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Taish 22nd November 2006 04:58 PM

SUHAAG ki raat…!
 
humne tumse pyar kiya,, sangini bana tujhe sweekaar kiya,, tujhe yaad karne ke siwa,, aur kuch na maine, eh yaar kiya,, sochte the ki kitni khoobsurat wo mulakaat hogi,, kehne ko to meri suhaagraat hogi,, na jaane kitne aadhe adhure ehsash honge,, pehli baar hum itne paas honge,, sochte hain kitni khoobsurat wo mulaakat hogi,, kehne ko to meri suhaagraat hogi...!




os me bhigi sharmati kaliyaaN,
husn ke jhonke me ithlaati pattiyaaN,
andhere me pighalna seher ka,
aur sote sahar ki gumti* battiyaaN...!

*gum hoti,, putting off of lights...!


uff! jaare ka ye mausam,
aur unke kurbat* ki garmi,
meri baahon me unka hona,
aur ungliyon ki besharmi...!

*nikat.ta,, nearness...!


do badanoN ka lipatnaa,
ek choti si razaaai me...
aata hai ek alag hi mazaa,
pyar ki is angdaai me...

angdaai me,
ek choti si razaaai me...!


fir hui wahi praatah* bela,
kisi ka darwaaza khatkhatana,
uthana jaldi baazi me,
aur fir halka sharmana...!

*subah ka samay,, morning time...!


fir ek intezaar,
kaliyon ke sharmane ka...
machalna unhe dekh ke,
afsosh choo v na paane ka...!

Vipinbox 22nd November 2006 06:55 PM

Lucky Ji
bahaut khoob likha hai aapne, parhkar bahaut accha laga.

"os me bhigi sharmati kaliyaaN / husn ke jhonke me ithlaati pattiyaaN / andhere me pighalna seher ka / aur sote sahar ki gumti* battiyaaN...! "

vipin

Taish 23rd November 2006 10:31 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vipinbox (Post 219466)
Lucky Ji
bahaut khoob likha hai aapne, parhkar bahaut accha laga.

"os me bhigi sharmati kaliyaaN / husn ke jhonke me ithlaati pattiyaaN / andhere me pighalna seher ka / aur sote sahar ki gumti* battiyaaN...! "

vipin



vipin bhaiya bahut dino baad aana hua aapka is nacheez ki mehfil me aur jaan kar behad khushi hui ki aapko ye kalaam pasand aaya humara, guzarish bas yahi rahegi ki aap aage v hume yunhi padhte rahen...!

koi to ho 28th November 2006 04:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ghayal_shayar (Post 219448)
humne tumse pyar kiya,, sangini bana tujhe sweekaar kiya,, tujhe yaad karne ke siwa,, aur kuch na maine, eh yaar kiya,, sochte the ki kitni khoobsurat wo mulakaat hogi,, kehne ko to meri suhaagraat hogi,, na jaane kitne aadhe adhure ehsash honge,, pehli baar hum itne paas honge,, sochte hain kitni khoobsurat wo mulaakat hogi,, kehne ko to meri suhaagraat hogi...!




os me bhigi sharmati kaliyaaN,
husn ke jhonke me ithlaati pattiyaaN,
andhere me pighalna seher ka,
aur sote sahar ki gumti* battiyaaN...!

*gum hoti,, putting off of lights...!


uff! jaare ka ye mausam,
aur unke kurbat* ki garmi,
meri baahon me unka hona,
aur ungliyon ki besharmi...!

*nikat.ta,, nearness...!


do badanoN ka lipatnaa,
ek choti si razaaai me...
aata hai ek alag hi mazaa,
pyar ki is angdaai me...

angdaai me,
ek choti si razaaai me...!


fir hui wahi praatah* bela,
kisi ka darwaaza khatkhatana,
uthana jaldi baazi me,
aur fir halka sharmana...!

*subah ka samay,, morning time...!


fir ek intezaar,
kaliyon ke sharmane ka...
machalna unhe dekh ke,
afsosh choo v na paane ka...!



arey ghayal aap dard ke ilawa romantic poetry bhi likhtay hain :p herat hoi jaaan ker :) kher likhi achi hai keep writing wesay bhi insaan ko sirf dard hi nahi likhna chahiye zindagi ke aur bohat pehlu hotay hain aesay hi likhte rahiye

Taish 29th November 2006 04:43 PM

are ise kahaan se utha diya aapne, maan gaye aapko, itne peeche se is kalaam ko dhoondh nikala aapne, khushi hui jaan kar ki aapko humara kalaam pasand aaya, bas guzarish yahi rahegi ki aap aage v hume yunhi padhti rahiyega aur apni nek rai se hume nawaazte rahiyega...!

asdfgh 17th April 2009 04:08 PM

Haaaayee kyaaaa baaaat hai....

