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maikasH 12th September 2018 12:53 AM

aao, tasleem kareiN
 
raNg-e-rivaayat ke khilaaf taaza'h Ghazal ke do misre hue haiN, mehfil ki nazar


aao, tasleem* kareiN, pehle se jaz'baat nahiiN

maiN bhi kuch aur hooN aur tujh meiN bhi vo baat nahiiN


tasleem* = Accept

maikash

sunita thakur 12th September 2018 12:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by maikasH (Post 496653)
raNg-e-rivaayat ke khilaaf taaza'h Ghazal ke do misre hue haiN, mehfil ki nazar


aao, tasleem* kareiN, pehle se jaz'baat nahiiN

maiN bhi kuch aur hooN aur tujh meiN bhi vo baat nahiiN


tasleem* = Accept

maikash

wahhhhhh....Maikash ji, aapke to 2 misre hi poori gazal barabar lagte haiN, bahut khoob likha hai "maiN bhi kuch aur hooN aur tujh meiN bhi vo baat nahiiN" wahhhh.

poori gazal bhi jaldi pesh kijiye...intejaar hai besabri se.

:)

maikasH 14th September 2018 12:56 AM

ta'bedaar hooN Sunita jee aur shukurguzaar bhi, hauNsla-afza'ii ke liye

Jaise hi taqmeel hui, haazir karta hooN


rab raakha
maikash

sunita thakur 14th September 2018 12:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by maikasH (Post 496663)
ta'bedaar hooN Sunita jee aur shukurguzaar bhi, hauNsla-afza'ii ke liye

Jaise hi taqmeel hui, haazir karta hooN


rab raakha
maikash

ji bahut bahut shukriya.......................:)

sameer'shaad' 14th September 2018 01:34 PM

Waahhhh janaab ummdah shahkaari koi aapse seekhe...
Jaise ke sunitaa bahan ne kahaa aapka ek sher muqammal ghazlon pe bhaari hai.....
Zindabaad maikash bhai ...

Shaad....

Madhu 14 19th September 2018 08:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by maikasH (Post 496653)
raNg-e-rivaayat ke khilaaf taaza'h Ghazal ke do misre hue haiN, mehfil ki nazar


aao, tasleem* kareiN, pehle se jaz'baat nahiiN

maiN bhi kuch aur hooN aur tujh meiN bhi vo baat nahiiN


tasleem* = Accept

maikash

Waaah...bahot khushi huyi aapko dekh kar.....
Aur sher ke Kya kahne...aagaaz ye hai to anzaaam Kya hoga...😊intzaar rahega .....

maikasH 2nd October 2018 12:22 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 496665)
Waahhhh janaab ummdah shahkaari koi aapse seekhe...
Jaise ke sunitaa bahan ne kahaa aapka ek sher muqammal ghazlon pe bhaari hai.....
Zindabaad maikash bhai ...

Shaad....


Amaa yaar, tumse baat hue arsaa ho chalaa! Tumhaari facebook waali Ghazal par kuch kehne ki gustaakhi kar baiTha tha, socha tha raabta karoge, Ghalati ho gayi ho to anjaan samajh kar muaaf kar dena bhai.


Na-ehl ka shukriya tasleem farmaa lijiyega

TheDemonPrince 15th October 2018 07:37 PM

Do lines hi bohat kuch ke gayi. :)
Bohat khoob.


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