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nalinmehra 16th May 2009 02:57 PM
Jab Woh "Ufff" Kaha Karti Hai
 
जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है


मुस्कुराये जब वो तोः सारी कायनात हंसा करती है,
पड़े उसके कदम जहाँ वो जगह जन्नत हुआ करती है,
दिल के सागर में एहसासों की एक लहर उठा करती है,
मेरी बदमाशियों पे जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है


जो मुड़के देख ले बस एक नज़र तोः ज़िन्दगी थमा करती है,
उसके हर कदम की आहट पे ऋतुएं बदला करती है,
मेरे बिखरे से लफ्जों की ग़ज़ल बना करती है,
सुनके मेरे काफिये जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है,


जब भी मिल जाए वो तोः खुशियाँ इनायत करती है,
अपनी प्यारी बातों से मन को छुआ करती है,
मेरी ज़िन्दगी की रहगुज़र को मंजिल मिला करती है,
सुनके मेरी दास्तान-ए-ज़िन्दगी जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है,


खुदा ही जाने यह कैसी जुस्तुजू साथ मेरे हुआ करती है,
जितना रहता हूँ दूर उससे उतना ही वो मेरे करीब हुआ करती है,
यह कैसी कशिश उसके लफ्जों में हुआ करती है,
ज़िन्दगी से होती है मोहोब्बत जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है.

नलिन


Roman Hindi Version Of The Above Poem

Muskuraye Jab Woh Toh Sari Kaynat Hansa Karti Hai,
Pade Uske Kadam Jahan Woh Jagah Jannat Hua Karti Hai,
Dil Ke Sagar Ne Ehsaason Ki Ek Leher Utha Karti Hai,
Meri Badmashiyon Pe Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

Jo Mudke Dekh Le Bas Ek Nazar Toh Zindagi Thama Karti Hai,
Uske Har Kadam Ki Aaahat Pe Rituayein Badla Karti Hain
Mere Bikhre Se LAfzon Ki Gazhal Bana Karti Hai,
Sunke Mere Kafiye Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

Jab Bhi Mil Jaye Woh Toh Khushiyan Inayat Karti Hai,
Apni Pyari Si Baaton Se Man Ko Chua Karti Hai,
Meri Zindagi Ki Rehguzar Ko Manzil Mila Karti Hai,
Sunke Meri Daastan-E-Zindagi Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

Khuda Hi Jane Yeh Kaisi Justaju Saath Mere Hua Karti Hai,
Jitna Rehta Hun Dur Utna Hi Woh Mere Kareeb Hua Karti Hai,
Yeh Kaisi Kashish Uske Lafzon Me Hua Karti Hai,
Zindagi Se hoti Hai Mohobbat Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

Nalin - The Lost Poet

nalinmehra 17th May 2009 01:04 AM
:confused: No Comments..........On My Poem......................

aarya 17th May 2009 03:16 AM
:) good one.


thanks for sharing.


regards
aarya

nalinmehra 17th May 2009 03:56 AM
thank you aarya, for sparing ur precious time for checking out this poem........... thanks once again....
Quote:
Originally Posted by aarya (Post 354507)
:) good one.


thanks for sharing.


regards
aarya

nalinmehra 20th May 2009 11:15 AM
:confused::confused::confused::confused::confused: :(:(:(

kaatti-kaatti.......... sabche kattii, ab me tisi se bhi baat nai talunga, toi bhi meli poem nahi padta.......................:mad:

Diya_Jale 20th May 2009 02:32 PM
Uff sry sry sry Nalin jee.............

Gustakhi muaaf kijiye ........aapki is poem per humari nazar nahi padi thi.......yeh to bahot bada gunah ho gaya ab kya kiya jaye...?

