Bhoot ehsaan hai teri khataao ka mujh per,
Teri ek THOKAR ne mujhe chalna sikha diya..
Not mine

waaahhh kya sher hai Puneet bhaai....... too good

Thank you bhaiya.. meri puri kosish rehti hai ki achi se achi shayariya dhoond k laau or aapke samne pesh karu..:)

Aaj kal har shaks hume zindgi kaise jiye ye sikha jata hai,
Unhe kon samjhaye
Ek khwab adhura h humara warna humse behtar jina kise aata hai.. Puneet..

Mera aaj ka sher...
 

bite rat ke khayalo me subkhuch badl chuka tha..,
subah hui "or sub ek khawb hi to tha"




~: @SULTAAN RAAJ

waaahhhh bahot khoob................

waaahhh Accha likhaa hai Sultaan ji............................. likhte raheN,....

Shaad............

kaliyo.n ke ang ang me.n miThaa saa dard hai
biimaar nikahato.n ko zaraa gud_gudaayiye

[nikahat = fragrance]

By Abdul Adam

..hosla baddane ke liye bahut bahut sukriya shaad shahab..

Mera aaj ka sher......
 

milte fareb muskuraht.. kuch ko benaam kuch ka naam rakhunga..!!
gar raha salamt to.. "SULTAAN" tujhape kuch alfaz likhunga..!!




~: @SULTAAN RAAJ

Ranjishe to hoti hai mohobbat mein magar,
Tumse ye kisne kaha ki mujhe ADHOORA kar do..
Puneet..

Meraa aaj ka sher...
 

koi bhi wakyat aaine layak nahi tha..!!
phir bhi har ek sawal chubhta raha haqiqt ban ban ke..!!



~@ :SULTAAN RAAJ

aap ko bhuul jaaye.n ham itane to bevafaa nahii.n
aap se kyaa gilaa kare.n aap se kuchh gilaa nahii.n

By tasleem fazli

Uthti nahi nigaah KISI or ki taraf,
PAABAND kar gayi hai kisi ki NAZAR mujhe..
not mine

Bahut jayada pyaari lines likhi hai aapne bhaiya.. dil ko ander tak chu gayi.. kaha se laate h aap aise jajbat dil mein.. too good..

Bahut Achi lagi aapki shayri Sultaan ji..

behad sukragujar hu aapka..
Or khus bhi..
Taki aapke pasand ka likh ska

Meraa aaj ka sher..
 

karta raha tarif kabse.. anjane khata ho hi gai..
sar utha dekha aaj kuch sitare mujhase khafa the..



~: @SULTAAN RAAJ

Tere Payar ke siwa Kuch aur baki nahi is dil main ........
Dharkanon ki rooh tak jo kurbaan kar chuke hai tujh par.... Vikas

Mera aaj ka sher..
 

mout kisi dusman ka chehara nahi hoti..
kisi ki paband bhi nahi hoti..
tabhi to aaj ek or betajbadshah "a.M.r" ho gya..



~@ :SULTAAN RAAJ

raat badi mushkil se sulaya hai maine kud ko
In aankho ko tere sapno ka laalch de ke..

..Puneet

bahot hi accha sher share kiyaa hai mere bhai Puneet... mehfil sajaate raho, khush raho, aabaad raho...........

Shaad..........

Acchey ehsaas hain aapke Sultan bhai.......... bahot acchey..

likhte rahiye

Shaad..........

.
.
.
Sukriya janab ... Hosla hafjai ke liye bahut bahut sukragujar hu..

Mera aaj ka sher........
 

dosto se na mile to taklif hoti hai..
par fayda hai pith maine khanjar nahi lagta..


~: NM

Ustaadon ki is mehfil ko armaan ka salam sabse pahle to shaad bhai bahut he badhiya silsila shuru kiya hai aapne uske liye shukriya...to ye banda bhi is silsiley me judtey hue 2 lines pesh karta hai

Tera un zindagi me aana ajeeb lagta hai,kuch to baat hai tujhme jo tu dil ke kareeb lagta hai,
Pahle to barbaad ho chuke mohbbat me 'armaan',is baar dafn hongey aisa naseeb lagta hai.

Arjun'armaan'

Mere khayaal mein duniya ujad gayi meri,
Tere khayaal mein tinke the aashiyaan ke
Daag..

mera aaj ka sher..
 

zindagi ka ek padao gujar jane pe..
ek sant se sawal ka., ek sant sa jawab mila..
maine akhari nind tak sath hu., maine bus ek khawb hu..



~@ :SULTAAN RAAJ

Harf-e-Maula Teri Khudai Ko Kya Dosh Doo
Unse Meri Judaai Ko Kyaa Dosh Doo...
Yeh Tay Tha.. Mujhe Behna Hoga Uske Gham Me..
Uski Meri Ladaai Ko Kyaa Dosh Doo...

Meraa aaj ka sher....
 

itna bahra bhi na hua hu ki
"tere ruthe pairo ka aahat na pa saku"
ab mujhe mout ke kadam bhi saf saf sunai parte hai..

itna bahra bhi na hua hu ki
"tere ruthe pairo ka aahat na pa saku"
ab mujhe mout ke kadam bhi saf saf sunai parte hai..


~@ :SULTAAN

mera aj ka sher...
 

palko ki jhapkiya.. ankho ki ye sararte..
badi katil hai tere sar ka resmi dupatta..


~@ :::SULTAAN RAAJ