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Pulkit_gupta 27th July 2006 02:10 PM

A few lines...
 
Friends,

This week is World's friendship week... To me, my friebds are the most valuable gift from god.... Just wrote a few lines (after a longgg time)... haven't followed much tehcnicalities... just let them flow.....

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Ajanbi ban kai log roz zindagi me aate hain
Apna bankar unme se kucch saath thhehar jaate hain

Kucch jo aa jaate hain dil ke aap saa kareeb
Dosti ka unki hum shumaar dhaadkanon me paate hain

Kar lijiye yeh waada yun hi saath nibhaiyega
Bin doston ke tanha hum khud ko bahut paate hain
=======================================

Happy Friendship week...Journey till now has been good...hope it'll be better in future...:)

Vipinbox 27th July 2006 05:48 PM

Pulkit ji,
kaise hain aap?

Dosti per likhi lines bahaut pasand aayi......yunhi likhtey rahiyega.

aapka
v i p i n

shrdh 28th July 2006 06:57 AM

dear pulkit
well said

roj log milte hai bichar jaate hai
kuch rishte kushbu ban bikhar jaate hai
dosti jazbah hai,pyaar se badha
sachhe dost zindgi mhakaate hai

happy friendship week


shrdh

musharrafhusain 28th July 2006 10:34 AM

mere bhai

bohat hi khoobsurat alfaaz aise alfaaz jo ek bohat khoobsurat dil rakhne wala shakhs hi keh sakta hai.
pulkit aap ke dosti, aap ki mohabbat, aap ka mu-addibaana pan (obedience) , aap ka khaloos, voh sab ek aise insaan ka aks pesh kerta hai jo her qisim ki aaluudgi se paak hai.
aap ko parh ker,aap ko soach ker mujhe hamesha khushi aur itminaan hotaa hai ke aaj kalke daur mein aap jaise mohabbat kerne wale achchay insaan maujood hain.
mujhe apne aap ke saath is adnaa se tualluq per bohat fakhr mehsoos hotaa hai.
meri dua hai ke aap bohat taraqqi karein aur duniyaa mein bohat aalaa muqaam aur martaba haasil karein.
dosti ke hawale se mein manzar bhopaali ke in ashaar ko hamesha apne haamil e khayaal rakhta hoon
"KHATM HO JAAYEIN UMANGEIN YEH SITEM MAT KERNA"
BAAGHBAANON NAEE SHAKHON KO QALAM MAT KERNA
DOSTI KEHTE HAIN US KO KE JHUKE SIR UTH JAAYEIN
"SIR JHUKA DE JO KISI KA YEH SULEM MAT KERNA"

Meri tamaam ter duayein, apne bhai , apne dost pulkit ke liye.

musharrafhusain

mausam 28th July 2006 11:32 AM

happy friendship week 2 u too!...hopeu remember me..

waise alfaaz to bahut acche hain....hamesha ki tarah....

Kucch jo aa jaate hain dil ke aap saa kareeb

tumhe nahin lagta agar yeh lines ise hoti to flow jyada accha hota....Kucch jo aa jaate hain aap ke dil se kareeb....

agar coment acchi nahin lagi to bura mat manna plzzz..

mausam

sunita thakur 28th July 2006 12:21 PM

Re: A few lines...
 
Quote:

Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
Friends,

This week is World's friendship week... To me, my friebds are the most valuable gift from god.... Just wrote a few lines (after a longgg time)... haven't followed much tehcnicalities... just let them flow.....

=======================================
Ajanbi ban kai log roz zindagi me aate hain
Apna bankar unme se kucch saath thhehar jaate hain

Kucch jo aa jaate hain dil ke aap saa kareeb
Dosti ka unki hum shumaar dhaadkanon me paate hain

Kar lijiye yeh waada yun hi saath nibhaiyega
Bin doston ke tanha hum khud ko bahut paate hain
=======================================

Happy Friendship week...Journey till now has been good...hope it'll be better in future...:)

Pulkit ji

app ka dosti ke naam par likhna bahut achha lagga. dosti sach mai hi us kudha ka hum sab ko diya amulay tohfa hai. es dosti par mai bhi ek share kahna chahti hu.

"Kuch ristey anjaaney mai hi ban jatey hai,
phele dil phir zindgi se jud jatey hai,
kahtey us dour ko shayad DOSTI,
jis mai log zindgi se pyare ho jatey hai"

appki dost

akelijaan 28th July 2006 07:28 PM

pulkit ji,

ek arse baad aapka likha padhne ko mila hai.bahut acha laga padhkar.dosti ke rishtey ka bahut ache andaaz mai bayan kiya aapne.

likhte rahiye.

Mayank 29th July 2006 12:30 PM

Pulkit,

Happy Friendship week pulkit,

Dosti par aap ne achcha likha hai..

YuuN hee likhte raho...