Khuda Hi Jane Yeh Kaisi Justaju Saath Mere Hua Karti Hai,
Jitna Rehta Hun Dur Utna Hi Woh Mere Kareeb Hua Karti Hai,

Qatil hai jee Qatil hai

kaise aapki sukriya ada karooN jee
ek khubsoorat poem per janib ke daad

aise hi likhte rahiye
apne ehesaas se ru-ba-ru hone ka mouka detey rahiye

Dua.oN ke saath
Diya

nalinmehra 20th May 2009 09:22 PM
kisi ka dil kaise rakha jaaye yeh apko khub aata hai, bas mera dil behlane ke liye apne itni tareef kardi meri poem ki.................. khuda kare ki ap jaisa koi dost mujhe mil jaaye.................... Diya, tumne doobte ko sahara diya hai, mujhe toh laga ki yeh jaise yeh poem meri ekdum flop ho gayi, actually is poem ko maine kisi ke liye likha tha, pata nahi mera kya rishta hia ussay, dosti se badkar hai par pyar toh nahi ho sakta hai yeh bhi me janta hun............... aur sab kehte hain ki sacche ehsaas ke saath kisi poem ko likha jaaye, toh logon ke dilon ko chhu jaati hai aur unke muh se wah-wah apne ap nikalne lagta hai................

par lagta hai shayad mere ehsaason me woh baat nahi...........pata nahi yeh sab kyun likh diya yahan pe..............par sacchi-mucchi bahut bahut thank you, ki apne yeh poem padi.........

Nalin
Quote:
Originally Posted by Diya_Jale (Post 355025)
Uff sry sry sry Nalin jee.............

Gustakhi muaaf kijiye ........aapki is poem per humari nazar nahi padi thi.......yeh to bahot bada gunah ho gaya ab kya kiya jaye...?

Khuda Hi Jane Yeh Kaisi Justaju Saath Mere Hua Karti Hai,
Jitna Rehta Hun Dur Utna Hi Woh Mere Kareeb Hua Karti Hai,

Qatil hai jee Qatil hai

kaise aapki sukriya ada karooN jee
ek khubsoorat poem per janib ke daad

aise hi likhte rahiye
apne ehesaas se ru-ba-ru hone ka mouka detey rahiye

Dua.oN ke saath
Diya

Diya_Jale 20th May 2009 09:45 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by nalinmehra (Post 355087)
kisi ka dil kaise rakha jaaye yeh apko khub aata hai, bas mera dil behlane ke liye apne itni tareef kardi meri poem ki.................. khuda kare ki ap jaisa koi dost mujhe mil jaaye.................... Diya, tumne doobte ko sahara diya hai, mujhe toh laga ki yeh jaise yeh poem meri ekdum flop ho gayi, actually is poem ko maine kisi ke liye likha tha, pata nahi mera kya rishta hia ussay, dosti se badkar hai par pyar toh nahi ho sakta hai yeh bhi me janta hun............... aur sab kehte hain ki sacche ehsaas ke saath kisi poem ko likha jaaye, toh logon ke dilon ko chhu jaati hai aur unke muh se wah-wah apne ap nikalne lagta hai................

par lagta hai shayad mere ehsaason me woh baat nahi...........pata nahi yeh sab kyun likh diya yahan pe..............par sacchi-mucchi bahut bahut thank you, ki apne yeh poem padi.........

Nalin

Nalin jee ,
main ek baat kehna chahati hun ....pls aap dil chhota mat kijiye
ehesaas kis wah wah ki mohtaaz nahi hai .........sache ehesaas se jo poem aapne likha hai aaj nahi to kal ...kisi na kisi ke dil ko jarur chhu jayegi .............khud per yakeen rakhiye

mujhe baatein itna ghuma firake kehna to nahi aata ..........ghalat hindi bolti hun isiliye mahfil mein bahot kam bolne ki koshish karti hu.........


Kya aap mujhse dosti karoge...........:)


gar aap layak samjhe toh

Diya

kwahish 20th May 2009 10:43 PM
Wah Nalin,

It's really superb dear, so romantic superb yaar....

