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Sher ka jawaab sher meiN deejiye..
Sher ka jawab sher meiN deejiye..
DostoN, ham apni is Anjuman main ek or thread ka izafa karte haiN ess main aap ko ashar hi likhne haiN or agle member ko us sher ke jawab main koi sher meiN likhna hoo ga theek hai ?:) yeh koi naya silsila nahi hai sab ko pata hoga ke kaise khelna hai yeh.. aise threads say hame kaafi kuchh seekhne ko milta hai.. Sher kisii ka bhii ho sakta may be your own or borrowed..:p bas she'r likhte vaqt is baat ka khayaal rakha jaaye ke javaaban jo she'r likha jaa rahaa hai, us ka koi na koi rabt pichle she'r se hona chaahiye..Shukryah!:) to chaliye meiN hi Shuruaat karta huuN: ibtidaa-e-ishq hai rotaa hai kyaa aage aage dekhiye hotaa hai kyaa PS: to keep the beauty & meaning of the thread 'sher ka jawaab sher me.n deejiye', it is requested to all member that, please reply a 'sher' with a 'sher' only (not with four liners, qitaa, Ghazal, nazm etc etc). I hope all members will cooperate me to maintain beauty and dignity of the site in all level. thank u all :) Mayank |
frineds.. kuchh examples de raha huuN....
jaise kii pahela Sher hai.. ibtidaa-e-ishq hai rotaa hai kyaa aage aage dekhiye hotaa hai kyaa ess Sher ka jawaab kuchh ess tarah ho sakta hai... ishq me.n jaa.N se guzarate hai.n guzarane vaale maut kii raah nahii.n dekhate marane vaale aur phir ess Sher ka jawaab kuchh es tarah de sakte haiN... us lab-o-chashm se hai zindagii-o-maut apanii kab-kabhii pal me.n jilaayaa kabhii pal me.n maaraa |
fir ek nayi column....:) good..........
waise jawab dena try kar rahin hoon..sahin hain ki galat jaroor batana.... nida fazlijee ka sher hain yeh...... Kabhi kisiko mukammal jahan nahin milta, Kahin zameen to kahin aasman nahin milta... mausam:) |
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hmm.. answer sahiii hai aur rabt bhii dono SheroN meiN..:) yeh Sher waise bhii mera pasandidah Sher hai... so, thanks too ab ess Sher ke jawaab meiN, Ek Sher arz hai... zamii.n pe chal na sakaa aasmaan se bhii gayaa kaTaa ke par ko parindaa uDaan se bhii gayaa |
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I don't know if I'm replying this right.. still trying to.. Na cheeno usse uski udaan, keh raha hai ek parinda.. Aasmaan me hi hai muskaan uski, mat karo use sharminda.. ~Priya |
Chaahat aap ka Sher bilkul sahii... aur khuubsuurat Sher chuna hai aap ne.. daad!
apa ke SHer ke jawaab meiN yehi kahuNga.. Na cheeno usse uski udaan, keh raha hai ek parinda.. Aasmaan me hi hai muskaan uski, mat karo use sharminda.. mujhe maaluum hai us kaa Thikaana phir kahaa.N hogaa pari.ndaa aasmaa.N chhuune me.n jab naaqaam ho jaaye :) |
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is thread mai,mai bhi shirkat karna chahungi.umeed hai mera sher sahi hai, hamarii koshishon ko naakaami ka naam na do yaaron, milen na manzil jab tak hum haaraa nahi karte. |
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milen na manzil jab tak hum haaraa nahi karte. Sara jee: aap ne Sher sahii kahe haiN.. daad! ab aap ke Sher ke jawaab meiN.. ajab chiiz hai ye mohabbat kii baazii jo haare vo jiite, jo jiite vo haare |
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Mohabbat karne vaale, haar jeet ka kahaan hisaab rakhte hain.. Dil me mehboob ki dhadkan, aur aankhon me hijaab rakhte hain.. ~Priya |
Mohabbat karne vaale, haar jeet ka kahaan hisaab rakhte hain..
Dil me mehboob ki dhadkan, aur aankhon me hijaab rakhte hain.. ~Priya kyon ho koi hijaab mehboob aur aashiq ke darmiyaan?? bas yeh wasl ki baatein logon ko bataaya nahi karte. akelijaan |
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yeh raaj kuad kul jatey hai, dabaye nahi dabtey..... -sunita virender |
raaz kii baate.n likhii aur Khat khulaa rahane diyaa
jaane kyo.n rusavaa_iio.n kaa silasilaa rahane diyaa mausam:) |
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chorr dun tujhe par mera dil majboor hai, jane tu kis baat par etna magroor hai, mujhe chorr auro.N ki chahto.N mein churr hai.... |
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Ho gayi hai mashoor bewafai kuch is qadar unki Zikra aaya mere mehfil main to jhuk gayi nazar unki.....NM mausam:) |
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Unsey milee nazar, ek lamha-e-mukhtsar ke liye, dil yeh soch kar Mutama-iin ho gaya, jaise koyi mil gaya hai umar bhar ke liye... |
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aaj to besabab ushad hai dil, ishq hota to koi baat bhi thi... Not Mine |
mahfile shayarii ko mera aadab
main bhii is mahfil main shirkat karne kii koshish kar raha hoon umiid hai ki sher kuch thik thak hoga shukriyaa dilip merii mohbbat ko unhone dosti naam de diyaa shayad ye bhii ek ada thi unki mujhe satane kii..... |
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are didi aap confuse ho gayi hain aur bechare sandy ji ko bhi confuse kar rahin hain.....yaha last akshar se dusra sher start nahin karna hain...woh to dusre thread"baitbaazi "main karna hain..yaha to sher ke jawab mein sher hi likhna hain.........jo pehle sher se match karta ho...... mausam |
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Darta hun naye dost banane se.... Bahut Zakhm khaye hain dosti ke bahane se........ NM |
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yeh kaya ho gaya mujhe, gad-bad ghotala.....:confused: ab aap log mujhse chotty ho to maaf kar hi dogey .....hai na;-) |
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"Dosti kudha ka ek nayaab tohfa hai, na kar inkaar esko apna-ne se, thaam le tu haath dosti ka, mil jayegi janaat esi bahane se" -Sunita Virender |
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Har dost ko dost pyara mat samjho.. Nazar nazar me bhi farak hota hai.. Har nazar ko ishara mat samjho.. ------NOT MINE-------- ~Priya |
Thanks friends, aap sab waqaii meiN bohat achchha kar rahe haiN.. aap ek ke baad ek Sher ko paRhenge to bohat mazza aayega... aisa lagegaa kya khuub silsila chal raha hai..
