Papa mere pas ajao
 

Papa mere tum baitho paas
muje de do wahi atmavisvas
jo diya karte they tum kabi
jab paas tumare rehti thi mein
unhi palo'n ko yaad kerti hun
jab kandhey pe baith tumare
ghumti thi saare ghar mei
meri ek karahat se tum
daudey aate they sab bhulkar
meri khwaish per tum
bhar dete they mera aanchal
anginat chocolate'on se.

Mere Papa tum to mere
pyare dost hua kartey they
Tume hi to apna Boy friend
kaha kerti thi mein
Tum hi to meri Maa they
saathi bi to tum hi they.

Ajao mere paas tum Papa
dek lo aakar mujhe
mein wahi choti si
jaan hun tumari
jiske aaspas mamta ka
bichona nehin hei.
Papa ke pyar se bana hua
wo takiya bi nehin hei.

Kaanch

aaj aapne papa ki yaad dila di mere pyaare papa hmm i am going to call him today only

sach mai missing him ek baar hsadi ho jaye to sab kuch kitan door ho jata hai sach mai papa has been very close to me
i love my papa

thnx kaanch ji for such a sweet poem

shrdh

Shraddha ji,
Aapko bi papa ki yaad aayi to khusi hui. jaldi call karlijye unhe.
wese ye ek sach hi hei jise meine baya kiya hei, bhale hi iske alfaz sadharan hein magar ehsas usi choti bachi ke dil se nikle hein.
aapne sahi kah ki shadi ke baad duri ban jati hei. Magr mein abi bi single hun. meri mom or papa chandigarh mei hein or mei dehradun mein.
apna khyal rakhiyga.

aapki
kaanch

Kanchan,

Wonderful.... i like these kind of poetry... ones which are heart felt... it shows ur love for ur dad ...

Liked it
Take Care
Rohin

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Bohat acha laga aapko padhkar...hamesha hi lagta hai par jab koi rachna khud par yaha use mehsoos kar k likhi jaye to aur bhi usme nikhar aa jata hai aur ye bhi dil se likhi hui hai aur ishke sabad bhi dil mein utar gaye aaj


Shukriyah................

Apka

Diggaj

wow
 

bahut dino baad ankhon ko nam karen walee ek rachana samne ayee mere dil ko choo gayee kabhee papa betee ke sambandh ko le kara maien bhee ek rachana poste ke ethee yahan woh bhee yaad aa gayee waqt mile to dekhana

bahut hee khoobsoorat hai ye rachana jo tum ne kahee

meree kavita dekhana --->

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...threadid=46198
anil

Kanchan Ji,
Very very emotional :)
Do keep sharing.

Sweet...so very sweet... Parental support is so important in our life... We become the way they groom us... Am lucky in this respect... have always been with my parents.. Touchwood...:)

Ehsaas bayaan karti rahiye... khayal rakhiye...

Rohin ji

Thanks a lot for appreciation.

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Diggaj
Acha laga tumne isse pada or mehsus kiya.

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Shukriya Anil ji jo aapne muje hosla diya.
or aapki kavita bohat achi lagi.

Shalini ji
shukriya aapka jo aapne muje pada.

Pulkit ji,

that's true n' do take care of your parents.
thanks

Kanchan

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Kaanch

poochunga nahin ki kaisi ho....kyonki tumhne ismei likh diya hei.
hmm....sochna parhega ab :confused:
Khair, Papa ki jab itni yaad aarahi hai tow tumhne unse milney jaana chahiye.
Kaanch, tumhney aam zindagi se jo shabd utthaye hain unhe parhkar bahaut aacha laga. Ek komal si rachna hai yeh, marm ehsaas chupa hai. Waise kaam hee sab kuch nahin hota hamesha, rishtey bhi humaari zindagi mein maayne rakhtey hain.

aise shabd humey paraahney ke liye mera dhanyavaad.

vipin
...ek dost

Kaanch, tumhari kaivita ne humey rone ka ek mauka diya, lekin rokar v mai bahut khoos
 

HI Kanchan!!!

