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Kabhi lafz bhul jaun
meri pehli koshish jab maine likhna shuru kiya tha...yahan share karti hun... umeed hai... achhi lage aapko.... :confused: :o Kabhi lafz bhul jaun Kabhi khwaab bhul jaun Tujhe iss kadar chahun Apni har baat bhul jaun Ruth kar tujhse kabhi Jo yunhi dur chali jaun To jate hue main khudko Tere hi paas bhul jaun |
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Kabhie Lafz Bhool Jaaon Kabhie Khwaab bhool Jaaon! Tujhay is qadar chahoon, Har baat bhool jaaoon! Look there you go.. you have the idea and the talent so congratulations for a great beginning. Pahli ball par he chauka maardiya.. keep going and keep sharing! Duagoh Ahmad |
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main to :):):):):):):) itni khush ho gai aapkka comment padhkar... meri to morning best best ho gaii... tahe dil se shukriya aapka jo aapne aisi chhoti si koshish pe bhi itna waqt diya .. padha aur pasand bhi kiya aur hausla afzaai bhi.... yunhi sikhate rahiyega.... thanx alot..... |
aahna ji bahut bhulakkad haiN aap, kahin aapko short term memory loss to nahin ho gaya hai na ji....?? :P
Neways on a serious note, as ahmad bhai said, being ur start, the presentation and the depth of the feelings in it, both are very deep indeed... umeed karta hun aage aane wale waqt me aapse aur bhi umdaa qalamkaari dekhne ko milegi..... |
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thnx alot for praising my poetry.. and yes i will try my best to improve myself and post sm really good work here..... keep encouraging.... |
Kabhi lafz bhul jaun
Kabhi khwaab bhul jaun Tujhe iss kadar chahun Apni har baat bhul jaun bahut khubbbbbbbbbbbbbb koshish zaari rakhiyega ........................ |
shukriya rajeev saheb .................
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bahoot khoob upper wale saare comments mein mujhe bhi dekh lena mtlb samjhana saare comments mere bhi vichaar hain aapke liye or ek or baat mom banana thaan liya lagta hai
aise hi hai na :) good going aise hi active raho be blessed |
Dear Ahna ,
Aap ki is bhulne walee adat se SDC mein aap ki dhoom machi hui hai. Manana parega aap mein kuch khas baat hai, tabhi to aap ne two days mein Posts ki century bana di... Waise aap ki kavita achi lagi Good to see young and active memebers on this forum..Keep posting Sanjay Sehgal |
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aapne ek sath itne sare compliments de diye....... nahin ji abhi mom banne me bahot der hai... abhi to meri sirf ek poem post hui hai.. kuch aata jata hai nahin mujhe..... . par koshish karti hun har jagah hone ki... koi sawal karega tabhi to wahan jawab dene koi aayega... ek bar fir shukriya aapka ji |
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humdam ji......... aapke reply ke sath double century puri ho gai...... yupppyyyyyyyy thnx aapne mera dhyan iss taraf kiya.. warna miss ho jata...... aur luckily aapke comment ka reply hi 200th post hoga mera...... thxxxxxxxxxxx................. and meri poem pasand karne ka bhi thnxxxx. khush rahiye likhte rahiye Allah hafiz |
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Tujhay is qadar chahoon,
Har baat bhool jaaoon! Dear Ahna...aap keh rhi hai ki yeh pehli poetry hai, par ahsaas dekhe jaaye to pehli nahi lagti :) hame opper likha sher behaddddddd accha lga...aap koshish karti rhe aise hi thoda thoda likhne ki, hame yakeen hai ki aap aik din SDC ke maane hue shayroN meiN aayengi...ameeN god bless u dear |
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Nice Effort !!! :) |
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