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aru 17th February 2013 03:20 PM

aaj fir akele mein
 
Aaj fir akele mein,
Band ek kamre mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi...

Do baatein uski sun,
Do apni kahin thi,
Us raat aankhon mein,
Neend hee nahin thi...

Haal to purane the,
Tabiyat bhi vahi thi,
Aansuon ne mere fir,
Baat apni kahi thi...

ek purani yaad pe,
Fir vo hansi thi,
Zindagi jaise meri,
Usi mein basi thi....


Main bhi tanha tha,
Vo bhi akeli thi,
Kismat bhi khoob,
Hamare saath kheli thi....


Aansuon se mere to,
Tasveer mein nami thi,
Koi bata de kahan,
Pyaar mein kami thi....


Tanhayee ke aalam mein,
Bhar ke baahon mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi....

sameer'shaad' 19th February 2013 12:41 PM

very nice Aru bhai.............................................. ....... :)

zainy 19th February 2013 12:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aru (Post 448941)
Aaj fir akele mein,
Band ek kamre mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi...

Do baatein uski sun,
Do apni kahin thi,
Us raat aankhon mein,
Neend hee nahin thi...

Haal to purane the,
Tabiyat bhi vahi thi,
Aansuon ne mere fir,
Baat apni kahi thi...

ek purani yaad pe,
Fir vo hansi thi,
Zindagi jaise meri,
Usi mein basi thi....


Main bhi tanha tha,
Vo bhi akeli thi,
Kismat bhi khoob,
Hamare saath kheli thi....


Aansuon se mere to,
Tasveer mein nami thi,
Koi bata de kahan,
Pyaar mein kami thi....


Tanhayee ke aalam mein,
Bhar ke baahon mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi....


Touching.....................................

aru 20th February 2013 11:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 448997)
very nice Aru bhai.............................................. ....... :)

Thanx a lot sameer bhai..................

aru 16th March 2013 08:23 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by zainy (Post 448999)
Touching.....................................

Thanx zainy jee......................

musharrafhusain 16th March 2013 11:28 AM

Khoobsurat Takhaiyul, behad masoom andaaz, aur kamal ka izhaar,
meri daad gubool karein.
God bless you.
musharrafhusain

sunita thakur 16th March 2013 01:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aru (Post 448941)
Aaj fir akele mein,
Band ek kamre mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi...

Do baatein uski sun,
Do apni kahin thi,
Us raat aankhon mein,
Neend hee nahin thi...

Haal to purane the,
Tabiyat bhi vahi thi,
Aansuon ne mere fir,
Baat apni kahi thi...

ek purani yaad pe,
Fir vo hansi thi,
Zindagi jaise meri,
Usi mein basi thi....


Main bhi tanha tha,
Vo bhi akeli thi,
Kismat bhi khoob,
Hamare saath kheli thi....


Aansuon se mere to,
Tasveer mein nami thi,
Koi bata de kahan,
Pyaar mein kami thi....


Tanhayee ke aalam mein,
Bhar ke baahon mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi....

wahhhh....behad nazuk ahsaas...................!

aru 31st March 2013 05:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by musharrafhusain (Post 450080)
Khoobsurat Takhaiyul, behad masoom andaaz, aur kamal ka izhaar,
meri daad gubool karein.
God bless you.
musharrafhusain

Thanx musharraf jee.....................

kwahish 1st April 2013 01:56 PM

Aru Jee Aadaab!



Waah janab waah kia kahuN janab ahsaas O khayaal haiN ke haal e dil ka bayaaN... gazab kar diyaa janab behad dilfareb ahsaas rahe waaH...

Is khoobsurat kalaam par meri dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...


Khuda Hafez... :)

aru 3rd April 2013 12:13 PM

..
Quote:

Originally Posted by sunita virender (Post 450092)
wahhhh....behad nazuk ahsaas...................!

Thanx sunita diii......................

aru 12th November 2013 10:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kwahish (Post 450757)
Aru Jee Aadaab!



Waah janab waah kia kahuN janab ahsaas O khayaal haiN ke haal e dil ka bayaaN... gazab kar diyaa janab behad dilfareb ahsaas rahe waaH...

Is khoobsurat kalaam par meri dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...


Khuda Hafez... :)

Thanx khwaish jee....aapki daad sar aankhon pe...

tabaah 13th November 2013 11:00 AM

Aansuon se mere to,
Tasveer mein nami thi,
Koi bata de kahan,
Pyaar mein kami thi....


