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joshi chirag

31st August 2017 12:17 AM

yaad

Ek arse ke baad lautna hua hai sdc mai
Kuch pesh kar raha hu , glti ho to maaf kare...

Maanta nahi ye dil meri baat , kya karu
Bas me nahi ab jazbaat , kya karu

Na rahte kabu me alfaaz mere
Aati hai jab teri yaad , kya karu

Har pal tuje dekhne ko jee chahta hai
Par mushkil hai ab mulakat , kya karu

Na nind hai raaton me , na din me chain hai
Ajeeb se hai ye halaat , kya karu

Ki ab to aao sama jaao mujme tum
Jal raha hai "CHIRAG" or lambi hai ye raat , kya karu .......

Madhu 14

31st August 2017 11:34 AM

joshi ji aapka istaqbaal karti hun bazm me....bahot achche lage ishq me doobe huye apke ye ehsaas...yun hee hamare sath apne jazbaat share karte rahiyega...

Aate rahiye....

sameer'shaad'

5th September 2017 09:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by joshi chirag (Post 496060)

bahot khoob bahot sunder peshkash joshi ji......

aapke sher lajawab hain.. aate rahiye likhte rahiye

Maanta nahi ye dil meri baat , kya karu
Bas me nahi ab jazbaat , kya karu

Shaad........

Qasid

16th September 2017 07:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by joshi chirag (Post 496060)

Bahut Umdaa qalam ke saath reentry maari hai chiraag bhai, aate rahiye aur mehfil mein yunhi haseen qalaam pesh karte rahiye

Phoenix

17th September 2017 08:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by joshi chirag (Post 496060)

Itne umda peshkash ke liye sukriya....

joshi chirag

28th September 2017 10:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 496087)

bahot khoob bahot sunder peshkash joshi ji......

aapke sher lajawab hain.. aate rahiye likhte rahiye

Maanta nahi ye dil meri baat , kya karu
Bas me nahi ab jazbaat , kya karu

Shaad........

Shukriya shaad shahab meri iss koshish ko aapne apni tarif se nawaza ..
Aage bhi aapka pyar milta rahe ...

joshi chirag

28th September 2017 10:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Qasid (Post 496117)

Bahut Umdaa qalam ke saath reentry maari hai chiraag bhai, aate rahiye aur mehfil mein yunhi haseen qalaam pesh karte rahiye

Shukriya qasid ji
Aapka saath milta rahega to muje bhi bhot kuch sikhne milega ..

joshi chirag

28th September 2017 10:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Madhu 14 (Post 496061)

joshi ji aapka istaqbaal karti hun bazm me....bahot achche lage ishq me doobe huye apke ye ehsaas...yun hee hamare sath apne jazbaat share karte rahiyega...

Aate rahiye....

Madhu ji , mai humesha se aapka or shaad shahab ka fan raha hu or bas aapko or shaad shahab ko padh padh kr mere khyaal bhi likhne ki koshish krta hu
Shukrya ..

sameer'shaad'

5th October 2017 09:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by joshi chirag (Post 496138)

Madhu ji , mai humesha se aapka or shaad shahab ka fan raha hu or bas aapko or shaad shahab ko padh padh kr mere khyaal bhi likhne ki koshish krta hu
Shukrya ..

ye hamaari khush naseebi hai jo aap aisa samajhte hain Chirag saahab.........

zarra nawaazi ke liye tahe dil se shukriyaa.... ise uupar waale ka karam kahiye jo nacheez ek zariya ban sakaa aur aap ne likhnaa kaayam rakhaa... apni khoobsurat peshkash se mahfil ko sajaate rahiye.... aate rahiye

Shaad......

kabir_shayer

5th October 2017 04:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by joshi chirag (Post 496060)

Behetreen kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne.....
aur sachchaai jhalak rahi hai poori ghazal me...

God bless you.
keep writing and sharing .:)

bhushan

1st August 2019 09:11 PM

bohot khoob

keep writing

aapka apna

bhushan

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