Usne Humko Tadpaaya Bohat...!
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दिल ने दिल को दिल की राहों पे ही उलझाया बोहत.. मे गिरा उठ कर चला फिर खुद पे मुस्काया बोहत.. आके साहिल पे भी मुझको देख पाए क्यूँ नहीं.. मैं लहर बन उनके कदमो से भी टकराया बोहत... थी बड़ी बेशर्म हमारी जाँ जो निकली ही नहीं.. कर सितम रह रह के उसने हमको तड़पाया बोहत.. कौन जाने की परिंदों को कहाँ किस्मत मिले.. सोच के हमने परों को अपने फैलाया बोहत.. ज़िन्दगी है या पहेली मैं नहीं ये जानता.. इसने उलझाया बोहत तो मैंने सुलझाया बोहत.. और..! तुम सिफर थे मैं सिफर था इस कहानी के लिए.. जो भी हो इश्क तो शिद्धत से फरमाया बोहत.. कुनाल (सिफर) Dil ne dil ko dil ki raahoN pe hi uljhaaya bohat.. Main gira uth kar chala phir khud pe Muskaaya bohat.. Aake saahil pe bhi mujhko dekh paaye kyuN nahi.. MaiN lehar ban unke kadmo se bhi takraaya bohat.. Thi badi besharm humaari JaaN Jo Nikli hi nahi.. kar sitam reh reh ke usne humko tadpaaya bohat.. Koun jaane ke parindoN ko kahan kismat mile.. Soch ke humne ParoN ko apne failaya bohat.. Zindagi hai ya paheli mai nahi ye jaanta.. Isne uljhaya bohat to maine sujhaaya bohat... Aur...! Tum sifar the main sifar tha is kahaani ke liye. Jo bhi ho par Ishq to shiddat se farmaaya bohat.. Kunaal(Sifar) |
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Kunaal ji....behad khoobsurat gazal bazm ki nazar ki hai aapne, sabhi sher bemisaal hai...bahut accha lga aapko padna...dil se daad hazir hai. en bemisaal ehsaassoN ke liye aap reps ke haqdaar hai. reps added +++ |
waahh waahh kunaal saahab... kyaaa kahne aapki taazaa ghazal ke baare me...
bahot shiddat se likhaa hai aapne, aur aaapki wo tadap nazar aa rahi hai is kalaam me... merii jaanib se bahot si daad aur duaaen pesh hain.... mubaarakbaad zindabaad... Shaad.... |
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Sub'hanAllah! Bayhadd dilkas wa dilfareb ghazal inaayat ki haye aap janaab nay hamayn!! Dili daad qabool farmaayayn, Zeel k ashaar nay dil mayn ghar kar-liyaa.. bayhad shukriya aapki payshkash ka... ilteja haye aap-say yoon-hee mahfil sajaatay rahayn... Duago Ahmad Thi badi besharm humaari JaaN Jo Nikli hi nahi.. kar sitam reh reh ke usne humko tadpaaya bohat.. Koun jaane ke parindoN ko kahan kismat mile.. Soch ke humne ParoN ko apne failaya bohat.. Zindagi hai ya paheli mai nahi ye jaanta.. Isne uljhaya bohat to maine suljhaaya bohat... |
एक सुंदर पेशकश कुनाल जी........दाद
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Aapne khaak bande ki kavish ki zarra nawajish ki .. Khyaal rakhiye apna |
Kunal Bhai Aadaab ...! Kyaa baat hai bhai bus gazab ki kalaam kahi hai aapne ... Itna waqt to nahi tha ke koii reply kar sakuN lekin aapki gazal ke maqte ne aur ulaa sher ne jaane nahi diya ... Is khoob gazal par meri hazaaroN daad kabul kijiye ... Likhte rahiye ... hume rubaru hone ka mauqa dete rahiye ... Shaad O aabaad rahiye ... Khuda Hafez ... |
kunaal jee...bahut hee umda kalaam likha hai......ek khanjar sa utarta hua.laga mujhe seene mein.....daad kubul karein
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kunaal bhai:
namaste! kaise haiN aap? umdaah Ghazal aur ehsaas bhee laa-jawaab... khushi huii aapko bazm mein deKh kar... yuunhi bazm ki shaan badhaate rahiye aage bhee KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
Kunaal bhai... aapko bahot bahot mubaarak ho Gauhar-e-SDC ka hissa banne ke liye..
aage bhi hame aapkke khoobsurat kalaamoN ka intzzaar rahegaa... Shaad.... |
Betareen gazal kunaal ji..gauhar e sdc ka hissa banne ke liye mubarakbaad..aise hi umda kalaam padne ka mauka dete rahe hame....