Mujhe to . . . . . . .
Kuch kehte ni ban raha....

Aapki poem padh kar gussa b aa raha hai aur pyaar b. . .

Thanks 4 sharing Lucky ji . . . . :)

Taish 18th May 2009 08:56 PM

shukriya janaab jaan kar ahcha laga ki aapko humara likha pasand aaya, bas yunh padhne ki jehmiyaten uthaati raheN aap...!!

janumanu 19th May 2009 05:42 PM

aur ungliyon ki besharmi...!

very beautiful yaaar

Diya_Jale 19th May 2009 08:06 PM

:eek:Ghayal jee aur Romantic shayari

pahli bar sach main hairaN ho gayi hu main :eek:

to janab aapki next ghazal hume Isha forum per milna chahiye
its a request:)

Diya

Taish 22nd May 2009 12:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by janumanu (Post 354941)
aur ungliyon ki besharmi...!

very beautiful yaaar


thanks for reading bhai...........!!

Aapka Ghayal

naresh_mehra110 24th May 2009 07:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ghayal_shayar (Post 219448)
humne tumse pyar kiya,, sangini bana tujhe sweekaar kiya,, tujhe yaad karne ke siwa,, aur kuch na maine, eh yaar kiya,, sochte the ki kitni khoobsurat wo mulakaat hogi,, kehne ko to meri suhaagraat hogi,, na jaane kitne aadhe adhure ehsash honge,, pehli baar hum itne paas honge,, sochte hain kitni khoobsurat wo mulaakat hogi,, kehne ko to meri suhaagraat hogi...!




os me bhigi sharmati kaliyaaN,
husn ke jhonke me ithlaati pattiyaaN,
andhere me pighalna seher ka,
aur sote sahar ki gumti* battiyaaN...!

*gum hoti,, putting off of lights...!


uff! jaare ka ye mausam,
aur unke kurbat* ki garmi,
meri baahon me unka hona,
aur ungliyon ki besharmi...!

*nikat.ta,, nearness...!


do badanoN ka lipatnaa,
ek choti si razaaai me...
aata hai ek alag hi mazaa,
pyar ki is angdaai me...

angdaai me,
ek choti si razaaai me...!


fir hui wahi praatah* bela,
kisi ka darwaaza khatkhatana,
uthana jaldi baazi me,
aur fir halka sharmana...!

*subah ka samay,, morning time...!


fir ek intezaar,
kaliyon ke sharmane ka...
machalna unhe dekh ke,
afsosh choo v na paane ka...!

Lucky ji

aapki suhaagraat rachna ko maine abhi abhi padha...issme aapne us pal ki tamaam gudgudahat ka jis khubsurti se tana bana buna hai....sachmuch mai Qabile taarif hai...

bahut khubsurat baangi hai aapki........

-------------------
pata nahi tujh pe meri
kis baat ka asar hone wala hai
koi raaz aaj teri zubaa se
phir khulne wala hai.....


---naresh mehra--


sunita thakur 24th May 2009 09:50 PM

toooo much romantic
 
hmmmmmmm.........................lucky bhai hamare paas lafz nahi haiN kya kaheN aapko :o

Taish 4th August 2009 09:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Diya_Jale (Post 354963)
:eek:Ghayal jee aur Romantic shayari

pahli bar sach main hairaN ho gayi hu main :eek:

to janab aapki next ghazal hume Isha forum per milna chahiye
its a request:)

Diya


bas bina ishq aakhir dard kaise ho diya ji...!! bas likh gaye, waise aapko pasand aayi ye jaan kar khushi hui mujhe...!! bas umeed karta huN ki aap aage v hume yuNhi padhti raheNgi...!!

dasht e tanhai 4th August 2009 11:07 PM

hehehehehehe...menu te billi de khaab yaad dila ditte ne tussi...
vekhde rawo ji kaab ...vesy v kon rok sakda ey kissay nu...:P
ik gal zaroor ey...likhya tussi barday kamal da ey ji...
likhde rawo...cha hi jao ge ik na ik din...:P
khush rawo abaad rawo..

asdfgh 13th October 2009 05:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ghayal_shayar (Post 354815)
shukriya janaab jaan kar ahcha laga ki aapko humara likha pasand aaya, bas yunh padhne ki jehmiyaten uthaati raheN aap...!!

