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Kucha-e-kalam ki sarfaraaz ghazalein
Doston,
Kucha-e-kalam mein June mahine mein ek aisi lehar uthi ki mehfil mein ek alag se roomaniyat nazar aane lagi, is bazm mein beh'r mein tawazoo rakh kar jo ghazalein tayaar ho rahi hai woh anmol nagine hai is shayri parivaar ke sha.i.raan ki mehnat ka. Is thread ke zariye humhari koshish hai ki un nagino ko ek saath compile kiya jaaye. Umeed hai ki aap sab ka saath mileGaa |
Na Yun Paas Aao
Ghazal: Na Yun Paas Aao
Completed on: June 16th 2015 na yun paas aao na doori badhaao na naz.ren churao.n na yun mus.kuraao (Mast) na sapne dikhao na neenden udaao Na humko tum apna dewaana banao (Bhushan) yun chehre se mere ye naz.ren hataao na hum.ko yun ap.nii ye aa.dat lagaao (Masti) Muhabbat bhare pal vo fir laut aayeiN Kabhi maiN jo roothuN mujhe tum manaao (Madhu) jo muddat se ham se kinaaraa kiye they wahii kah rahe hain hame na bhulaao (Shaad) poore chehre ka deedar hai karna! meri jaaN! rukh se zulfeN hataao (Hasan) Mujhi se jo roothe aawaz de rahe haiN. Mere intezar meiN palkeiN bichao (Hamdam) Ajab hai ye dil bhi dhadakta hi jaye ya tum paas aao ya fir door jao (Madhu) Khuda us nazar mein hai kaisi khumari kahun bhi to kaise na jalwe dikhaao (Mast) |
Raat bhar jalte rahe
Ghazal: Raat bhar jalte rahe
Completed on: 26th June 2015 raat bhar khaamoshiyon se guftagoo karte rahe, ham charaaGon ki tarah chup chaap se jalte rahe (Shaad) YuN Nigalte ja rahe the mujh ko saye raat ke, bebasi meiN is kadar hum hath ko malte rahe (Hamdam) har subah laayii umeedoN se bhara ek din magar Naa khabar lii yaar ne ham shaam ban dhalte rahe (Madhu) haath jo tuune meraa thaama nahi aye hamsafar zulmaton ki raah par hum be jhijhak chalte rahe (Masti) aatishon se udh rahe the khwaab mere raat bhar hasraton ki justjuu mein khwaab hi palte rahe (Mast) ManzileiN to paas thiiN aur walwala bhi Thaa magar Thee nahii manzoor wo raaheN jahaaN baDhte rahe (Sagar Aashna) Dil ko mere gam mile jab se ki uskii khwaahisheiN fir usii ke khwaab in AaNkhoN me kyuN khilte rahe (madhu) Phool ham ko Gulshan-e-yaaraa ke yoon daste rahe. choolhe ke paanii pe ham bhii bulbule bante rahe (Hassan bhai) kis tarah ki raah hai, kaise musaafir hain yahaaN, peeTh me khanjar chubhaaye jo gale milte rahe (Shaad) arz meri aye khuda kya sun sakegaa tuu kabhii aasmaan ko bas isi ek chaah meiN takte rahe (Madhu) |
Adhure Khwaab aankhon ke
Ghazal: Adhure Khwaab aankhon ke
Completed on: 18th June 2015 Adhoore khwaab aankhon ke mujhe aksar jagate hain Vo baatein aur woh pal chhin bahut ab yaad aate hain (Madhu) Tera waada tha har pal tuu mujhe yun shaad rakhegaa Tumhaare khat mujhe reh reh ke jaane kyu rulaate hain (Masti) likhe they naam ham dono ne jin pe.Don ki shaakhon pe, guzartaa hoon jo raahon se to aawaazen lagaate hain (Shaad) Wo taare jin ko gin gin ke guzaari thi kai raatein Wo taare ab mujhe aksar usee chat par bulaate hain (Masti) wahi par aake baitha hoon jaha guzri thi sab shaamein meri ulfat ke yeh goshe* mujhe ab bhi sataate hain (Mast) *corner/privacy ke jab bhii yaad me terii hue hain mubtilaa jaanaa, to tasweeron ko terii jaane jaaN dil se lagaate hain (Shaad) jo dete the su.koon mujh ko kabhi aaghosh mein tere vo lamhe ab mujhe aksar judaaii mein rulaate hain (Sunita Virender) jo honthon par nahin aayi vo apni hi kahaani thi tha dil kis baat par toota yeh qissa hum bataate hain (Mast) Muhabbat ke tarano si jo in kano me ghulti thi Na Vo barish he hoti hai na ab badal darate hain (Madhu) |
Kya baat! kya baat!kya baat!.....ek se badhkar ek ghazalein....aur sab ek sath...bahut khoob anu...bahut shukriya in sab ko ek sath padhne ka mauka dene ke liye.. .