Keep it up bahut hii achche ahsaas bayan kiye hai tumne......

so cute yaar...


Keep posting

keep smiling...

God bless you..

Baqtiar 20th May 2009 11:17 PM
Nalin.....................mere comments agar tumhe manzoooooooooor hai tou bolo ???

nalinmehra 20th May 2009 11:19 PM
Pata Nahi Tha Ki Itni Jadi Dua Kubool ho Jaayegi,
Meri Andheri Si Zindagi Ko 'Diya' Roshan Kar Jaayegi.............

Welcome To My Life............My Dear Friend......... Apki Dosti Hame Dil Se Kubool Hai......

Quote:
Originally Posted by Diya_Jale (Post 355089)

Kya aap mujhse dosti karoge...........:)

nalinmehra 20th May 2009 11:20 PM
arey baqtiar bhai sirf manzooooor hi nahi, apke comments toh sir aankhon pe hia.......... aane djiye.hame intezar rahega apke comments ka......
Quote:
Originally Posted by Baqtiar (Post 355099)
Nalin.....................mere comments agar tumhe manzoooooooooor hai tou bolo ???

nalinmehra 20th May 2009 11:22 PM
Thank You ji.............................apne meri poem padi yahi bahut badi baat hai mere liye.... bahut bahut shukriya............
Quote:
Originally Posted by kwahish (Post 355097)
Wah Nalin,

It's really superb dear, so romantic superb yaar....

Keep it up bahut hii achche ahsaas bayan kiye hai tumne......

so cute yaar...


Keep posting

keep smiling...

God bless you..

Baqtiar 20th May 2009 11:34 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by nalinmehra (Post 355101)
arey baqtiar bhai sirf manzooooor hi nahi, apke comments toh sir aankhon pe hia.......... aane djiye.hame intezar rahega apke comments ka......

Dude you are totally in love with her....

Unki sirf ek 'ufff' ne ye jaduu kardiya
alfaaz ada kardein tou qayamat hi ajaye

Kehne ko tou wo rakte hai rishta sirf dosti ka
Bekabar jaanti nahi ek uff se uski qaraar ajaye

nalinmehra 20th May 2009 11:42 PM
Baqtiar Bhai.....

Man gaye apko................. itni instant shayari apne likh di, aur woh bhi aisi ki seedha mere dil ko chuu gayi.........................apko maaan gaye baqtiar bhai........... UR Awesome.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Baqtiar (Post 355103)
Dude you are totally in love with her....

Unki sirf ek 'ufff' ne ye jaduu kardiya
alfaaz ada kardein tou qayamat hi ajaye

Kehne ko tou wo rakte hai rishta sirf dosti ka
Bekabar jaanti nahi ek uff se uski qaraar ajaye

Diya_Jale 21st May 2009 03:01 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by nalinmehra (Post 355100)
Pata Nahi Tha Ki Itni Jadi Dua Kubool ho Jaayegi,
Meri Andheri Si Zindagi Ko 'Diya' Roshan Kar Jaayegi.............

Welcome To My Life............My Dear Friend......... Apki Dosti Hame Dil Se Kubool Hai......
Uff....................

koi tamanna tumhari kabhi nakaam na ho
udas raho tum aisa koi shaam na ho:)

nalinmehra 21st May 2009 03:08 PM
Ab aap "ufff" kehne lagihai, toh lagta hai, apke liye bhi ek poem likhni padegi.............................. "Ufff"............
Quote:
Originally Posted by Diya_Jale (Post 355171)
Uff....................

koi tamanna tumhari kabhi nakaam na ho
udas raho tum aisa koi shaam na ho:)

Ritu18525 21st May 2009 03:20 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by nalinmehra (Post 354436)
जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है


मुस्कुराये जब वो तोः सारी कायनात हंसा करती है,
पड़े उसके कदम जहाँ वो जगह जन्नत हुआ करती है,
दिल के सागर में एहसासों की एक लहर उठा करती है,
मेरी बदमाशियों पे जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है