waisey to humey jayda waqt nahi milta, sayad aapki tarah mai v thoda busy hota hoon, lekin aaj jab thodi der ke liye apney ek ristedar ki brachna padney es site per aaya, to achanak meri nazar "PAPA" word per ruki, or mai bata nahi sakta ek ajib si hal chal mach gayi mere under, mai apney PAPA ke saath bitaye un puraney dino me chala gaya, maine dekha , kuchh logo ne isey padkar apney "PAPA" ko phone kiya, lekin Kaanch, meri majboori to ye hai na ki mai unhey phone lagaoon v to kaisey, unhoney apna koi number hi nahi diya humey, pichhley saal hi es duniya se kisi or duniya me gaye the, or aaj tak unhey hamari yaad nahi aayi, bhool gaye wo humey, lekin haumey unki yaad abhi v aati hai, usi yaadon ko aapney taja kar diya aaj fir....
pata hai kaanch, tumhari kavita padkar mai thoda senti ho gaya tha, lekin ab mai ro raha hoon............agar un tak tumhari aawaj pahoonche na, to bol dena, "rohit is waiting for ur (PAPA)number..........number na dena to na sahi, lekin us sey baaten jaroor kar lo....., he is really missing u"

kitni massomiyat se likha hai tumney..( vishesh kar ye line "dek lo aakar mujhe", waqai bhai, touching one !!!)...

Papa mere tum baitho paas
muje de do wahi atmavisvas
jo diya karte they tum kabi
jab paas tumare rehti thi mein


Ajao mere paas tum Papa
dek lo aakar mujhe
mein wahi choti si
jaan hun tumari
jiske aaspas mamta ka
bichona nehin .....

kaanch, aaj pahley hi din mujhe tumsey ek sikayat ho gayi, tumney humey rula diya...
LEKIN KOI BAAT NAHI BHAI, isi wajah se mai apne PAPA ke bahut karinb hokar aa gaya, ek bar fir wahi ehsaas mahsoosh kiya maine........aaj rokar man halka ho gaya, pichhle 1 saal se mai udas jaror tha, lekin roya kabhi nahi tha, kuchh khoney ka ehsaas to jaroor tha, lekin mahssosh karney ka mauka nahui mila , aaj wo mauka aapney diya,
thanks, thanks a lot Kaanch bhai!!!

Rohit Sinha here

Kaanch, tumhari kaivita ne humey rone ka ek mauka diya, lekin rokar v mai bahut khoos
 

HI Kanchan!!!

waisey to humey jayda waqt nahi milta, sayad aapki tarah mai v thoda busy hota hoon, lekin aaj jab thodi der ke liye apney ek ristedar ki brachna padney es site per aaya, to achanak meri nazar "PAPA" word per ruki, or mai bata nahi sakta ek ajib si hal chal mach gayi mere under, mai apney PAPA ke saath bitaye un puraney dino me chala gaya, maine dekha , kuchh logo ne isey padkar apney "PAPA" ko phone kiya, lekin Kaanch, meri majboori to ye hai na ki mai unhey phone lagaoon v to kaisey, unhoney apna koi number hi nahi diya humey, pichhley saal hi es duniya se kisi or duniya me gaye the, or aaj tak unhey hamari yaad nahi aayi, bhool gaye wo humey, lekin haumey unki yaad abhi v aati hai, usi yaadon ko aapney taja kar diya aaj fir....
pata hai kaanch, tumhari kavita padkar mai thoda senti ho gaya tha, lekin ab mai ro raha hoon............agar un tak tumhari aawaj pahoonche na, to bol dena, "rohit is waiting for ur (PAPA)number..........number na dena to na sahi, lekin us sey baaten jaroor kar lo....., he is really missing u"

kitni massomiyat se likha hai tumney..( vishesh kar ye line "dek lo aakar mujhe", waqai bhai, touching one !!!)...

Papa mere tum baitho paas
muje de do wahi atmavisvas
jo diya karte they tum kabi
jab paas tumare rehti thi mein


Ajao mere paas tum Papa
dek lo aakar mujhe
mein wahi choti si
jaan hun tumari
jiske aaspas mamta ka
bichona nehin .....

kaanch, aaj pahley hi din mujhe tumsey ek sikayat ho gayi, tumney humey rula diya...
LEKIN KOI BAAT NAHI BHAI, isi wajah se mai apne PAPA ke bahut karinb hokar aa gaya, ek bar fir wahi ehsaas mahsoosh kiya maine........aaj rokar man halka ho gaya, pichhle 1 saal se mai udas jaror tha, lekin roya kabhi nahi tha, kuchh khoney ka ehsaas to jaroor tha, lekin mahssosh karney ka mauka nahui mila , aaj wo mauka aapney diya,
thanks, thanks a lot Kaanch bhai!!!

Rohit Sinha here

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Papa mere tum baitho paas
muje de do wahi atmavisvas
jo diya karte they tum kabi
jab paas tumare rehti thi mein
unhi palo'n ko yaad kerti hun
jab kandhey pe baith tumare
ghumti thi saare ghar mei
meri ek karahat se tum
daudey aate they sab bhulkar
meri khwaish per tum
bhar dete they mera aanchal
anginat chocolate'on se.

tumhari bahut yaad aati hai papa..
her pal man entjaar kiya kerta hai..anginat baate hai jo tumse kahani hai aur sunani hai dil ko sukun dene vaali baate..
tum kab aaoge papa...