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wah wah ek badhkar ek ghazal bahut sundar............anu bhai..............
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waahh janaab waahhhh.......
nayaab ghazlon ko gar ek saath dekhnaa mil jaae to jaise lagta hai khazaano haath lag gayaa ho.. bahut mubaarak ho aapko aur tamaam membaraan ko jinhone isme hissa liyaa aur ise kamyaab kiyaa..... umeed hai aage bhi hame aise hi nayaab kalam padhne ko milte rhenge..... Shaad... |
Vo sama
Ghazal: Vo sama
Completed on: 3rd July 2015 khoob hai ishq ka vo bayaan gam mera ab bana daastaa.n(mast) Reh Gayi Aarzoo dil mein hi chal pada ashq ka kaarwaa.N(masti) humne tau khud dekha ek jahaN, humse phir raushna aasmaN (hamdam) chand taare uthaaye hue, dhoondti ik naya aasmaaN(taish).. gam mila dil laga ke mujhe kuch na baki hai soona jahaaN(madhu) jo hame jaan se ajeez the, wo sabhii ho gaye raayegaaN. (Shaad) Dil mera le gaya tha kabhi ab vo aashiq mera hai kahaa.n (Masti) Khaak hi Khaak tha kar gaya kis tarah tha uthaa ye dhuaa.N (Mast) |
kya baat hai.....waaah!ek aur khoobsoorat ghazal par sabhi doston ko madhu ki taraf se mubarak baad......aur daad pesh hai....
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Ghazal: Mera na hua
Completed on: 10th July 2015 Humsafar mera humnawa na hua, Mera hi tha magar mera na hua (Taish) kuch vafaon me apni hogi kasar Jisko chaha mera zara na huaa (Madhu) manzilen meri raah mein thi magar raston se hi aashnaa na hua (Masti) jeene ki ab na aarzoo hi rahi unko chaha jo ab khudaa na hua (Mast) qahr jo aap dhaa rahe hain sanam aise koii kabhii khafaa na huaa (Shaad) sadgi uski dil churaa ke gayii yooN kabhi mujhse dil judaa na hua (Madhu) KaarvaaN saath saath aage badaa, humsafar phir yuN begana na hua. ( Hamdam) jo gaya door tuu to aise gaya Mujh ko haasil tera pata na hua (Bhushan) |
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Behterin Ghazal par sabhee kl daad.................