जो मुड़के देख ले बस एक नज़र तोः ज़िन्दगी थमा करती है,
उसके हर कदम की आहट पे ऋतुएं बदला करती है,
मेरे बिखरे से लफ्जों की ग़ज़ल बना करती है,
सुनके मेरे काफिये जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है,


जब भी मिल जाए वो तोः खुशियाँ इनायत करती है,
अपनी प्यारी बातों से मन को छुआ करती है,
मेरी ज़िन्दगी की रहगुज़र को मंजिल मिला करती है,
सुनके मेरी दास्तान-ए-ज़िन्दगी जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है,


खुदा ही जाने यह कैसी जुस्तुजू साथ मेरे हुआ करती है,
जितना रहता हूँ दूर उससे उतना ही वो मेरे करीब हुआ करती है,
यह कैसी कशिश उसके लफ्जों में हुआ करती है,
ज़िन्दगी से होती है मोहोब्बत जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है.

नलिन


Roman Hindi Version Of The Above Poem

Muskuraye Jab Woh Toh Sari Kaynat Hansa Karti Hai,
Pade Uske Kadam Jahan Woh Jagah Jannat Hua Karti Hai,
Dil Ke Sagar Ne Ehsaason Ki Ek Leher Utha Karti Hai,
Meri Badmashiyon Pe Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

Jo Mudke Dekh Le Bas Ek Nazar Toh Zindagi Thama Karti Hai,
Uske Har Kadam Ki Aaahat Pe Rituayein Badla Karti Hain
Mere Bikhre Se LAfzon Ki Gazhal Bana Karti Hai,
Sunke Mere Kafiye Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

Jab Bhi Mil Jaye Woh Toh Khushiyan Inayat Karti Hai,
Apni Pyari Si Baaton Se Man Ko Chua Karti Hai,
Meri Zindagi Ki Rehguzar Ko Manzil Mila Karti Hai,
Sunke Meri Daastan-E-Zindagi Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

Khuda Hi Jane Yeh Kaisi Justaju Saath Mere Hua Karti Hai,
Jitna Rehta Hun Dur Utna Hi Woh Mere Kareeb Hua Karti Hai,
Yeh Kaisi Kashish Uske Lafzon Me Hua Karti Hai,
Zindagi Se hoti Hai Mohobbat Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

Nalin - The Lost Poet

Nalin jee,

Itne baDhe baDhe umda shayar apki taareef kar chuke hain to samajh me.n hi nahi aa raha kaha se shuru karun...
par haan mujhe ek baat bahut acchi lagi,
ke..
"bhoole se hi sahi aapki ghazal me.n humara naam to aaya........"
jaha tak aapke lajawaab ehsaaso.n ki baat hai to...........
awesome!!
fantastic !!
mind blowing......................................!!!!
bahut acche lage aapke ehsaas.........
and congrats...............aapki iis "uff" ne aapko Diyam jaisi itni pyari dost de di...!!
yun hi likhte rahiye...............
khush rahiye..
God bless you!
aapki ritu

nalinmehra 21st May 2009 11:02 PM
Ritu Jee,
kahin yeh apke naam ka toh asar nahi ke yeh poem ki itni tareef ho gayi hai..... ha ha ha ha,
waise yeh toh sach hai ki mujhe Diya Jaisi dost mil gayi.......bahut khush hun diya jaisi dost paakar..

aur apne is nacheez ki poem ko pada, iske liye apka dil se shukriya ada karta hoon, bas apka pyar yunhi milta raha, toh me bhi yunhi likhta rahunga....