Priya, aap ke Sher Har lehar ko kinaara mat samjho.. Har dost ko dost pyara mat samjho.. Nazar nazar me bhi farak hota hai.. Har nazar ko ishara mat samjho.. ess ke jawaab meiN: Takaraa hii ga_ii merii nazar un kii nazar se dhonaa hii pa.Daa haath mujhe qalb-o-jigar se qalb-o-jigar: jaaN aur dil |
Takaraa hii ga_ii merii nazar un kii nazar se
dhonaa hii pa.Daa haath mujhe qalb-o-jigar se -mayank jawaab arz hai, han,kuch pane ke liye kuch khona to padta hai, tune to bas khoya hai dil,woh apne qaraar ko tarasta hai. |
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shaayad aa jaayegaa saaqii ko taras ab ke baras mil na paayaa hai un aa.Nkho.n ka ras ab ke baras |
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na taras kisi ko aaye hai, kis daur se guzar rahe hain hum, ye poochne bhi na koi aaye hai!!! |
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Kisiko dhundhte hain hum kisime........nida fazli |
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Guzar jaati hain yunhi umar saari Kisiko dhundhte hain hum kisime har waqt ek anjana sa khwab bunte rahte hain bekas nigaho.n mian bhii pyar doondte rahte hain. shukriyaa :) |
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par badi udhas beqarar gujregi.....NM |
Sunita jee, gujar to jayegi eh dost bin tere, par badi udhas beqarar gujregi..... aap ke sher ka jawaab phuul Khushbuu jhiil mausam dhuup titalii aur havaa sab ke cheharo.n par udaasii tere jaane ke baad |
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You should just check the example given by Mayank... You don't have to start from last word but need to use one rabt from the previous sher.... I hope I am right... Mayank please correct me if I am wrong... |
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mujh ko thame huin baahein uskii....by parveen shakir |
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sandy ji jab mujhe aapni galati ka ahsaas hua, maine tabhi yeh post daal de thi.....again sorry for that. |
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chooTaa kar ke dekhiye jiivan kaa vistaar aa.Nkho.n bhar aakaash hai, baaho.n bhar sa.nsaar |
dost sandy ji, aapko dedicate kar rahi hoon yeh sher...ab to gusse ko jane dijiye...aur ek smile dijiye...aise:D
humse ek khata ho gaye, unki nazar bhi khaffa ho gaye, sar jukka diya jab unke saamne, to unki nigahey-karam ho gaye -sunita virender sorry mayank ji, aapke sher ka jawaab na dekar maine aapne ruthey huey dost ko mana-ne ke liye ek alkag sa sher likh diya....uske liye. |
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Kaash aisaa ho sabah jo haath tere chhoo aaye, too udahr phool chuney aur idhar khushboo aaye Kam se kam itna Muyassar toh ho insaan ka khulus, Ghar se nikalo toh padosi ko bhi khushboo aaye.. Merey ehsaas main bas gayee hai kaisee yeh mehak, Koyee khushbu main lagaaon teri khushboo aaye Muyassar - easy Khulus - Strength Of The Relationship |
Arey sunita ji chill, I am not angry at all. Infact I ws replying to mayank's sher But took some time and now when I posted my sher there are couple of more posts before me.... mistake oops...
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it's ok sandy , Sher ka jawaab achchha diya hai aap ne.. ab aap mere us Sher ka jawaab deejiye, jis Sher ka jawaab baaqi hai.. lekin jaldi kahiiN aisa na ho kii aap se pahle koii aur jawaab de de..:)
chooTaa kar ke dekhiye jiivan kaa vistaar aa.Nkho.n bhar aakaash hai, baaho.n bhar sa.nsaar Mayank |
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khata bakhsh do gar khata ho gai hamara irada to kuchh bhI na tha tumhari khata khud saza ho gai.... Just joking sunita ji.... Actually I didn't read your earlier post... Friends Now we should carry on with the theme of the thread.... Sorry Mayank for spoiling the fun of the thread.... |
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jeevan ke din rain kaa , kaise lage hisaab deemak ke ghar baith kar, lekhak likhe kitaab |
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