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aap sabhi doston ko hamaari taraf se dher saarii mubaarakbaad aur shubh kaamnaen |
Ghazal: Sawaal Completed on: 10th July 2015 takhti - 1222 1222 1222 1222 mujhe tumse shiqaayat hai ke tum mujhse Khafaa ho kyuu.n , inaayat ho nahii.n saktee to phir mere Khudaa ho kyuu.n (Shaad) yun apna kaat kar seena dhadakta dil dikhaya tha Sitamgar tum hi batlao ki itne bewafaa ho kyu.n (Masti) ye kaise hain takalluf aur kaisi dooriyaan jana bhula kar yaad sari pyaar ki mujhse juda ho kyu.n (Madhu) khata apni meri jaana chalo main maan leta hoon bhala phir maat par meri kaho soz-e-navaa ho kyu.n (Mast) Nigaahon me jahaan ham the vahaan ab gair ki surat ye teri berukhi hai fir sukoon dil ko bhala ho kyu.n (Madhu) muhabbat se muhabbat thi muhabbat dil mein basti thi meri jaa.n ye bataa do bas muhabbat se khafaa ho kyu.n (Masti) vo do din roothna tumse aur khud aansun bahaa dena meri is dil ki halat ki kaho dard-e-dawaa ho kyu.n (Mast) Chhuda kar hath mujhse tum safar me bad gaye aage Mujhe tanha jo dekha raah mein fir gam zadaa ho kyun (Madhu) Badi shiddat se kehte the ki main koi nahi tera Fir mere janaze me shamil be-wajaa ho kyun (Bhushan) |
Waaaahhh!! Bahut khoobsoorat.....
Sabhi ko meri daad aur mubarakbaad......... |
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kyaa baat hai janaab..... ummdah sheron se sajaa nayaab kalaaam... sabko hamaara pyaar aur mubaarakbaad..... |
ghazal -meri jaan huye.. Completed on..31 August. . Takhti - 122 122 122 12 Behr - Mutaqaarib musamman mehzoof Arkaan - Fa-oo-lun fa-oo-lun fa-oo-lun fa-al Matla yun hasrat-e-dil ka vo armaan huye mile mujhse aise meri jaan huye (Mast) 1st sher Ghadi bhar jo unse nigaheiN mili Jo the ajnabi dil ke mehmaaN huye. (Madhu) 2nd sher unhe ab bhi shaayad muhabbat hai yaad, huaa saamnaa to pareshaaN hue. (Shaad) 3rd sher idhar dil ki haalat bhi nazuk si thi udhar khwaab the kitne nadaan huye (Mast) 4th sher Mere dil ki haalat bataayii uNhe NigahoN ke ham par ye ehsaaN huye. (Madhu) 5th sher bohut kuch tha kehna kahaa na gaya ye alfaaz bhi kyu be-imaa.n huye (Masti) 6th sher nigaahoN se unki mili jo nazar the khud maut ka apni samaaN huye (Mast) 7th sher JahaaN pyaar gam bhi vahiiN yaar hai. Bhala aap aise kyuN hairaaN huye.. Makta Wafaa ka humaari silaa naa mila humee.n they diwaane jo kurbaa.n hue |
sabhi sathiyon ko dili mubarakbaad aur daad.....bahut khoobsoorat rahi ye aapki shayri...:)
Agli ghazal ke jald poora hone ka intzaar rahega..... |
Ghazal-khud ko chhota ye dil bada rakhiye. 4th sep to 28 sep 2015 2122 1212 112 Matla. Khud ko chhota ye dil bada rakhiye.... Dost bankar na fir ana rakhiye...(madhu) sher 1 muh me rab ke hi naam rakhte hain, apne dil me bhi to Khudaa rakhiye.... (shaad) Sher 2 Dost ban kar na ab dagaa kariye Apni baato.n mein kuch wafa rakhiye(masti) Sher 3 Jinke bin har khushi adhuri hai Aise apno se na gila rakhiye. (Madhu) Sher 4 Dil ke tukde abhi hai bikhare hue Pao.n apne zaraa bachaa rakhiye (Masti) Sher 5 tarse jo dil kabhi kisi ke liye faasle phir n darmiyaa.N rakhiye (Mast) Sher 6 Roothna apno se agar hak hai. Maan jane ki bhi ada rakhiye. (Madhu) Sher 7 roz milnaa muhaal hai lekin harz kya aisi gar dua rakhiye (Mast) sher 8 ghaltiyoN par khafa raho beshaq naam iska na par zafa rakhiye..(madhu) |
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bahut khoob ghazal huii hai... sabhi doston ko dil se mubaarakbaad is ghazal ko muqammal karne k liye........... |
beautifull...aap sab ke sath se ek aur behtareen ghazal taiyaar hai aaj...hissa lene wale sabhi sathiyon ko daad aur mubarakbaad...
aur padhne walon se darkhwasht ki aap bhi agli ghazal me apna sher zaroor dein.... shukriya.. |
laut ke na aayenge....
