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krishna

9th August 2010 10:46 AM

Vo rishta tera mera hai

VO RISHTA TERA MERA HAI

Kisi geet ka jo kavi man se
Chiriyon ka jo neel gagan se
Door desh ka ghar aangan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Bhaon ka jo hota man se
Pratimaon ka jo poojan se
Aur aatma ka is tan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Aansoo ka jo kisi nayan se
Boondon ka jo hai sawan se
Doooor kchitij par dhara gagan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Dil ki ganthen khol ke dekho
Man ki aankhen khol ke dekho
Chatak sa VISHWAS hai krishna
wo rishta tera mera hai.

krishna

mittal_pali

11th August 2010 01:26 PM

Good post. Thanks for sharing............

krishna

14th December 2010 01:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mittal_pali (Post 405611)

Good post. Thanks for sharing............

aapne samay diya,pasand kiya.bahut-bahut shukriya

krishna

sunita thakur

14th December 2010 05:11 PM

bahut khoob.........................!

ajay nidaan

14th December 2010 08:39 PM

mere dost

Krishna Ji

Kya baat hai rachana bahut hi khoobsurat hai, bahut khoob aise hi likhate rahiyega..

shakuntala vyas

15th December 2010 05:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by krishna (Post 405420)

VO RISHTA TERA MERA HAI

Kisi geet ka jo kavi man se
Chiriyon ka jo neel gagan se
Door desh ka ghar aangan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Bhaon ka jo hota man se
Pratimaon ka jo poojan se
Aur aatma ka is tan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Aansoo ka jo kisi nayan se
Boondon ka jo hai sawan se
Doooor kchitij par dhara gagan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Dil ki ganthen khol ke dekho
Man ki aankhen khol ke dekho
Chatak sa VISHWAS hai krishna
wo rishta tera mera hai.

krishna

BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA
YAH BAHUT HI DIL KO CHOO GAYI LINES

Dil ki ganthen khol ke dekho
Man ki aankhen khol ke dekho
Chatak sa VISHWAS hai krishna
wo rishta tera mera hai.

LIKHATE RAHE

SADA KHUSH RAHE

krishna

16th December 2010 11:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sunita virender (Post 418045)

bahut khoob.........................!

sunita ji,aapne rachna pasand ki mujhe bahut hausla mila aapka bahut-bahut shukriya.

krishna

krishna

16th December 2010 12:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ajay nidaan (Post 418062)

Krishna Ji

Kya baat hai rachana bahut hi khoobsurat hai, bahut khoob aise hi likhate rahiyega..

aapne samay diya rachna pasand ki aapka bahut-bahut shukriya,ham jaroor likhte rahenge aur ummeed rakhenge ki aapke kuchh keemti lamhe hame jaroor milenge

krishna

krishna

16th December 2010 12:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by shakuntala vyas (Post 418148)

BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA
YAH BAHUT HI DIL KO CHOO GAYI LINES

Dil ki ganthen khol ke dekho
Man ki aankhen khol ke dekho
Chatak sa VISHWAS hai krishna
wo rishta tera mera hai.

LIKHATE RAHE

SADA KHUSH RAHE

vyasji aapki duaon ne hamesha mujhe himmat dee hai mai aabhari hun aapne keemti samay meri rachna ko diya aur pasand kiya.dhanyvad.
krishna

naresh_mehra110

3rd January 2011 06:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by krishna (Post 405420)

Very Impressive ... Very Nice Poetry ... Krishna Ji !

dili daad ... ! khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !

krishna

5th January 2011 12:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110 (Post 419798)

Very Impressive ... Very Nice Poetry ... Krishna Ji !

dili daad ... ! khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !

mehra sahib namaskar, aapko ye rachna achchhi lagi jankar mai bahut khush hun.aapne hamesha mera hausla badhaya hai shayad isiliye mai aage kuchh aur likh pata hun.aapki daad aur duaon ka bahut bahut shukriya
krishna

rajinderseep

11th January 2011 09:00 AM

originally posted by Krishna

Kisi geet ka jo kavi man se
Chiriyon ka jo neel gagan se
Door desh ka ghar aangan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Bhaon ka jo hota man se
Pratimaon ka jo poojan se
Aur aatma ka is tan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Aansoo ka jo kisi nayan se
Boondon ka jo hai sawan se
Doooor kchitij par dhara gagan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Dil ki ganthen khol ke dekho
Man ki aankhen khol ke dekho
Chatak sa VISHWAS hai krishna
wo rishta

how nice it is ........very nice.
rajinderseep

prem_anjana

11th January 2011 11:40 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by krishna (Post 405420)

krishna ko prem anjana ka salaam
jaankar achcha laga ki apne hi sahar mein ik sdc user
itni khoobsoorat aur dil ko chujane wali kavita likh raha hai....
kya baat hai!!.......

jo tune na jana jo maine na jana
wo rishta tera mera hai...........

khush rahe , swasth rahe.
aapka prem anjana........

krishna

13th January 2011 04:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by rajinderseep (Post 420525)

rajinderseep ji namaskar,apko kavita achchhi lgi apne saraha to mera pryas safal hua.america me rhkar bhi hindi kavita ko apne samay diya iske liye mai khush bhi hun aur aabhari bhi. THANK YOU.

krishna

13th January 2011 04:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by prem_anjana (Post 420541)

anjana ji namskar,bahut bahut dhnyvad aapko kavita achchhi lgi aur shukriya SDC ka ki ek shahar k do anjano ko mila diya
krishna

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