:confused: aapse yeh ummeed na thi :( / 'janaab' 'uthaati' :confused: dono words ek saath, ek he shaks k liye :confused:

Ankita 31st October 2009 07:52 AM

suhaag raat padhi. acha bayan hai. thanks for sharing.
A

tannusri 9th November 2009 02:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ghayal_shayar (Post 219448)
humne tumse pyar kiya,, sangini bana tujhe sweekaar kiya,, tujhe yaad karne ke siwa,, aur kuch na maine, eh yaar kiya,, sochte the ki kitni khoobsurat wo mulakaat hogi,, kehne ko to meri suhaagraat hogi,, na jaane kitne aadhe adhure ehsash honge,, pehli baar hum itne paas honge,, sochte hain kitni khoobsurat wo mulaakat hogi,, kehne ko to meri suhaagraat hogi...!




os me bhigi sharmati kaliyaaN,
husn ke jhonke me ithlaati pattiyaaN,
andhere me pighalna seher ka,
aur sote sahar ki gumti* battiyaaN...!

*gum hoti,, putting off of lights...!


uff! jaare ka ye mausam,
aur unke kurbat* ki garmi,
meri baahon me unka hona,
aur ungliyon ki besharmi...!

*nikat.ta,, nearness...!


do badanoN ka lipatnaa,
ek choti si razaaai me...
aata hai ek alag hi mazaa,
pyar ki is angdaai me...

angdaai me,
ek choti si razaaai me...!


fir hui wahi praatah* bela,
kisi ka darwaaza khatkhatana,
uthana jaldi baazi me,
aur fir halka sharmana...!

*subah ka samay,, morning time...!


fir ek intezaar,
kaliyon ke sharmane ka...
machalna unhe dekh ke,
afsosh choo v na paane ka...!

pehli baar aapka likha shayad kuch padha ...samajh nahi aata ki kya kahu..socha na kahu..kehna sahi nahi hai pr bin keh reh nahii paai...bas itna kahungi ki bahut khoob surat khayal tha apka jab aapne ise likha hoga ...bahut khoob....ghayal ji ......ghayal sher jaaga gaya hai kya...hahha

Taish 10th November 2009 01:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110 (Post 355921)
Lucky ji

aapki suhaagraat rachna ko maine abhi abhi padha...issme aapne us pal ki tamaam gudgudahat ka jis khubsurti se tana bana buna hai....sachmuch mai Qabile taarif hai...

bahut khubsurat baangi hai aapki........

-------------------
pata nahi tujh pe meri
kis baat ka asar hone wala hai
koi raaz aaj teri zubaa se
phir khulne wala hai.....


---naresh mehra--



naresh bhai shukriyah, is adni si kavita ko itni haisiyat dene ke liye, umeed karta hun ki aage v aapse yunhi mukhatib hote rahunga...!!

Taish 10th November 2009 01:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sunita virender (Post 355930)
hmmmmmmm.........................lucky bhai hamare paas lafz nahi haiN kya kaheN aapko :o


ab dd aapko to ***** de rahki hai kuch v kehne ki, uske baad aapko confusion kyun hai bhala...?? waise aapko pasand aayi bas hume is bat ki tassalli hai....!!

Taish 10th November 2009 01:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ankita (Post 371930)
suhaag raat padhi. acha bayan hai. thanks for sharing.
A


ankita ji tareef ka bahut bahut shukriya, umeed karta hun ki aage v aapse mukhatib hone ka mauka milta rahega...!!

Taish 10th November 2009 01:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tannusri (Post 373027)
pehli baar aapka likha shayad kuch padha ...samajh nahi aata ki kya kahu..socha na kahu..kehna sahi nahi hai pr bin keh reh nahii paai...bas itna kahungi ki bahut khoob surat khayal tha apka jab aapne ise likha hoga ...bahut khoob....ghayal ji ......ghayal sher jaaga gaya hai kya...hahha


Tanu ji ko ghayal ka salaam,

ab agar kuch padhne ke baad dil me jo khayal aaye vo v na kahiyega to fir likhne vaale ka kya faayedda, aur aisa kuch v nahin hota jo aap keh na saken, bas andaaz-e-bayaan me thodi tafdeeli karni padti hai. umeed karta huN ye pehli baar aaakhiri baar nahin hoga aur hum aage v mukhatib hote raheNge...!!

Aapka GHAYAL...!!


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