Take care..
Quote:
Originally Posted by Ritu18525 (Post 355178)
Nalin jee,

Itne baDhe baDhe umda shayar apki taareef kar chuke hain to samajh me.n hi nahi aa raha kaha se shuru karun...
par haan mujhe ek baat bahut acchi lagi,
ke..
"bhoole se hi sahi aapki ghazal me.n humara naam to aaya........"
jaha tak aapke lajawaab ehsaaso.n ki baat hai to...........
awesome!!
fantastic !!
mind blowing......................................!!!!
bahut acche lage aapke ehsaas.........
and congrats...............aapki iis "uff" ne aapko Diyam jaisi itni pyari dost de di...!!
yun hi likhte rahiye...............
khush rahiye..
God bless you!
aapki ritu

heart_killer 22nd May 2009 12:11 AM
Hey Nalin... :)

wah wah.. mar dala yaar...:)
kya kahar..likha hai yaar... ek "uuf " ne tumhari..gajab kar diya.:D

bahut badiya ehsaas hai... maza aa gaya..:d
dil wah wah kar raha hai.. Meri diL se daad Qabool kariye...:)

Yuh hi aapane lafzo se mehfil ashikana banate rahiye..:)

-- Omi

Quote:
Originally Posted by nalinmehra (Post 354436)
जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है


मुस्कुराये जब वो तोः सारी कायनात हंसा करती है,
पड़े उसके कदम जहाँ वो जगह जन्नत हुआ करती है,
दिल के सागर में एहसासों की एक लहर उठा करती है,
मेरी बदमाशियों पे जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है


जो मुड़के देख ले बस एक नज़र तोः ज़िन्दगी थमा करती है,
उसके हर कदम की आहट पे ऋतुएं बदला करती है,
मेरे बिखरे से लफ्जों की ग़ज़ल बना करती है,
सुनके मेरे काफिये जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है,


जब भी मिल जाए वो तोः खुशियाँ इनायत करती है,
अपनी प्यारी बातों से मन को छुआ करती है,
मेरी ज़िन्दगी की रहगुज़र को मंजिल मिला करती है,
सुनके मेरी दास्तान-ए-ज़िन्दगी जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है,


खुदा ही जाने यह कैसी जुस्तुजू साथ मेरे हुआ करती है,
जितना रहता हूँ दूर उससे उतना ही वो मेरे करीब हुआ करती है,
यह कैसी कशिश उसके लफ्जों में हुआ करती है,
ज़िन्दगी से होती है मोहोब्बत जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है.

नलिन

Diya_Jale 22nd May 2009 12:28 AM
NaliN jee,
maine kaha tha na aapse ...yeh "Uff" asar karega magar dheere dhree:)
har koi aapke fan honge ...........itna achha poem aapne dil se likhe hain
kaise kadr nahin hogi uski itni badi mahfil meiN

bharosha rakhiye apne Qalam per

khudaa aapki kalam ko aur Noor bakshe

Dua.oN ke saath

aapki dost

nalinmehra 22nd May 2009 12:31 AM
OMI Bhai, apke comments padke, toh me kitna khush hua hoon , bat nahi sakta, apne toh bas mera dil khush kar diya, apne waqt nikal ke, is kavita ko pada, uske liye dilse apko shukriya kehna chahta hoon..
Quote:
Originally Posted by heart_killer (Post 355300)
Hey Nalin... :)

wah wah.. mar dala yaar...:)
kya kahar..likha hai yaar... ek "uuf " ne tumhari..gajab kar diya.:D

bahut badiya ehsaas hai... maza aa gaya..:d
dil wah wah kar raha hai.. Meri diL se daad Qabool kariye...:)

Yuh hi aapane lafzo se mehfil ashikana banate rahiye..:)

-- Omi

nalinmehra 22nd May 2009 12:34 AM
Man gaye apko diya jee, apke kadam kya pade is thread par, meri toh poem ko chaar-chand lag gaye.......... aur usse bhi badke khushi toh yeh hai ki, ap jaisi ek bahut acchi dost mujhe mil gayi hai........................

