Mujhe ... Inaamaat Kii Mubaraqbaad Bahut NahiN Kaat Akhbaar Se Tasveer Sajaayaa Mujhe ... Kab Se Bikhrii Kitaab Thaa Yahaa"Naresh" Aa Kar Farsh Se Tumne UThaayaa Mujhe ... |
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Waahh waahh waahhh.. kya khoob baateN kahi hain aapne Mehra saab.. bahot lutf milaa aapki is asardaar tahreer se Rubaroo ho kar... bahot pur-asar, pur-khuloos kalaam hai yeh.. meri jaanib se Daad ka Nazraana qubool farmaaayen.. Ho zore qalam aur bhi ziyaadah... Shaad,... |
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Kyon Ummeed Ne Har Dum Jagaayaa Mujhe ... good one ... very well written ........ :) |
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Ek Khat Ke Jawaab Ne Bulwaayaa Mujhe ... Inaamaat Kii Mubaraqbaad Bahut NahiN Kaat Akhbaar Se Tasveer Sajaayaa Mujhe ... Kab Se Bikhrii Kitaab Thaa Yahaa"Naresh" Aa Kar Farsh Se Tumne UThaayaa Mujhe ... bahut khoob ashaar likhe hain .. naresh bhai .. acchi ghazal bani hai .. mate se makte tak .. khoobsurat peshkash .. dil se daad hazir ... yuun hii likhte rahiye ... radhe radhe ............ :) |
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bahut khoob mehra sahab . khoob ghazal likhee hai aapne.................. dili daad o mubaraqbaad..............likhte rahiye yu hee............. take care..............................:) |
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Bohat khoob naresh ji.............................................
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Mashaallah bahut hi khoobsoorti ke saath ehsasoN ko bayaan kiya hai
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Ek Khat Ke Jawaab Ne Bulwaayaa Mujhe ... Sir, Bahot Acchaa Likha Hai Aaapne..!!! |
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Dosti Kaa Huqe Aise Adaa Kiyaa Tum Ne Adaawat Se Har Qadam Bachaayaa Mujhe ... achi ghazal huee hai naresh ji .... bahut acha sher hai ................. bahut pasand aayaa .... |
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naresh ji..namaste meine pehle nahi padhi deri se padh rahi hun... per aapne itna accha likha hai ki baar baar padhne ko mann karta hai... likhte rahiye taecaer :) |
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