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आके साहिल पे भी मुझको देख पाए क्यूँ नहीं..
मैं लहर बन उनके कदमो से भी टकराया बोहत... थी बड़ी बेशर्म हमारी जाँ जो निकली ही नहीं.. कर सितम रह रह के उसने हमको तड़पाया बोहत.. Kunal ji bahut nayab peshkash rahi aapki ..per uupar bale asharon ne humein bhaya bahut.. yun hi likhte rahiye ...... Sanjay Sehgal |
Shukraguzaar huN moderators ka .. main iske kaabil nahi samajhta khud ko.. par mujhe yahan rakhne ke liye shukria .. mere khaak alfaazoN ko izzat bakshi main mutmayiN huN aapke isteqbaal se .. aur kya kahuN..
Khuda ye mehfil aise hi banaye sajaaye rakhe.. Aapka apna Sifar... |
mubarak ho Kunaal bhai
lekin mubarakbaad se pehle daad par aapka haq ziyaada ban'ta hai aur aapka shukriya adaa karna bhi hum sab ka farz hai jo aapne itte saaloN se is mehfil ko apne Ghar jaisa samm'aan diya hai aur aaj hum sab aapke ba-kamaal qalam se nikle hue besh-qemaati motiiyoN ki chamak ka sukooN haasil kar rahe haiN ek mayaari qalaam raqm karne par dilii mubarkbaad haazir hai aur shukriya alag se "Tikaa" lijiyega aap jaise sho'ra se hi is bazm ki raunak bar-qaraar hai aur inshah allah aage bhi rahegi rab raakha maikash |
Dil ne dil ko dil ki raahoN pe hi uljhaaya bohat..
Main gira uth kar chala phir khud pe Muskaaya bohat.. Aksar pyar mai aisa hi hota hai khud hi sambhalna padta hai Aake saahil pe bhi mujhko dekh paaye kyuN nahi.. MaiN lehar ban unke kadmo se bhi takraaya bohat.. Aisa laga padhke is line ko mere hatho likhi jani chahiye thi bahut Ye to meri feelings hai.. Thi badi besharm humaari JaaN Jo Nikli hi nahi.. kar sitam reh reh ke usne humko tadpaaya bohat.. Besharam jaan nhi hogi kisi ki dua mai honge ap usika hoga asar Kunaal bahut acha likhte ho ap...meaningfull aap bahut lucky ho jjo apne vichar kitabo mai ache se uttar sakte ho.....kash ki mai bi Apko padhke kuch acha sikh paun..bhagwan ye apka hunar din pe din badaye Apke naye post ka dil se intezar rahega Takecare |
har sher apne aap mein ek duniya hai aur ghazal kaaynaat
bahaut si daad aur dheron mubaarakbaad Kunal sahab |
Bahut achhe kunnu..
Lajawaab .. Aapki kaarigari Ne dil ko bahlaya bahut Chaahta to tha magar ye kah nahi paya bahut Sher aapki shaan me tha kubool farmaaeiN Dil baag baag ho gaya |
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Kunal bhai mazaa aa gaya. Aur maqtae ne toh qatal hi kar diya, jaan hi lelo mazaa aa gaya. Apki bhabhi Sarika |
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Jo bhi ho par Ishq to shiddat se farmaaya bohat.. Kunaal kehar dhaa gaye tum is ghazal ke saath...behad umdaa Yunhi likhte raho.. tumhara apnaa |
Dear
Bahut hi umda ghazal likhi hai aapne.. bahut khub.. Akant... |
Beautifully written and wonderfully expressed!!
Daad kubool keejiye!! Priya |
"ज़िन्दगी है या पहेली मैं नहीं ये जानता..
इसने उलझाया बोहत तो मैंने सुलझाया बोहत.." ek tak dekein to yahi lagta hai... |
Hi Kunaal!
Really very well expressed. Speechless. Take Good Very Care of yourself God Bless |
Wow Kunaal
Bahut Khoobsurat likha hay.Bahut kushi hui tumhare alfaz dekh. Di |
Jaane kahan gaye wo din sab kuch pichle janam main huaa lagta hai
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Tum bulaao aur hum na aayeN aise to bure haalaat nahiiN! |
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