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Baitbaazi
DostoN riyaayati baitbaaazi meiN aap ka swaagat hai.. yahaaN Sher ke aakhir akshyar(in hindi) se aap ko naya Sher kahna hai kisii bhii ustaad ka.. Jaise kii.,...... "yaaro.n" agar last word hai tho, aap ko "R" se shair start karna hai ibtidaa-e-ishq hai rotaa hai kyaa aage aage dekhiye hotaa hai kyaa -Meer Exmaples: ya>>> yaa rab! Gam-e-hijraa.N me.n itanaa to kiyaa hotaa jo haath jigar pe hai vo dast-e-duaa hotaa taa:>>> tabaahii kaa apanii nishaa.N chho.D aaye varaq dar varaq daastaa.N chho.D aaye ye:>>> ye bhii kyaa ehasaan kam hai.n dekhiye na aap kaa ho rahaa hai har taraf charchaa hamaaraa aap kaa |
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kabh`ee tujh` peh meree nigaah hai, kabh`ee Khud se mujh` ko Khit^aab hai koyee yeh bataaYe hai raaz kyaa? yahaaN kaun zer-e-niqaab hai?by..... Sarwar Alam Raz "Sarwar" Sahab mausam:) |
wel come mausam:)
Hai>>> hai duaa yaad magar harf-e-duaa yaad nahii.n mere naGmaat ko a.ndaaz-e-navaa yaad nahii.n mai.n ne palako.n se dar-e-yaar pe dastak dii hai mai.n vo saahil huu.N jise ko_ii sadaa yaad nahii.n -sagar siddiqui |
Nahiin....
nahii.n nigaah me.n manzil to justajuu hii sahii nahii.n visaal mayassar to aarazuu hii sahii Faiz Ahmed Faiz:) |
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hijr kii shab naalaa-e-dil vo sadaa dene lage sunane vaale raat kaTane kii duaa dene lage kis nazar se aap ne dekhaa dil-e-majaruuh ko zaKhm jo kuchh bhar chale the phir havaa dene lage ========saqib lucknawi |
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gesuu-e- taabadaar ko aur bhii taabadaar kar hosh-o-Khiraad shikar kar qalb-o-nazar shikar kar Ra>>>> |
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arz-e-niyaaz*-e-ishq ke qaabil nahii.n rahaa jis dil pe naaz thaa mujhe vo dil nahii.n rahaa jaataa huu.N daaG-e-hasarat-e-hastii liye hue huu.N shammaa-e-kushtaa** daraKhur***-e-mahafil nahii.n rahaa *offering **extinguished lamp ***worthy] BY.....mirza ghalib mayankjee ek baat aapne jo apni post me hi fi urdu istemaal ki hain woh agar meanings ke saath likhe to mere jaiso ke liye accha hoga...:) mausam:) |
hum to tere pyar mein do jaha ko bhool gaye,
aur tum kahte ho ki humne pyar mein kiya hai kaya... -sunita virender kaya hum jaha kuad ke sher likh sakte hai.n...? agar nahi to maaf kijiyega. |
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Mayank |
Sunita jee aap khud ke Sher bhi likh sakte haiN.. aur kisii aur ke bhii..:)
Sunita jee>>> yaa yaa to miT jaa_iye yaa miTaa diijiye kiijiye jab bhii saudaa kharaa kiijiye ab jafaa kiijiye yaa wafaa kiijiye aaKharii vaqt hai bas duaa kiijiye (wajida tabassum) sauda:deal Khara: accurate ye>>>> |
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ye>>>>>> ye jo hai hukm mere paas na aaye ko_ii is liye ruuTh rahe hai.n ki manaaye ko_ii aapane 'Daag' ko muu.Nh bhii na lagaayaa afsos us ko rakhataa thaa kaleje se lagaaye ko_ii mausam:) |
ab samjh meiN aa gaya, aap ka hi-fi urdu se matlab:
koShish karuuNga kii aage aasaan likhuuN .... ek Sher arz kiye deta huuN... ii>>> ek nazar dekh ke ham jaan gaye aap kyaa chiiz hai.n pahachaan gaye :) ye>>> |
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waise lagta hain yeh uparwala sher aapne hi likha hoga..kyun???? ye>>>>>> ye zaruurii nahiin har shaKhs masiihaa hii ho pyaar ke zaKhm amaanat hain dikhaayaa na karo ..... (author ka naam nahin pata hume) |
Yeh Sher mera nahiiN hai, kahiiN paRha tha, aap ko paRh kar dhyaan meiN aa gaya...:p waise Sher ki pasandagii ke liye Shukriyah!:)
ro>>> royaa kare.nge aap bhii paharo.n isii tarah aTakaa kahii.n jo aap kaa dil bhii merii tarah naa taab hijr me.n hai naa aaraam vasl me.n kamabaKht dil ko chain nahii.n hai kisii tarah ha>>>> |
:) accha to aap hume samjajh gaye
ha>>>>> Har dastak hain 'uski' dastak,dil yunhi dhoka khata hain. Jab kabhi darwaza khulta hain,koi aur nazar aata hain! Jane woh kab tak ayega? jisko barso se aana hain Ya bas yunhi raasta takna,har jeevan ka jurmana hain... by...Nida Fazli mausam:) |
hmm.... jee haaN par thoRa thoRa.....:p
well.. aap ne Sher meiN 'hain' likha hai woh dar-asal 'hai' hona chaahiye..(shaayad) :) haiN>>> hai.n ghar kii muhaafiz merii dahakii hu_ii aa.Nkhe.n mai.n taaq me.n rakh aayaa huu.N jalatii hu_ii aa.Nkhe.n khe>>>>> |
:) yeah right 'hai' hi hain..maine likhne me galti kar di....
