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Madhu 14 28th July 2015 10:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fakhri (Post 483507)
Shaad saheb aapka aur Madhuji ka kalam lajawab hota hei. Aap dono isii tarah likhte raheiyega

Fakhri

Masjid mei.N namazei.N padhni thi, Mandir mei bhajan bhi gaane they
Sirf achcha ik insa.N hona kaafi nahi.N hota dunya mei.N

khaak alfaaz aap ko pasand aaye bahut shukriya fakhri ji....
aage bhi padhte rahiyega...
salamat rahein...

sameer'shaad' 28th July 2015 10:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fakhri (Post 483507)
Shaad saheb aapka aur Madhuji ka kalam lajawab hota hei. Aap dono isii tarah likhte raheiyega

Fakhri

Masjid mei.N namazei.N padhni thi, Mandir mei bhajan bhi gaane they
Sirf achcha ik insa.N hona kaafi nahi.N hota dunya mei.N

Aapki inaayat hai Fakhri saahab........... warnaa khaaksaar ke alfaaz me wo dam kham kahaan...... saath banae rakiyega insha allah ham bhi likhne ko koshishen karte rahenge..... shukriyaa tahe dil se aapkaa...

shaad....

Madhu 14 28th July 2015 10:49 AM

ghalib bura na maan jo vaaiz bura kahe
aisa bhi koi hai ki sab achcha kahein jise


Mirza ghalib.

Qasid 28th July 2015 10:52 AM

Imaan ko ruksat hue zamaane the huye
lachaar dil bimaar hai bimaar rehne do


Madhu 14 28th July 2015 11:35 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mast (Post 483527)
Imaan ko ruksat hue zamaane the huye
lachaar dil bimaar hai bimaar rehne do


waah!khoob sher kaha mast sahab...........

sunita thakur 28th July 2015 12:25 PM

"mohabat ke baad mohabat mumkin hai "Faraz"
magar toot kar chahna sirf aik baar hota hai"

sameer'shaad' 28th July 2015 01:08 PM

bahut khoob sher pesh kiye hain aap sab ne....

madhu ji

mast saahab

Sunita dee........

fakhri 29th July 2015 03:53 AM

Zamana Hua Apna Mun.H Bund Kiye
Jo Khola to Phir Zalzala dekhna

Qasid 29th July 2015 07:06 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fakhri (Post 483581)
Zamana Hua Apna Mun.H Bund Kiye
Jo Khola to Phir Zalzala dekhna

Wah bahut khoob Janaab umdaa sher hua hai

sameer'shaad' 29th July 2015 09:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fakhri (Post 483581)
Zamana Hua Apna Mun.H Bund Kiye
Jo Khola to Phir Zalzala dekhna

bahut khoob sher huaa janaab...................

Qasid 29th July 2015 10:58 AM

Ulfaton ke mod pe khwaab ki talaash mein
Laut kar aana sanam bikhra hua sa dil liye

Madhu 14 29th July 2015 11:04 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fakhri (Post 483581)
Zamana Hua Apna Mun.H Bund Kiye
Jo Khola to Phir Zalzala dekhna

Bahut khoob sher fakhri sahab......
aate rahein...

Madhu 14 29th July 2015 11:06 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mast (Post 483602)
Ulfaton ke mod pe khwaab ki talaash mein
Laut kar aana sanam bikhra hua sa dil liye

Waaah!...bahut khoob sher kaha mast ji............

sameer'shaad' 29th July 2015 11:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mast (Post 483602)
Ulfaton ke mod pe khwaab ki talaash mein
Laut kar aana sanam bikhra hua sa dil liye

nice sher mast saahab.......................

sameer'shaad' 29th July 2015 11:51 AM

aaj kaa sher.....

pahloo se hawaa kaa koii jhoNkaa abhii guzraa,
mujh ko ye lagaa tum they sanam, tum they sanam, tum......

shaad.....

Madhu 14 29th July 2015 11:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 483618)
aaj kaa sher.....

pahloo se hawaa kaa koii jhoNkaa abhii guzraa,
mujh ko ye lagaa tum they sanam, tum they sanam, tum......

shaad.....

Waaaaahhhh!!...bahut khoob shaad ji.........

sunita thakur 29th July 2015 12:52 PM

"justju jiski usko to na paaya hamne,
es bahane se magar dekh li dunia hamne"
nm

sameer'shaad' 29th July 2015 12:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Madhu 14 (Post 483619)
Waaaaahhhh!!...bahut khoob shaad ji.........

thanks madhu jiiii.................................... :)

Qasid 29th July 2015 04:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 483611)
nice sher mast saahab.......................

Shukriyaa Shaad bhai.........................

