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chaahat 7th July 2004 08:01 PM

Garmi ho ya sardi...
 
Garmi ho chaahe sardi ho,
Sab kudrat ke nazaare hain...
Pyase to woh bhi hain,
Jinke ghar samander ke kinare hain..

Writer : Unknown

~Priya

Pulkit_gupta 8th July 2004 01:20 PM

I like the last line specially.. Pyaase to woh bhi hain jo wsamundar ke kinare hain..... Do Keep the good work up.. TC

chaahat 8th July 2004 11:00 PM

Pulkit ji,
Aapne yeh sher padha aur pasand kiya, jaan ke bahut khushi hui..

lekin yeh sher mera likha nahi hai... meri zindagi ne kal yeh sher gungunaaya tha, to maine socha aap sab ke saath share karun.

Writer kaun hai main bhi nahi jaanti... par bahut achi lines hain..

~Priya

Pulkit_gupta 9th July 2004 09:55 AM

Priya,

Zaroori yeh nahi ki aapne likha hai ya nahi... but u shared a good work with us and thats important......

So.. kee writing and keep posting.... Apni Zindagi se kahiye aise hi gungunati rahe :)

TC

chaahat 9th July 2004 08:52 PM

Thankyou so much for your wishes Pulkit ji!

~Priya

meetaparekh 10th July 2004 06:38 PM

wah
 
Priya
very sweet.

trufellings1 10th July 2004 11:31 PM

hi, priya ji jsk
Garmi ho ya sardi ho vix lagalo

hahahaha

Garmi ho chaahe sardi ho,
Sab kudrat ke nazaare hain...
Pyase to woh bhi hain,
Jinke ghar samander ke kinare hain..


aapka bahut shukriiiya aapne ye sher yaha pesh kiya
yunhee mahefeel sajate rahiyega


trufellings

chaahat 12th July 2004 05:19 PM

Meeta ji aur trufellings ji,
Bahut bahut shukriya reply karne ke liye!

Khush rahiye!

~Priya


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