SUHAAG ki raat…!
humne tumse pyar kiya,, sangini bana tujhe sweekaar kiya,, tujhe yaad karne ke siwa,, aur kuch na maine, eh yaar kiya,, sochte the ki kitni khoobsurat wo mulakaat hogi,, kehne ko to meri suhaagraat hogi,, na jaane kitne aadhe adhure ehsash honge,, pehli baar hum itne paas honge,, sochte hain kitni khoobsurat wo mulaakat hogi,, kehne ko to meri suhaagraat hogi...!
os me bhigi sharmati kaliyaaN, husn ke jhonke me ithlaati pattiyaaN, andhere me pighalna seher ka, aur sote sahar ki gumti* battiyaaN...! *gum hoti,, putting off of lights...! uff! jaare ka ye mausam, aur unke kurbat* ki garmi, meri baahon me unka hona, aur ungliyon ki besharmi...! *nikat.ta,, nearness...! do badanoN ka lipatnaa, ek choti si razaaai me... aata hai ek alag hi mazaa, pyar ki is angdaai me... angdaai me, ek choti si razaaai me...! fir hui wahi praatah* bela, kisi ka darwaaza khatkhatana, uthana jaldi baazi me, aur fir halka sharmana...! *subah ka samay,, morning time...! fir ek intezaar, kaliyon ke sharmane ka... machalna unhe dekh ke, afsosh choo v na paane ka...! |
Lucky Ji
bahaut khoob likha hai aapne, parhkar bahaut accha laga. "os me bhigi sharmati kaliyaaN / husn ke jhonke me ithlaati pattiyaaN / andhere me pighalna seher ka / aur sote sahar ki gumti* battiyaaN...! " vipin |
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vipin bhaiya bahut dino baad aana hua aapka is nacheez ki mehfil me aur jaan kar behad khushi hui ki aapko ye kalaam pasand aaya humara, guzarish bas yahi rahegi ki aap aage v hume yunhi padhte rahen...! |
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arey ghayal aap dard ke ilawa romantic poetry bhi likhtay hain :p herat hoi jaaan ker :) kher likhi achi hai keep writing wesay bhi insaan ko sirf dard hi nahi likhna chahiye zindagi ke aur bohat pehlu hotay hain aesay hi likhte rahiye |
are ise kahaan se utha diya aapne, maan gaye aapko, itne peeche se is kalaam ko dhoondh nikala aapne, khushi hui jaan kar ki aapko humara kalaam pasand aaya, bas guzarish yahi rahegi ki aap aage v hume yunhi padhti rahiyega aur apni nek rai se hume nawaazte rahiyega...!
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Haaaayee kyaaaa baaaat hai....
Mujhe to . . . . . . . Kuch kehte ni ban raha.... Aapki poem padh kar gussa b aa raha hai aur pyaar b. . . Thanks 4 sharing Lucky ji . . . . :) |
shukriya janaab jaan kar ahcha laga ki aapko humara likha pasand aaya, bas yunh padhne ki jehmiyaten uthaati raheN aap...!!
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aur ungliyon ki besharmi...!
very beautiful yaaar |
:eek:Ghayal jee aur Romantic shayari
pahli bar sach main hairaN ho gayi hu main :eek: to janab aapki next ghazal hume Isha forum per milna chahiye its a request:) Diya |
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thanks for reading bhai...........!! Aapka Ghayal |
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Lucky ji |
toooo much romantic
hmmmmmmm.........................lucky bhai hamare paas lafz nahi haiN kya kaheN aapko :o
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bas bina ishq aakhir dard kaise ho diya ji...!! bas likh gaye, waise aapko pasand aayi ye jaan kar khushi hui mujhe...!! bas umeed karta huN ki aap aage v hume yuNhi padhti raheNgi...!! |
hehehehehehe...menu te billi de khaab yaad dila ditte ne tussi...
vekhde rawo ji kaab ...vesy v kon rok sakda ey kissay nu...:P ik gal zaroor ey...likhya tussi barday kamal da ey ji... likhde rawo...cha hi jao ge ik na ik din...:P khush rawo abaad rawo.. |
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suhaag raat padhi. acha bayan hai. thanks for sharing.
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naresh bhai shukriyah, is adni si kavita ko itni haisiyat dene ke liye, umeed karta hun ki aage v aapse yunhi mukhatib hote rahunga...!! |
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ab dd aapko to ***** de rahki hai kuch v kehne ki, uske baad aapko confusion kyun hai bhala...?? waise aapko pasand aayi bas hume is bat ki tassalli hai....!! |
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ankita ji tareef ka bahut bahut shukriya, umeed karta hun ki aage v aapse mukhatib hone ka mauka milta rahega...!! |
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Tanu ji ko ghayal ka salaam, ab agar kuch padhne ke baad dil me jo khayal aaye vo v na kahiyega to fir likhne vaale ka kya faayedda, aur aisa kuch v nahin hota jo aap keh na saken, bas andaaz-e-bayaan me thodi tafdeeli karni padti hai. umeed karta huN ye pehli baar aaakhiri baar nahin hoga aur hum aage v mukhatib hote raheNge...!! Aapka GHAYAL...!! |
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