>> Iskadar mere ishQ kaa asar hoo jaye..
Mehfil me sabhi dost ko, Omi ka salam.. kafi dino ke baad kuch likha hai, hope aap logo ko pasand aayega..:)
<<..Iskadar mere ishQ kaa asar hoo jaye..>> ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Iskadar mere ishQ kaa asar hoo jaye ki uske dil meiN meraa basar hoo jaye rag rag meiN bahta hai vo lahu ban k bas us se bhi ab yeh khabar hoo jaye aayine mein dek sakooN maiN aks uskaa uskii soch meiN shaam-e-sehar hoo jaye naam se uske hi machalta hai mera Dil kaash uske dil mein mera ghar hoo jaye palkoN pe bithaa kar rakhega "Omi" usse Ki ab wo mere khawabo ka sahar hoo jaye ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Meri Apni Qalam se : OMi ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
WOW omi ji
its awesome yaar kya kahe bohot ziyada khoobsurat hai jazbaat bhi aur andaaz bhi |
Thx u my frnd... :) aap ki nazar padi iss nacheez pe, aap ne hamari koshiso ko saraha.. iske liye tahee diL se dhanywad.. :)
yuh hi mehfil me aate rahiye..:) Quote:
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,,,,,,,,ab toh aana hi padega ji,,,,,,,
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diL ke armanoN ki mahak se, aa usko mahka dooN,
aaj apne zakhm-e dil ke lahoo se dulhan ki maaNg sazA dooN.. NM Quote:
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naam se uske hi machalta hai mera Dil kaash uske dil mein mera ghar hoo jaye it was very nice........ but omi ji aisa kyu lag raha hai ke aap isse aur khaas likh kar sakte the........... :) |
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bohot acha hai,,, |
hey thxx yaa... :)
kosis kar raha hu..;) waise bhi suna hai simple word me khud represent karna jayda better hai ruther den shabdo ke jaal me ulajhne se.. ;) yuhi aake, haula badate rahoo.. Quote:
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hey khanak.. :)
1st i wud like to say.. thx 2u.. for ur reply..:) and dear dekhiye.. likh toh bahut kux sakte the, bt deemag me har tym ek se thot nahi aate hai, may be next tym me isi gazal me kuch chnage karke aur achaa bana du.. :) anyways.. tumari iss point ke bhi thx.. :) -- Omi Quote:
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Omi ji |
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Hey Naresh.. :)
Aap ka bahut, bahut sukriya, aap ne hamari Qaalm ko yuh saraha, dekh ke achaa laga.. :) Yuh hi mehfil me aake hausala badate rahiye.. :) -- Omi Quote:
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hey khanak.. :)
Thx again, tumhare reply, dekh ke achaa laga..:) yuh hi, mehfil me sath banaye rakhiye..:) thx again..:) -- OMi Quote:
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Omi jee,
bahot achha likha hai aapne .....ghazal dil pe asar kar gayi .....janab aapki ghazal se to mahfil ko char chaand lag gayi .........khus rahiye Diya |
Diya Ji..
Hamari gazal se nahi... Aap ke aane se hamari mehfiL me char chand lag gaye hai ji..:) aur aap ki tareefoo ke liye tahe diL se sukariya madam ji.;) Yuh hi aapna sath banaye rakhiyeee.. :) --> Omi Quote:
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