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Abhi.Tamrakar 22nd July 2014 11:49 AM

Zindagii ... Abhi Tamrakar
 
Yaad tumko bahut aayegii zindagii
Fir kaheeN jab chalii jaayegi zindagi

Tum kaho maiN kahooN baat badh jayegii
Umra bhar sirf pachhtaayegii zindagii


Aayega laut jab mausam-e-ishqiyaaN
RaNg kuchh fir nayaa paayegii zindagii

Aas ho pyaas ho tum merii tum merii
Aaogii paas to aayegii zindagii

Zindagii lutf hai lutf se jee chalo
Mauj ke geet sab gaayegii zindagii

Zindagii geet hai gaaye jaa gaaye jaa
Muskuraa.. din nayaa laayegii zindagii


Kaun hai hai koii jo '@bhi' jaan le
ChhaaNv kab Dhoop kab laayegii zindagii~


sameer'shaad' 22nd July 2014 11:54 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Abhi.Tamrakar (Post 462814)
Yaad tumko bahut aayegii zindagii
Fir kaheeN jab chalii jaayegi zindagi

Tum kaho maiN kahooN baat badh jayegii
Umra bhar sirf pachhtaayegii zindagii


Aayega laut jab mausam-e-ishqiyaaN
RaNg kuchh fir nayaa paayegii zindagii

Aas ho pyaas ho tum merii tum merii
Aaogii paas to aayegii zindagii

Zindagii lutf hai lutf se jee chalo
Mauj ke geet sab gaayegii zindagii

Zindagii geet hai gaaye jaa gaaye jaa
Muskuraa.. din nayaa laayegii zindagii


Kaun hai hai koii jo '@bhi' jaan le
ChhaaNv kab Dhoop kab laayegii zindagii~



ummdah peshkash............ bahot khoob

aadeil 22nd July 2014 12:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Abhi.Tamrakar (Post 462814)
Yaad tumko bahut aayegii zindagii
Fir kaheeN jab chalii jaayegi zindagi

Tum kaho maiN kahooN baat badh jayegii
Umra bhar sirf pachhtaayegii zindagii


Aayega laut jab mausam-e-ishqiyaaN
RaNg kuchh fir nayaa paayegii zindagii

Aas ho pyaas ho tum merii tum merii
Aaogii paas to aayegii zindagii

Zindagii lutf hai lutf se jee chalo
Mauj ke geet sab gaayegii zindagii

Zindagii geet hai gaaye jaa gaaye jaa
Muskuraa.. din nayaa laayegii zindagii


Kaun hai hai koii jo '@bhi' jaan le
ChhaaNv kab Dhoop kab laayegii zindagii~


behad khubsurat qalaam pesh kiya hai... dilse daad...

zainy 22nd July 2014 01:18 PM

Bohat khoob Abhi ji. ..

3rd aur 5th sher zyada pasand aaye mujhe

Yuhi likhte rahiye. ..:)

Abhi.Tamrakar 22nd July 2014 03:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 462817)
ummdah peshkash............ bahot khoob

thankyou Shaad bhai... sath rahiye....

*AnAmikA* 24th July 2014 02:01 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Abhi.Tamrakar (Post 462814)
Yaad tumko bahut aayegii zindagii
Fir kaheeN jab chalii jaayegi zindagi

Tum kaho maiN kahooN baat badh jayegii
Umra bhar sirf pachhtaayegii zindagii


Aayega laut jab mausam-e-ishqiyaaN
RaNg kuchh fir nayaa paayegii zindagii

Aas ho pyaas ho tum merii tum merii
Aaogii paas to aayegii zindagii

Zindagii lutf hai lutf se jee chalo
Mauj ke geet sab gaayegii zindagii

Zindagii geet hai gaaye jaa gaaye jaa
Muskuraa.. din nayaa laayegii zindagii


Kaun hai hai koii jo '@bhi' jaan le
ChhaaNv kab Dhoop kab laayegii zindagii~



zabardastttttt bhai.... maza aagaya .. bht din baad padha tumhe forum par... bht acha laga..... :)
.... purane din yaad aagaye..

Abhi.Tamrakar 24th July 2014 09:10 AM

thanks Anu dii.... par mai to aapko padhta rehta hu aap hain jo bhool jati hain..

Hassan 25th July 2014 03:47 AM

wahhh Abhi jii,

Boht boht khoob...

Behad dilkash ghazal se nawaza hai aap ne...

DherooN daad....

Aate rahiye,

DuaooN ke saath,,

Madhu 14 27th July 2014 11:35 PM

Very nice
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Abhi.Tamrakar (Post 462814)
Yaad tumko bahut aayegii zindagii
Fir kaheeN jab chalii jaayegi zindagi

Tum kaho maiN kahooN baat badh jayegii
Umra bhar sirf pachhtaayegii zindagii


Aayega laut jab mausam-e-ishqiyaaN
RaNg kuchh fir nayaa paayegii zindagii

Aas ho pyaas ho tum merii tum merii
Aaogii paas to aayegii zindagii

Zindagii lutf hai lutf se jee chalo
Mauj ke geet sab gaayegii zindagii

Zindagii geet hai gaaye jaa gaaye jaa
Muskuraa.. din nayaa laayegii zindagii


Kaun hai hai koii jo '@bhi' jaan le
ChhaaNv kab Dhoop kab laayegii zindagii~


Wah wah ....bahut hi behtareen gazal ke liye dheron daad abhi ji...

aru 28th July 2014 07:04 PM

kya baat hai abhi jee......bahut hee sundar peshkash....daad kubul karein......

mujib66 30th July 2014 12:51 PM

wah..bohut khoob.
Maza agaya.....
Achhi zameen hai ghazal ki...aur mafoom bhi bohut umdah.
Mubarak ho.

Abhi.Tamrakar 31st July 2014 11:54 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hassan (Post 463172)
wahhh Abhi jii,

Boht boht khoob...

Behad dilkash ghazal se nawaza hai aap ne...

DherooN daad....

Aate rahiye,

DuaooN ke saath,,

Hasan sahab bahut bahut shukriyaa..

Abhi.Tamrakar 31st July 2014 11:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by N@zneen (Post 463210)
Bahot hi umda.......is behtareen ghazal keliye dheron daad.

bahut bahut shukriya Naazneen sahiba..

Quote:

Originally Posted by Madhu 14 (Post 463521)
Wah wah ....bahut hi behtareen gazal ke liye dheron daad abhi ji...

bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji.

Quote:

Originally Posted by aru (Post 463577)
kya baat hai abhi jee......bahut hee sundar peshkash....daad kubul karein......

Aru sahab shukraguzar hu aapka..

Quote:

Originally Posted by mujib66 (Post 463665)
wah..bohut khoob.
Maza agaya.....
Achhi zameen hai ghazal ki...aur mafoom bhi bohut umdah.
Mubarak ho.

Mujib sahab tahedil se aapka shukraguzaar hun..
ghazal ki zameen or ehsaasaat bahut kam log samajh paate hain..


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