Log kahte haiN jinhe ajnabii
Un se hee pyaar paaya maine

Take care,

Mayank

sukanya 30th July 2006 10:37 AM

Ajanbi ban kai log roz zindagi me aate hain
Apna bankar unme se kucch saath thhehar jaate hain

Kucch jo aa jaate hain dil ke aap saa kareeb
Dosti ka unki hum shumaar dhaadkanon me paate hain

Kar lijiye yeh waada yun hi saath nibhaiyega
Bin doston ke tanha hum khud ko bahut paate hain


Hello Pulkit

Happy Friendship week to you too....Beautiful lines u have written for friends....Pulkit it's nice to see a post on Friendship week...keep up the good work....I will even like to contribute few lines on friendship :).......


Dost Kuch Zindagi mein aate hain
Aatey aatey Sapne kayi de jaate hain

Duur rehkar bhi Dosti Nibhate hain
Dost Mushkilon mein Sath de jaate hain

Doston ko kuch Bhuul bhi jate hain
Bhuul kar bhi kya Dosti Nibhate hain

Dosti ko salaam hum kar jaate hain
Aaj Dosti ka Nagma gungunate hain


Once again keep up the good work
Keep Smiling :)
Take care
Di

Parastaar 30th July 2006 01:16 PM

Ajanbi ban kai log roz zindagi me aate hain
Apna bankar unme se kucch saath thhehar jaate hain

Kucch jo aa jaate hain dil ke aap saa kareeb
Dosti ka unki hum shumaar dhaadkanon me paate hain

Kar lijiye yeh waada yun hi saath nibhaiyega
Bin doston ke tanha hum khud ko bahut paate hain

Truly Pulkit!

Bahut achha laga padhkar...I hope I'm one of those dosts...because you are always in my heart, buddy mine...iss mehfil mein Pulkit ke bagair suuna suuna sa lagta hai sab...so keep this mehfil going with your presence...bless you...happy friendship week...

dilip200 30th July 2006 05:37 PM

pulkit ji

maine aaj aapko pahli bar pada hai
dosti ke naam aapka paigam
bada accha laga
dad kabool kigiye

" Dosti esi ho jo dhadakan me bas jaye
saans bhee lo to bhee khushboo usi ki aaye
dosti ka nasha aanko pe chaye
baat kuch bhee ho per naam usi ka aaye.

dilip

chaahat 31st July 2006 01:18 AM

Re: A few lines...
 
Quote:

Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
Friends,

This week is World's friendship week... To me, my friebds are the most valuable gift from god.... Just wrote a few lines (after a longgg time)... haven't followed much tehcnicalities... just let them flow.....

=======================================
Ajanbi ban kai log roz zindagi me aate hain
Apna bankar unme se kucch saath thhehar jaate hain

Kucch jo aa jaate hain dil ke aap saa kareeb
Dosti ka unki hum shumaar dhaadkanon me paate hain

Kar lijiye yeh waada yun hi saath nibhaiyega
Bin doston ke tanha hum khud ko bahut paate hain
=======================================

Happy Friendship week...Journey till now has been good...hope it'll be better in future...:)

Bhaiya....

Bahut hi pyari aur sachi lines likhi hain.. aur yeh dua humesha rahegi ki yeh shayri parivaar yun hi bana rahe...

Bahut acha likha hai aapne..

Happy Friendship's Day (in advance)

Take care..

~Priya

Pulkit_gupta 2nd August 2006 10:26 PM

Dear Vipin bhai,

aapko yeh ehsaas bhi pasand aaye... jaankar bhaut khushi huii... yun mere saath rahiyega... apna khayal rakhiyega...

Pulkit_gupta 2nd August 2006 10:32 PM

Hey Shraddha,

Gald that u liked my words this time too.... keep motivating me like this....

A very happy Frndship week to you too... take gr8 care...

Pulkit_gupta 2nd August 2006 10:41 PM

"KHATM HO JAAYEIN UMANGEIN YEH SITEM MAT KERNA"
BAAGHBAANON NAEE SHAKHON KO QALAM MAT KERNA
DOSTI KEHTE HAIN US KO KE JHUKE SIR UTH JAAYEIN
"SIR JHUKA DE JO KISI KA YEH SULEM MAT KERNA"

Bahut hi khoobsurat aur sacche lafaaz hain bhai...

Mushi bhai,

Adaab, ummeed hai aap acchi sehat me honge... bhai har baar aap itne khule dil se taareef karte hain ke main soch me padh jaata hoon ke vaakayi tina accha likha hai kya...

yeh aaapka badappan hai jo aap mujhe itna pyaar dete hain... Dua rahegi ke aapka aashirwaad yunhi bana rahe...

apna khayal rakhiyega bhai...:)

Parul 4th August 2006 11:48 AM

hiii pulkit,

very nice. happy friendship week. beautiful lines. keep writting.

take care!