Wah aru ji bahut khoob .. ye lines dil ko chu gayi.. aapko hajaro mubarakbaad..

aru 7th February 2014 07:40 AM

thanw a lot tabaah jee....aapka sneh yun hee bana rahe....

shakir ali 01 7th February 2014 06:01 PM

bahut hi ache ehsas hai
aru jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii super
daaaaaaaaad

aru 14th July 2014 09:31 PM

thanx a lot shakir bhai.....................................

Harash Mahajan 14th July 2014 09:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aru (Post 448941)
Aaj fir akele mein,
Band ek kamre mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi...

Do baatein uski sun,
Do apni kahin thi,
Us raat aankhon mein,
Neend hee nahin thi...

Haal to purane the,
Tabiyat bhi vahi thi,
Aansuon ne mere fir,
Baat apni kahi thi...

ek purani yaad pe,
Fir vo hansi thi,
Zindagi jaise meri,
Usi mein basi thi....


Main bhi tanha tha,
Vo bhi akeli thi,
Kismat bhi khoob,
Hamare saath kheli thi....


Aansuon se mere to,
Tasveer mein nami thi,
Koi bata de kahan,
Pyaar mein kami thi....


Tanhayee ke aalam mein,
Bhar ke baahon mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi....

Bahut sunder peshkash aru ji.....ek oomda nazm..........

zarraa 14th July 2014 11:08 PM

dil ko chhoone waalee aur aaNkhon ko nam karne waali nazm hai Aru ji !!!

Harash Mahajan 14th July 2014 11:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aru (Post 448941)
Aaj fir akele mein,
Band ek kamre mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi...

Do baatein uski sun,
Do apni kahin thi,
Us raat aankhon mein,
Neend hee nahin thi...

Haal to purane the,
Tabiyat bhi vahi thi,
Aansuon ne mere fir,
Baat apni kahi thi...

ek purani yaad pe,
Fir vo hansi thi,
Zindagi jaise meri,
Usi mein basi thi....


Main bhi tanha tha,
Vo bhi akeli thi,
Kismat bhi khoob,
Hamare saath kheli thi....


Aansuon se mere to,
Tasveer mein nami thi,
Koi bata de kahan,
Pyaar mein kami thi....


Tanhayee ke aalam mein,
Bhar ke baahon mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi....

Bahut sunder peshkash aru ji.....ek oomda nazm.............।........

aslam noor 15th July 2014 05:02 PM

Arvid sahab bhut shaandaar nazm se nawaaza hai aapne, yuN hi likhte rahiye daad paish e khidmat hai qubool farmaaiye




aslam

AHMAD SHAKIL 16th July 2014 12:19 PM

Aru Ji..... Khubsurat Ahsasaat Se Saji Achi Nazm Hai....
DAAAAAAAD qabool Farmaayen..

aru 20th July 2014 12:37 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Harash Mahajan (Post 462011)
Bahut sunder peshkash aru ji.....ek oomda nazm..........

thanx harash jee.......aapka sneh yun hee bana rahe....

aru 23rd July 2014 01:43 AM

thanx zarra jee...aapki daad sar aankhon pe.........

aru 26th July 2014 11:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Harash Mahajan (Post 462037)
Bahut sunder peshkash aru ji.....ek oomda nazm.............।........

thanx harash jee......bahut bahut aabhaar aapka....

Madhu 14 27th July 2014 12:21 PM

Band ek kamre me...
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by aru (Post 448941)
Aaj fir akele mein,
Band ek kamre mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi...

Do baatein uski sun,
Do apni kahin thi,
Us raat aankhon mein,
Neend hee nahin thi...

Haal to purane the,
Tabiyat bhi vahi thi,
Aansuon ne mere fir,
Baat apni kahi thi...

ek purani yaad pe,
Fir vo hansi thi,
Zindagi jaise meri,
Usi mein basi thi....


Main bhi tanha tha,
Vo bhi akeli thi,
Kismat bhi khoob,
Hamare saath kheli thi....


Aansuon se mere to,
Tasveer mein nami thi,
Koi bata de kahan,
Pyaar mein kami thi....


Tanhayee ke aalam mein,
Bhar ke baahon mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi....

Bahut khoob. .....like always. I can feel ur emotions.....


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