bas ek tere kadmon ki aahat se yeh kamal ho gaya,
kal tak jo tha gumnaam kahin aj woh har kahin roshan ho gaya.....
Quote:
Originally Posted by Diya_Jale (Post 355306)
NaliN jee,
maine kaha tha na aapse ...yeh "Uff" asar karega magar dheere dhree:)
har koi aapke fan honge ...........itna achha poem aapne dil se likhe hain
kaise kadr nahin hogi uski itni badi mahfil meiN

bharosha rakhiye apne Qalam per

khudaa aapki kalam ko aur Noor bakshe

Dua.oN ke saath

aapki dost

heart_killer 22nd May 2009 12:39 AM
Are mere bhai... :)
tuhmne likha hi itana badiya hai ki..kya kahu.. ek sharat to tumne ehsaaso ke dhage me firo ke, samne rakha.. jo bahut hi kabil-e-tarif hai..:)

bas.. yuh hi likho aur hume padate raho..:)

tumhara dost..
OMi
Quote:
Originally Posted by nalinmehra (Post 355309)
OMI Bhai, apke comments padke, toh me kitna khush hua hoon , bat nahi sakta, apne toh bas mera dil khush kar diya, apne waqt nikal ke, is kavita ko pada, uske liye dilse apko shukriya kehna chahta hoon..

nalinmehra 22nd May 2009 12:42 AM
iska credit me nahi lunga, iska credit toh usko jata hai , jiski "Ufff" ne mujhe majboor kar diya is poem ko likhne par............... Kya Kahun Bas uski "Uffff" me kuch aisa asar tha ki, bas jazbaat beh nikle, aur yeh kavita ban gayi............

Quote:
Originally Posted by heart_killer (Post 355313)
Are mere bhai... :)
tuhmne likha hi itana badiya hai ki..kya kahu.. ek sharat to tumne ehsaaso ke dhage me firo ke, samne rakha.. jo bahut hi kabil-e-tarif hai..:)

bas.. yuh hi likho aur hume padate raho..:)

tumhara dost..
OMi

nalinmehra 22nd May 2009 03:07 AM
hey DIYA................................ THANKS.......................

nalinmehra 22nd May 2009 01:13 PM
Wah Wah, kya mast tareef kari hai apne meri..............kya comparison hai, "Ufff" Ka "Cheenk" se...................... Accha Naaz, tum ek baar "cheenko" , phir me tumhari "cheenk" pe bhi poem likhunga :D

Waise bahut bahut shukriya, jo apne is nacheez ki poem ko pada........ Aur Reps ke liye apka bahut bahut thank U, apne is chhote baacche ka dhyan rakha bahut bahut shukriya

Quote:
Originally Posted by N@zneen (Post 355392)
Uff....................kya poem hai, excellent, Nalin tum aise poet ho jo cheenk par bhi dil choo lene waala poem likh de, ye to sirf 'Uff' tha :D, wakai bht hi khoobsurat creation hai............reps ++++ i'll give u after spreading some. great work, keep it up ;)

Ritu18525 22nd May 2009 01:21 PM

nalin jee,
aapki iis "uff!!" ne baDa hungama macha rakkha hai SDC par........:D:D:D:D:D
ab humare jaise gareeb likhne walo.n ka kya hoga???:D:D
hume.n bhi bataiyega koi aisa hi.... hungama machanne wala word...:p
khush rahiye aur aise hi hungama machate rahiye...:):)
God bless you
ritu

nalinmehra 22nd May 2009 03:14 PM
Arey koi bhi cheenke feeling toh ek jaisi hi aayegi...:eek: ha h ah ah ha, waise meri koi girlfriend nahi hai, this is a public declaration, ,i dont have any GF, i had some crushes and still have few.............. but no GF's..........
Quote:
Originally Posted by N@zneen (Post 355396)
hahahaha........seriously y dnt u try writing smthng on 'cheenk' i've full confidence in u, tum wakai ispar bhi poem likh sakte ho :D jahan tak mere cheenkne par likhne ka sawaal hai to phir tumhare andar wo feeling nhi ayegi jo tumhari gf k cheenkne par ayegi :D