hen>>>>>>>>>>> henaa kaa rang ye hargiz nahii.n hai sach bataa zaalim ye kis ka phuul saa dil tuu ne paao.n se rond Daalaa writer unknown mausam:) |
haaN, mujhe laga kii 'hai' hi hona chaahiye, kyuN kii singular words use huye haiN.. aur singular meiN 'hai' lagta hai, 'haiN' nahiiN.. ek baat aur, mausam, baitbaazi meiN aap ko last words ke aakhiri letter ko lena hai.. lekin Hindi ka, Roman ka nahiiN... Jaise kii aaNkheN heiN.. to last letter huaa 'kheN' i.e 'kha' :) means 2nd alphabet of hindi consonent.. :p
laa>>> laazim thaa ki dekho meraa rastaa koii din aur tanhaa gaye kyo.n ab raho tanhaa koii din aur :p R>>> |
achhha guruji age se hindi aur roman pe dhyan rakhungi:D warna aap to hain hi batane ke liye:p
R>>>>>>>>> Rooth jaana to mohabbat ki alaamat hain magar Kya khabar thi mujh se woh itna khafa ho jayega by bashir badr mausam:) |
hahahaha. guru jee.....:cool: Guru jee lafz se ek buRhe aadmi kii tashveer nazroN meiN aa jaati hai aur maiN.......:) ess liye Guru jee mat kaho.... haaaN GhaltiyoN ke liye, maiN huuN na...:p
gaa>>>> gaa.Nv miT jaayegaa shahar jal jaayegaa zindagii tera cheharaa badal jaayegaa:) gaa>>>> |
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gaa.Nv miT jaayegaa shahar jal jaayegaa zindagii tera cheharaa badal jaayegaa:) gaa>>>>[/COLOR][/SIZE][/QUOTE] gaye waqt ki tarah dosto woh lout ke phir aa na sakey, aur hum uski yaddey es dil se kabhi mitta na sakey.....! - sunita virender |
heeeeeeeeeee:D aaap ladke hoke bhi age conscious hain:p aam taur pe ladkiyan aise karti hain aap bhi:D chalo hum samajh sakte hain kya feel hota hain so no gurujee....only mayankjee:) ab theek hain...
to ke>>>>>(y yaha silent hain right????) keh rahii hai hashr mein vo aankh sharmaai hui haaye kaise is bharii mahafil men rusvaai hui mausam:) |
eltizza yeh hai ki barish aaj ho jaye,
bahana hoga yehi behtar hamri bheegi palko ka.... Not Mine |
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age conscious kii baat nahiiN hai, baat hai Guru jee kii hai..:eek: :eek: ab aap ek jawaan insaan ko buRha bana deNgii to yeh to na-insaafii hogii.... kyuN hai na?:cool: waise mayank jee kyaa, mayank bhii chalegaa..:p aap ne sahii kaha 'y' silent hai, lagta hai kaafi aage jaaYeNgii.. ;-) . Mayank |
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raaste band hai.n sab kuuchaa-e-qaatil ke sivaa kuuchaa-e-qaatil: killer's street it means hasiinoN kii gali... :D :D dekhiye ShayaroN ne bhii husn waaloN ko kya kya kah diya hai... :p :p vaa>>>> |
koi baat nahin pooja....main likh seti hoon:)
vaa>>> vo rulakar hans na paayaa der tak jab mai.n rokar muskuraayaa der tak bhuulanaa chaahaa agar us ko kabhii aur bhii vo yaad aayaa der tak |
ohhh same galati dobaaraa!!!ab kya kiya jaaye??
do alag alfaaz she ke aghaaz ke liye. kuch hal to nikaaliye mayank ji!! |
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dekha apne sikhaya hi itna badhiya so first round maine pass kar liya gurujee((:D :D ) |
well, sara jee, aap mausam jee ke thread se baitbaazi keejiye, puuja jee ne Ghalti se post kiya tha...
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waise jaldi seekh liya, lagta hai honhaar sishya ho..;) ka>>> kabhii kahaa na kisii se tere fasaane ko na jaane kaise Khabar ho ga_ii zamaane ko >K |
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ko>>> koi paas aayaa savere savere mujhe aazamaayaa savere savere merii daastaaan ko zaraa saa badal kar mujhe hii sunaayaa savere savere |
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na na, palle pad gaya.. maiN samajh gaya thaa kii aap kya kahna chaahati haiN, lekin words samjh meiN nahiiN aaya, aur 'guj' dictionary bhii nahiiN hai.. :) Thanks a lot, for 'sanmaan' :p:) re>>>> ret par likh ke meraa naam miTaayaa na karo aa.Nkhe.n sach bolatii hai.n pyaar chupaayaa na karo |
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kaise bagiya teri yaddo.n ki sajja li humne" -sunita virender |
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neend se aannkh khulii hai abhii dekhaa kyaa hai dekh lenaa abhii kuchh der mein duniyaa kyaa hai |
hai esi mein pyar ki aabru woh jaffa karey main waffa karu,
jo waffa bhi raas na aa sake, to wohi kahey ki main kaya karu.....Not Mine |
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ruuh ko ta.Dapaa rahii hai un kii yaad dard ban kar chhaa rahii hai un kii yaad d>>>> |
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Dekha to mera sayaa bhi mujh se juda milaa Socha to har kisi se mera sil-sila milaa by ayaz zhanswi |
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la>> le chalaa jaan merii ruuTh ke jaanaa teraa aise aane se to behatar thaa na aanaa teraa ra>>> |
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Sannate ke shehar main tujh ko Be-awaaz sadaa di hum ne by farhat shehzad |
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