Mere Papa tum to mere
pyare dost hua kartey they
Tume hi to apna Boy friend
kaha kerti thi mein
Tum hi to meri Maa they
saathi bi to tum hi they.

her jagah hi to maine tumhe paya tha papa.. chahe mujhe dost ki jarurat ho ya phir maa ki kami, tumhe dekhane ko taras rahi hain meri aankhe.. tum aa jao papa..

Ajao mere paas tum Papa
dek lo aakar mujhe
mein wahi choti si
jaan hun tumari
jiske aaspas mamta ka
bichona nehin hei.
Papa ke pyar se bana hua
wo takiya bi nehin hei.

tumne mujhe jo diya tha.. khushiyo ka gharaunda.. aaj suna sa pad raha hai.. mamata ki mahak.. papa ki khanak... de jao vo sangeet jo dhundh rahi hai ye aatma.. aa jao papa.. tum aa jao...



Kanchan ji aapki yah kavita bahut pasand aayi... aur mujhe mahsoos ho raha hai ki yah kitani real hai... sach aapke shabdo se maine hakikat ke aiane me se gujara.. bahut khub aapne likha..

likhati rahiye,

Akant...

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Vipin
aaj tumare muh se sunker acha laga ki ...kaam sab kuch nahin hota, ristey bi hote hein. Thanks a lot vipin

aapki
Kaanch

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Rohit Ji
Muje sach mei bohat duk hua aapki baat jankar. Is post ne aapke dukon ko taja kar diya us'se or duk hua. Yeh duniya ka niyam hi to hei ki sabi ko ana-jana hei.kal aapko, muje or sabko ye jagah khali kerni hei aane walon ke liy. Mein janti hun aapka duk baton se kam nehi hoga magr hum kar bi kya sakte hein. Aapke samne puri zindagi hei, jise aapne bohat aage le jana hei. Aapke apno ka sath dena hei.

Islye himat rakye or apno ka sath dijye

Kaanch

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Akant ji,
kitne ache alfaj diye hein aapne. bohat achey lage, thanks
Kanchan

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meri Kaanch,
papa ko padhaye yah ahesaas?
bhav ka sagar... baha sakte hai kuch saamanya shabd bhi ... aur yahi shabd ki taakat hai k .. huamre dil k ander ootar sakte hai yah shabd ......
apna khayal rakhna

tumhari meena

don no why it made my cry today...
felt sorry for one of my close friends...when i read the title
papa...mere paas aajao...
really nice...
ur papa is always with u
take care

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Pranaam Meena Ji,
Kaanch is ehsaas ko lekar Papa se milney chali gayi hai. Bahaut khush thi woh.

vipin

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mere Mitr Vipin,

humari dosti mai shukria jaise shabd jaha maaina nahi rakhte hai waha par hi oosi pal is shabd ko soche to bahut sa maaina rahta bhi hai.. jaha dosto par haq bana lete hai .. waha par hi dost ka sath hona.. woh bhi sahi waqt par.. sath hona.. - muje meri likhi hui pankti sarthak nazar aayi...

dost ki dahliz par sar jhukana...
bhagwaan ko yaad karna hota hai.

Kaanch ki is khushi ko muj tak pahunchane ke liye shukria. mai yah bhi jaanti hu ke Kaanch yah khushi paa sake oos mai tumhara pratyaksh/ apratyaksh bahut hi sath hai..
aur mere pichhlae bechaine dino mai, har pal mere sath rahne ke liye .. tumhari aabhari hu .

Vipin tumhari dosti ke aage mai humesha nat mastak hu.

tumhari Mitr Meena

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Meena Ji
Namastey !
Mei thodi der ke liy net per ayi to aapka message pada. mei abi chandigarh mei hun mom or papa se milney ayi. bohat khush hun mein. ek baat batani thi to yahi bata rhi hun, mei jab yaha pahuchi to ek mera yaha ek surprise intejar kar rah tha. papa ne mere liy chota sa get-together raka tha, jabki meine unhe bataya nehi tha ki mei arahi hun or na hi har baar esa hota hei ki koi surprise mile. to ab aap khud andaja laga lijye ki ye kese hua....lol, muje yakin hei aap samaj jayngi.
anyway, aapke lafzo mei chupa hosla pada meine, shukriya Meena Ji
aapki
kaanch

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shukriya nahi kahugi vipin
please do take care of yrslf

kaanch

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meri kaanch,

:)
tumhari meena