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AnilMoradabadi 18th January 2006 09:45 AM

Tere ghar se mere ghar talak
 
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Moderator sahab, ummeed hai ki maine aapka koi rule nahi toda hai.

arzhai.....


Mat pooch ke kya kya saha tere aagaaz se meri had talak,
Badnaam mera naam hai, tere ghar se mer ghar talak,

YuN bulaa ke apni bazm meiN, na is qadar zaleel kar,
Nahi jaa sakoonga teri qasam, tere ghar se meri ghar talak,

HaiN charaag gul jahaaN ke magar, mera dil to jal raha hi hai,
Bikhari hui hai roshani, tere ghar se mere ghar talak,

Hai marne se pahele ye iltezaa, use ek naza to maiN dekh looN,
Hai ye bheeD itni kyoN is qadar, tere ghar se mere ghar talak.


... Anil Moradabadi

Parul 18th January 2006 09:50 AM

Anil ji...

Welcome to shayri.com

Aapne bahut achha likha hai. take care & keep writting!

Have a nice day!


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