:)

Aman_rahi 4th August 2006 12:14 PM

Dosti aur mohabaat ka virsa haasil hai.......
meri zindagi mein ek tohfa haasil hai.........
tum vo hira ho jiski chamak har taraf hai....
is heere ki chamak humein haasil hai.........

Dear Pullu.........

ye misra tumhare liye.............Happy freindship day........


Aur musam ko aaj bade dinon baad dekha to khushi hui.............

TC..............

banjara'''' 5th August 2006 11:44 AM

hi
 
bhai
kaise ho.
acha laga bohat din bad tumhare lafzon ko
parh kar..bohat acha likha hay
aisa hi likhte raho
apna khiyal rakhna
khan

sakhi1909 5th August 2006 12:09 PM

Re: A few lines...
 
Quote:

Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
Friends,

This week is World's friendship week... To me, my friebds are the most valuable gift from god.... Just wrote a few lines (after a longgg time)... haven't followed much tehcnicalities... just let them flow.....

=======================================
Ajanbi ban kai log roz zindagi me aate hain
Apna bankar unme se kucch saath thhehar jaate hain

Kucch jo aa jaate hain dil ke aap saa kareeb
Dosti ka unki hum shumaar dhaadkanon me paate hain

Kar lijiye yeh waada yun hi saath nibhaiyega
Bin doston ke tanha hum khud ko bahut paate hain
=======================================

Happy Friendship week...Journey till now has been good...hope it'll be better in future...:)

happy frndship day to u dear pul.
acha likha hai .
takecare
oye frndship band kahan hai haan???

Pulkit_gupta 10th August 2006 04:05 PM

Dear Mausam,

How are you doing and how is ur li'l angel... must be getting naughtier....

Tumhe ehsaas pasand aaye accha laga.... yaar jo tumne suggest kiya usse to poora menaing hi change ho jaata naa isliye aise likha ;) Glad tht u spared so much time for this....

take good care... :)

Pulkit_gupta 10th August 2006 04:06 PM

Re: Re: A few lines...
 
Hi Sunita,

Accha laga jaankar ke aapko yeh aashaar pasand aaye.... aapke shabd bhi bahut subdar thhe... vaakayi dosti sa sundar rishta aur koi nahi...

yun hi saath deti rahiyega... apna khayal rakhiye...

Pulkit_gupta 10th August 2006 04:12 PM

Hi akelijaan,

Glad that u liked my words.... Do keep motivating me like this... take care...

Pulkit_gupta 10th August 2006 04:17 PM

Mayank bhai,

Aapko accha laga jaankar khushi huwi... vaise aap jo mujhse expect karte hain vaisa nahi hai yeh... aajkal thhoda busy hoon... aapki shikayat jaldi doosr karoonga... yeh to bass mann ke khyaal thhe...:)

apna khayal rakhiyega....

Pulkit_gupta 10th August 2006 04:20 PM

Hi didi,

My friends and their friendship is the most special thing to happen to me... so just wrote a few words on that feeling... aapko accha laga jaanakar khushi huwi.... aapki likhi lines bhaut pyaari hain...

yun hi saathr rahiyega.... khayal rakhiye...

Pulkit_gupta 10th August 2006 04:22 PM

Dearest Guruji,

Well.... My post is incomplete till i get ur signatures here.... as always you've appreciated me so nicely....:) Mehfil to hum sab se hai naa... we all conteibute in our ways... till d time we r together... the mehifil will blossom :)

Take good care of urself...btw... just 4 mnths to go... time's flying naa....

Pulkit_gupta 10th August 2006 04:24 PM

Hi dilip,

aapko acche lage ehsaas jaankar khushi hui... saath banaye rakhiyega... khayal rkahiye apna...

Pulkit_gupta 10th August 2006 04:26 PM

Re: Re: A few lines...
 
Hi Priya,

Glad that you liked my words... Friendship to me is the most beautiful and special thing to happen to a person.... Humara parivaar aur hum sabka pyaar yun hi bana rahe....:)

take care :)

Pulkit_gupta 10th August 2006 04:28 PM

Hi parul,

Am happy tht u liked my feleings so much... sweet of you to apprecaite... do keep coming.. take care...

Pulkit_gupta 10th August 2006 04:29 PM

Aman bhai,

Am flatttereddd... soooo swweeett... hehe mujhe chane ke jhaad pe chadaa diya... but fikar not... hum sab pakde huwe hain :)

Pulkit_gupta 10th August 2006 04:30 PM

Re: hi
 
Dear khan bhai,

kaafi time baad aapko site pe dekha... apako mere aashaar pasand aaye jaankar bhaut khushi hui... yun hi saath dete rahiyega... main koshish karat rahoonga....

apna khayal rakhiye...

mausam 14th August 2006 04:02 PM

ha pulkit tumne thik hi kaha hain...meri suggest ki hui lines shayad matlab hi badal deti,,,,bahut waqt baad aana hua to shayad mere dimag ko hi zang lag gaya tha......and my lil one is as naughty as always.....

have a nice day..
mausam


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