nalinmehra 22nd May 2009 03:18 PM
arey ritu ji, aisa mat kahiye, ap toh meri taang khich rhi ho:o, SDC se pe toh mujhse bhi badke bahut saare fankar mojood hain, me toh kuch bhi nahi, bas ek chhota sa lost poet hun.......... haan yeh vaada raha ki koi hangama machane wala word mila toh aapse zarur kahunga, waise naaz ne ek word suggest kiya hai "Cheenk"...........ap chahe toh ........:D
Quote:
Originally Posted by Ritu18525 (Post 355398)

nalin jee,
aapki iis "uff!!" ne baDa hungama macha rakkha hai SDC par........
ab humare jaise gareeb likhne walo.n ka kya hoga???
hume.n bhi bataiyega koi aisa hi.... hungama machanne wala word...:p
khush rahiye aur aise hi hungama machate rahiye...:):)
God bless you
ritu

Praneeta 22nd May 2009 03:53 PM
bahot khub!!!!!!!!!!
kaash aisa koi mere liye bhi likhta;).....such lovely feelings
great job.....keep it up
Regards:)
Praneeta

nalinmehra 22nd May 2009 03:57 PM
Hey Praneeta,
Tareef ke liye bahut bahut shukriya, aur im sure yeh poem toh kuch bhi nahi hai, apke liye toh kisi ne is say bhi acchi poem likhi hogi...........................
is poem ko padne ke liye behad shukriya........
Quote:
Originally Posted by Praneeta (Post 355462)
bahot khub!!!!!!!!!!
kaash aisa koi mere liye bhi likhta;).....such lovely feelings
great job.....keep it up
Regards:)
Praneeta

LAMHA 22nd May 2009 06:23 PM
wahhhhhhhhhhh..... NALIN.....bahut khoob ....'uff' kya pyaar hai...;-);-).....bahut hi pyaare lafzon me dil ke armaan bayaan kar diye aur hamare dil ko chhu liya....awesome............be shaq aap rep+++ deserve karte hai.............keep it up dear...:):):)

nalinmehra 22nd May 2009 07:31 PM
thank u @ lamha ji............................ apko poem pasand aayi, mere liye toh yahi bahut badi baat hai, bas ap logon ka pyar yunhi milta raha toh, me bhi yunhi likhta rahunga aur apki khidmat me pesh karta rahunga......
Quote:
Originally Posted by LAMHA (Post 355488)
wahhhhhhhhhhh..... NALIN.....bahut khoob ....'uff' kya pyaar hai...;-);-).....bahut hi pyaare lafzon me dil ke armaan bayaan kar diye aur hamare dil ko chhu liya....awesome............be shaq aap rep+++ deserve karte hai.............keep it up dear...:):):)

Broken Heart 22nd May 2009 07:38 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by nalinmehra (Post 354436)
जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है


मुस्कुराये जब वो तोः सारी कायनात हंसा करती है,
पड़े उसके कदम जहाँ वो जगह जन्नत हुआ करती है,
दिल के सागर में एहसासों की एक लहर उठा करती है,
मेरी बदमाशियों पे जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है


जो मुड़के देख ले बस एक नज़र तोः ज़िन्दगी थमा करती है,
उसके हर कदम की आहट पे ऋतुएं बदला करती है,
मेरे बिखरे से लफ्जों की ग़ज़ल बना करती है,
सुनके मेरे काफिये जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है,


जब भी मिल जाए वो तोः खुशियाँ इनायत करती है,
अपनी प्यारी बातों से मन को छुआ करती है,
मेरी ज़िन्दगी की रहगुज़र को मंजिल मिला करती है,
सुनके मेरी दास्तान-ए-ज़िन्दगी जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है,


खुदा ही जाने यह कैसी जुस्तुजू साथ मेरे हुआ करती है,
जितना रहता हूँ दूर उससे उतना ही वो मेरे करीब हुआ करती है,
यह कैसी कशिश उसके लफ्जों में हुआ करती है,
ज़िन्दगी से होती है मोहोब्बत जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है.

