Hahahahha- Ishq
tanhaiyo me khayaal aata
khayalo me wo naam chala aata beqrara dil ko karara nahi aata milne ka wo unko khayaal nahi aata jage to wo soye to wo , ye silsila tham hi nahi pata soche to kya soche, koi vichar aur smaj nahi aata rab se ajij wo kaisa saya hai,itna kya man ko bhaya naam lena chahu rab ka, aur usika naam aa jata |
Bahot khoob koshish rahi aapki veena jee... bas likhti raheN, ehsaasoN ko kaagaz pe utaarti rahiye... shukriyaa
Shaad.. |
Veena jii....bahut khoob likha aapne...dil ki baat sahi lafzoN mei kahi aapne....tabhi to kahte hai ki ISHQ aache bhale ensaaN ko behka deta hai....:)
keep writing god bless u |
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rahgir manjil ka kya thikana aapki tarif se aasan gujara sukriya, pryass rahega geto me kahi ho naam hamara |
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ishq ke chakkar ne bhalo bhalo ko mara fir bhi chute na ye kaisa ishq ajab nyara |
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Aatee nahi ho Saamne Lekin Mujhe Yaqee'N hai, Chupke Se Tum bhi Padhtee ho Mere Kalaaam ko. GhazloN Mein merii jab huaa Zikre-Sanam kabhi, LafzoN meiN kho kar DhooNdti ho apne Naam ko. Shaad.. |
Acchi soch hai..bas yuhi likhte rahiye,aap ko dhek kar hume bhi likhne housla milta rahega..
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housalo se housale mila kare hai aap jaise housalo ko badaya karte hai soch to soch hai , achi kahi aapne isse bad kar kya soch hai sukriya meri aur se,is per aapka jor hai |
A little bit more polish and this can be turned into diamond....
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paras ke chune se, lohe bhi sone ban jaya karte hai kuch lafj apne se, pather me bhi jaan le aate hai |
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