Qasid 29th July 2015 04:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Madhu 14 (Post 483605)
Waaah!...bahut khoob sher kaha mast ji............

Shukriyaa Madhu............................................. ..........

fakhri 30th July 2015 03:27 AM

Saaqi ne apni aankho.N se itni pilayee hei
Ab kya majaal hath mei.N ik aur jaam lei.N

Fakhri

Taish 30th July 2015 04:16 AM

neend ko jab meri aankhon ka pata de koi...
ishq ye hota hai kya mujhko bata de koi...

-------Taish

Madhu 14 30th July 2015 08:40 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fakhri (Post 483667)
Saaqi ne apni aankho.N se itni pilayee hei
Ab kya majaal hath mei.N ik aur jaam lei.N

Fakhri

Quote:

Originally Posted by Taish (Post 483668)
neend ko jab meri aankhon ka pata de koi...
ishq ye hota hai kya mujhko bata de koi...

-------Taish

Waah waah!

Fakhri ji..
taish ji...
.bahut khoob sher kahe aap dono ne.......

sunita thakur 30th July 2015 11:11 AM

ZaKhm itne ke gin na paaoge
Meri muskaan khol kar dekho

-Praveen Saxena

sameer'shaad' 30th July 2015 03:06 PM

Sher of the day..........


Zindagee bojh ban gayee uskii,
jisne thaamaa hai haaNth chaahat kaa...

Madhu 14 30th July 2015 04:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 483701)
Sher of the day..........


Zindagee bojh ban gayee uskii,
jisne thaamaa hai haaNth chaahat kaa...

Achcha sher hai shaad ji.....
..

sameer'shaad' 31st July 2015 02:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Madhu 14 (Post 483713)
Achcha sher hai shaad ji.....
..

shukriyaa madhu saahibaa............

Taish 31st July 2015 02:48 PM

Sher of the day....


Chipana nahi hai, batana nahi hai,
Mire ishq ko ab thikana nahi hai...

--Taish

sunita thakur 31st July 2015 02:58 PM

zindagi me khushi bas zara chahiye,
kab kaha maine mujhko khuda chahiye...

-Taish

fakhri 2nd August 2015 06:14 AM

One has to work v. hard to accomplish something big and meaningful. This sher depicts that scenario:

Hazaaro.N meel tai ker ke shuaey.N shams aati hei.N
Tabhi jaa ker andhera is jaha.N ka khutm hota hai.

Fakhri

sameer'shaad' 2nd August 2015 10:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fakhri (Post 483843)
One has to work v. hard to accomplish something big and meaningful. This sher depicts that scenario:

Hazaaro.N meel tai ker ke shuaey.N shams aati hei.N
Tabhi jaa ker andhera is jaha.N ka khutm hota hai.

Fakhri

very nice sher Fakhri saahab................................

sameer'shaad' 3rd August 2015 10:05 AM

Aaj kaa sher.....

sooraten aadmee me hotee hain,
seeraten saadgee me hotee hain..


Shaad....

Qasid 3rd August 2015 10:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 483890)
Aaj kaa sher.....

sooraten aadmee me hotee hain,
seeraten saadgee me hotee hain..


Shaad....

Umda sher hua hai bhai jaan..........................

sameer'shaad' 3rd August 2015 11:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mast (Post 483893)
Umda sher hua hai bhai jaan..........................


inaayaten bhai...................... bahut shukriyaa

sunita thakur 3rd August 2015 02:52 PM

Use haasil karne ki tamanna kabhi kii hi nahii...
Use chaahne se fursat milti to shayad khuda se maang lete...

-Nisha_Virgo

fakhri 4th August 2015 08:17 PM

Likhne ko to likh leta hoo.N kuch kuch kabhi kabhi
Mere rafique verna mei.N shaaer koii nahi.N

Fakhri

bhushan 4th August 2015 10:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fakhri (Post 484004)
Likhne ko to likh leta hoo.N kuch kuch kabhi kabhi
Mere rafique verna mei.N shaaer koii nahi.N

Fakhri

Bohot khoob janab


Kabhi kabhi milti hai likhne ki wajah bhushan
Wo sanghdil zakhm bhi gin gin k deta hai

Bhushan

Qasid 4th August 2015 11:29 PM

Laut kar kaise phir se yeh bahaar aayi
Zindagi hokar zindagi par nisaar aayi

Madhu 14 5th August 2015 08:30 AM

Waaah bhushan ji...mast ji....
Behad khoob sher kahe aap dono ne.....

Qasid 5th August 2015 08:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Madhu 14 (Post 484028)
Waaah bhushan ji...mast ji....
Behad khoob sher kahe aap dono ne.....

Shukriyaa Madhu :) ...........................................


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