नलिन


Roman Hindi Version Of The Above Poem

Muskuraye Jab Woh Toh Sari Kaynat Hansa Karti Hai,
Pade Uske Kadam Jahan Woh Jagah Jannat Hua Karti Hai,
Dil Ke Sagar Ne Ehsaason Ki Ek Leher Utha Karti Hai,
Meri Badmashiyon Pe Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

Jo Mudke Dekh Le Bas Ek Nazar Toh Zindagi Thama Karti Hai,
Uske Har Kadam Ki Aaahat Pe Rituayein Badla Karti Hain
Mere Bikhre Se LAfzon Ki Gazhal Bana Karti Hai,
Sunke Mere Kafiye Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

Jab Bhi Mil Jaye Woh Toh Khushiyan Inayat Karti Hai,
Apni Pyari Si Baaton Se Man Ko Chua Karti Hai,
Meri Zindagi Ki Rehguzar Ko Manzil Mila Karti Hai,
Sunke Meri Daastan-E-Zindagi Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

Khuda Hi Jane Yeh Kaisi Justaju Saath Mere Hua Karti Hai,
Jitna Rehta Hun Dur Utna Hi Woh Mere Kareeb Hua Karti Hai,
Yeh Kaisi Kashish Uske Lafzon Me Hua Karti Hai,
Zindagi Se hoti Hai Mohobbat Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

Nalin - The Lost Poet
Very nice Nalinji
AApki tarrif karne ke liye mere pass laffz nahi hai.
bas aise hi likhte rahi
dil se dua kabool kare
Apka
Broken Heart

nalinmehra 22nd May 2009 07:42 PM
THANK YOU broken heart ji.......................................apne waqt nikal ke poem ko pada mere liye toh yahi bahut badi baat hai, apka bahut bahut shukriya....
Quote:
Originally Posted by Broken Heart (Post 355514)
Very nice Nalinji
AApki tarrif karne ke liye mere pass laffz nahi hai.
bas aise hi likhte rahi
dil se dua kabool kare
Apka
Broken Heart

LAMHA 22nd May 2009 07:48 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by nalinmehra (Post 355512)
thank u @ lamha ji............................ apko poem pasand aayi, mere liye toh yahi bahut badi baat hai, bas ap logon ka pyar yunhi milta raha toh, me bhi yunhi likhta rahunga aur apki khidmat me pesh karta rahunga......

NALIN....................................just call me LAMHA............ye 'ji' kuch hazam nahi hota..;-);-):D:D

nalinmehra 22nd May 2009 08:04 PM
lagta hai ap bhi meri hi tarah ke hain, mujhe bhi yeh ji hajam nahi hota.......... woh LAMHA hi behtar rahega...
Quote:
Originally Posted by LAMHA (Post 355519)
NALIN....................................just call me LAMHA............ye 'ji' kuch hazam nahi hota..;-);-):D:D

zainy 26th May 2009 10:41 AM
kya kehne!! nalin jee............aapki unke "uff " ne kaafi hulchal machaa diya hai yahan........:)

bohat khoobsurat ehsaas hain............:)

nalinmehra 26th May 2009 02:10 PM
Zainy Ji, bahut bahut shukriya is poem ko padne ke liye, bas ap logon ki dua hi hai yeh ki jo is"Ufff" ne itna dhoom macha diya hai SDC....................Shukriya
Quote:
Originally Posted by zainy (Post 356140)
kya kehne!! nalin jee............aapki unke "uff " ne kaafi hulchal machaa diya hai yahan........:)

bohat khoobsurat ehsaas hain............:)


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