1oct 2015 -6 jan 2016 laut ke na aayenge.. Takhti - 212 1222 212 1222 Matla dil se bewafaa jis din hum tujhe bhulaayenge hai kasam teri phir jee kar tujhe dikhaayenge (Mast) 1st sher Teri aarzuu ab khwabon me na mere hogi Tuu agar hai khush ye doori bhi ham nibhayenge(madhu) 2nd sher.. ye nahii khabar thii ke ab aap bhii sataaenge, aap muskuraaenge chehraa chupaaenge...(Shaad) 3rd sher Jo malaal tumko mujhse kyun mil gaye ho tum Saamne na aayenge ab na dil dukhayenge.(madhu) 4th sher baat baat par aksar roothate ho tum jaanam hum jo roothe tumse to lout ke n aayenge (Masti) 5th sher meri har udasi jo haNs ke loot lete the. Kya pata tha ek din vo hee hame rulayenge.(madhu) 6th sher khod kar zameen dil ki gumshudaa ho jaayenge dil ki aarzoo bhi hum dil mein hi dabayenge (Mast) 7th sher Na fareb khayenge na hi zulm dhayenge Sajde mein jabee.N ko itna na ham jhukayenge(madhu) |
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ek baar kisii aur ke khaatir chalo ji lei.n.
6th January - 27th January Takhti - 221/1221/1221/122 Ghazal: ek baar kisii aur ke khaatir chalo ji lei.n. ek baar kisii aur ke khaatir chalo ji lei.n. hotho.n pe tabassum rakhei.n a.nkho.n ki nami lei.n (Madhu) na hone de be-noor kabhi shaam-e-muhabbat chhalke jo nighaahei.n to ashqon ko bhi pi lei.n (Mast) Gham baantne se hota hai kam aisa sunaa hai chal baant ke apni khushi thodi si gamii lei.n (Masti) Jo baat kisi dil ko zara bhi na khushi de Na layei.n zubaa.n par use ham hotho.n ko see lei.n (madhu) jab hamko khatawaar samajhtaa hai zamaanaa to zehr ke pyaale sare- mahfil hamii pee len.. (Shaad) hum bhi hain khataa-khaar tha maaluum jab hua kis baat ka shikwaa karein ab aise hi jee lei.n (Mast) unko bhi sukoo.n aaye koi poochta to hai milne ka bahana karei.n ehsaan kabhi lein.(madhu) Jis raah pe chalne se lage darr kabhi tumko us rab se zaraa pooch lein sang usko hi le lein..(Masti) |
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Das rahi hai judayi.....
Tarz.. hum the jinke sahaare.. Behr..2122 122 2122 122 Matla Das rahi hai judaayii..yaad phir unki aayi Ro rahi dil ki dhadkan..shor deta sunayii 1 sher Jab bhi kii haiN duaaeN, Kuchh na maNga Khuda se Jissko mil jaaye chaahat, KyuN wo maaNge Khudayee(praveen ji) 2 sher naam tera hi dil meiN. har su deta sunaaii, dekh le meri haalat ab na jaaye bataayii..(sunita di) 3 sher tera hee aksh meri har ek ghazal me basa hai, aaina bhi jo dekhoon tu hee tu de dikhaayi.(acharya_mj) 4 sher Ye nazaare wahin hai..nazrein par woh nahi hain Jinse milti thi palkein..dete naa wo dikhaayi(masti) 5th sher Ek jhalak apni dekar le gaya mera sab kuch Dil mera poochta hai....kyun nazar ye milai.. (madhu) 6th sher Nikla mera janaaza tere koochey se qurbat Ho gayi zard humdum teri dast-e-hinaayi(Mujahid) 7th sher Meri kya hai khata jo.. hijra hee ab saza hai. Uske masoom dil me berukhi kyun samayi....(madhu.) |
Sabhi sathiyon ko mubarakbaad aur daad...
