****InSaaN TuT jAtA hAi****
****InSaaN TuT jAtA hAi****
kabhi masti main yeh shayar,kalam apna uthata hai, naye mazmun ke phulonse,kagaz muskurata hai!. hamesha khud ke saaye se,amiron ke juda rakhna, darakhton ki ghani chhaon me,poda sukh jata hai!. yakinan wo khandar main,ek din tabdil hoti hai, kisi pukhta imarat ka sutun,jab ladkhadata hai!. koi dipak ,koi tara,koi jugnu,koi aansu teri palkon pe ruk jaye,to suraj duub jata hai!. yeh mana kufr hai mayus hona,iski rehmat se, mile jo aksar nakami...to inssan tut jata hai!. **************************************** Bulandi per kabhi pohonchayega,mera hunar mujhe, mujhe kadmon ke niche sidhiyan,achhi nahi lagti. *************************************** :) **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************:) `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
wah..
bahut khuub. |
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Assalam walekum ziyaad ji, kaise hain aap. thnx aapko hamari ghazal pasand aayi, bas hamein yuhin padhte rahiye.. tk cr Allah hafiz |
namskaar sony ji
bahot hi khub likha hai aapne asaar bahot hi achhey hai bas yhi likhte rahiye khus rahiye aapka dost dhaval |
Sony jee:
namaste: Kaisi haiN aap? ummeed hai Khairiyat se HoNgi... Aap kii yeH Ghazal yuuN to kuchh din pahle hi nazar-nawaaz ho gaii thee.. par aaj reply karne ka mauqa mila hai.. sab se pahle ek achchhi koShiSh par daad dena chaahta huuN..... aur us ke baad do-ek baateN arz karna chaahta huuN.., umeed hai aap bura nahiiN maaneNgii... Quote:
jab masti meiN Shaayar kalam apna uThaata hai, naye mazmun ke phholoN se kaagaz bhi muskuraata hai... Quote:
hamesha khud ke saaye ko amiron se juda rakhna.... ab har ameer thoRe na bure hote haiN:) Kuchh achchhe bhii hote haiN.. Aap har kisii ko bura nahiiN kah sakte haiN.... :) aur ess lihaaz se aap ke Sher ka pahla misra Ghalat hai.. dusra misra behad achchha hai.... pahle misra kuchh aur sochiye.... Quote:
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ek suurat yeh bhii hai.,..: Kufr hai maayus hona aye khudaa teri rehmat se, par mile aksar naakaami to insaan toot jaata hai... ek achchhii koShiSh par mere jaanib se mubaarak-baad qubool keejiye.. Mayank |
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hi mayank ji,, yes m fine,aap kaise hain? aapka shukriya kaise ada karun,, ji hamne bilkul bura nahi mana,, aap yakin nahi karoge,,hamari shayri ya ghazal ,,itni gehrai se aaj tak kisi ne nahi padhi, aur hum dilse keh rahe hain,,aapki taraf se kiye hue correction ko humne bohot dhiyan se padha,aur use samjha bhi, aap ke isi correction ke baad,,hum apni is ghazal ko,phir se ek baar post kar rahe hain, bas umeed kari hun,aage bhi aap hamein isi tarah samjhayenge, thnx again apna khayal rakhiye Allah hafiz **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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