Khaas taur par sarika ka bahut shukriya...is ghazal ko mukammal banane me unhone bahut sath diya... Baki sabhi sathiyon se request hai aap bhi bazm me shirkat karein.....:) |
Sahil badal diya samandar ke toofano ne...
...... Lagta h fir kisine pyar ki farmaish ki hai.... |
Agar merey khuloos-e-ishq ka tujh ko yaqeen hota
behr.. 1 2 2 2, 1 2 2 2, 1 2 2 2, 1 2 2 2 Example.. mujhe terii muhabbat ka, sahaaraa mil gayaa hotaa agar toofaN nahin aataa, kinaaraa mil gayaa hotaa (completed on 14 april) Matla.. Agar merey khuloos-e-ishq ka tujh ko yaqeen hota Toh aye hum-dum terey dil ka faqat mai hi makeen hota(mujahid ji) 1 sher khuloose dil to laazim hey wafaa bhe shart hey laekin suno ay hum sukhan bas ishq dobaaraa naheen hota(saba) 2sher Meri tanhaiyon par yun shazar hanste na ye raahein.. jo ek hamraah tu hota safar kitna haseen hota.(madhu) 3 sher Hamey toh lag gayi aadat sanam teri judaayi ki Agar tu saath merey hota you dil na hazeen hota(mujahid) 4th sher Gila-e-taqdeer bhi kab talak karta rahu ya rab Dil-e-makhloot ko yak baar hasil hum-nasheen hota (mujahid) 5th sher Jo bas ikraar tumne bhi kabhi khulkar kiya hota Muhabbat rang lati yun nishaan bhi har kahiin hota.(madhu) 6th sher Ye daur-e-muflisi mushkil nahi hota merey hum-dum Tu iss ehed-e-masaib mai merey qurb-o-qareen hota 7th sher Nawaaza hai khuda ne tujh ko ab aisi zahaanat se Agar sohbat mai tere hota toh mai bhi zaheen hota(Mujahid) |
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likhte rahein... salamat rahein... |
Zauq-o-tamanna bhi nahi dil mai mohabbat ke liye
Behar: Behar-e-rajaz musamman salim Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun 2212, 2212, 2212, 2212 ( 26 may 2016) Matla: Zauq-o-tamanna bhi nahi dil mai mohabbat ke liye Mashgool itna hu nahi fursat adaavat ke liye(Mujahid) 1sher Furqat me unki yaad ki dastak jo sun le dil kabhi Sar khud b khud jhuk jaye hai us pal ibadat ke liye(madhu) 2nd sher jab hasraton kaa qatl karke chal diye tum be-wajah, larze hain mere honTh bhii us din shiqaayat ke liye... (Shaad) 3rd sher Ab kya karu ya rab ke aa jaaye usey mujh par yaqeen Ke cheer du ab dil bhi asbaat- e -sadaaqat ke liye Asbaat-e-sadaaqat= proof of honesty (Mujahid) 4th sher dil ke pemaane jab muhabbat ke liye khaali huye milte hen pher to loug lougon se zaroorut ke liye (sabaa) 5th sher jis naam pr jaltey rahe meree muhabet ke diye zinda hun main to aaj bhi usski hi ulfut ke liye (sabaa) 6th sher Imkaan-e-vasl-e-yaar bhi mumkin nahi merey khuda Phir bhi jalaata hu chiraag-e-ishq hasrat ke liye (Mujahid) |
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Bikhrey hue gesuu hai tasveer-e-ahbaab mai
2212, 212, 2212, 212 ( 1 june 2016) Matla: Bikhrey hue gesuu hai tasveer-e-ahbaab mai Hum dhoob jaatey terey zulfo ke sailaab mai (Mujahid) jub aarzoo jaagi teri dil mey tab sey mujhey dikhta hy tera hasee chehraa hi mahtaab mey (sabaa) 2nd sher Tafreeq se itna bhi ghamgeen mai hu nahi Aatey ho tum aye sanam har shab mere khwaab mai Tafreeq= judayi(separation) (Mujahid ) 3 sher terey judaayi mujhey toh raas aayi nahen ke dil kahen ab to lagta naa ye ahbaab mai (sabaa) 4th sher Ab toh nikal aa sanam tasveer se tu kabhi Itni tahammul kaha iss qalb-e-be-taab mai Qalb-e-be-taab= impatient heart Tahammul= patience (Mujahid) 5th sher Jo saut-e-bulbul kabhi aati merey baagh se Ab aa gaye voh terey gulzaar-e-shadaab mai Saut-e-bulbul= voice of the nightingale (Mujahid) |
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daad qubool kijiyega.. |
Ishq mai milti shauhrat bhi ruswaayi bhi
22 june 2016
Behar: Behar-e-mutadaarik musammam salim Faa'ilun Faa'ilun Faa'ilun Faa'ilun Faa'ilun Faa'ilun Faa'ilun Faa'ilun 212, 212, 212, 212 Matla Ishq mai milti shauhrat bhi ruswaayi bhi Dard toh hai magar lutf- e -tanhaayi bhi (mujahid) 1st sher us ki baaton pe kyo ker yakeen ho humey voh to mosum ke jaisa hey harjaayi bhi (sabaa) 2nd sher Mujh pe rakhtey hai voh nazr-e-tanqeed par Waqt dar waqt kartey pazeeraayi bhi (Mujahid) 3rd sher Vo nibhayega kya sath is daur me Chhod kar ja juki mujhko parchhaii bhi (madhu) 4th sher saans lena bhi ab to sazaa saa lagey uske bin soona aangun bhi purwaayi bhi (sabaa) 5th sher Ab zamaana mujhe be-wafa keh bhi ley Roz-e-mahshar ko hoga ye sunwaayi bhi (mujahid) 6th sher kahkashaa.o.n se badhaaii gayi guftguu tanhaa sa lagta hai tera saudaa.ii bhi (mast) |
Laayi zindagi hamey phir ussi maqaam pe
5 july 2016
BEHAR-E-MADEED MUSAMMAN MAKHFOOF, SALIM, MAKHFOOF, SALIM FAA'ILA,TU, FAA'ILUN, FAA'ILA,TU, FAA'ILUN FAA'ILA,TU, FAA'ILUN, FAA'ILA,TU, FAA'ILUN 2121, 212, 2121, 212 2121, 212, 2121, 212 MATLA Laayi zindagi hamey phir ussi maqaam pe Kyu karu mai ab gila apney ikhtataam pe (MUJAHID) 1st sher khud ko hi bhulaa raha hoon mera junoon hai mujh pe na sahi yakee.n kar mere kalaam pe (Mast) 2nd sher Muflisi ne badle hain dost yun bhi aaj kal Kaam kya hai poochte hain mere salaam pe(madhu) 3th sher Aye khuda ho kya gaya aaj terey bando ko Be-zarar pe chalte hai tegh terey naam pe ( MUJAHID) 4 sher too mila mujhey muqaddar kee baat hey sanam Shukr mai Ada karun Rab ka iss inaam pe (Sabaa) 5 sher Ik tamaasha ban gaya aye khuda jahaaN tera Ke sawaal uth tey hai terey hi nizaam pe(MUJAHID) 6 sher Aye khuda tu kar ataa kaamil-e-zameer ab Biktey hai zameer bhi kaudiyo ke daam pe(MUJAHID) 7 sher roshni me din ki jab rasta nahi dikha dil ko ab kahaaN se ho ikhtyaar shaam pe(madhu) |
Bhula agr tuje to is ada say bhiilu ga
k............ tery sher ki matti b mery wajood ko tarsay gi |
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