ena naine nu ~~~
 

Kehnde ne ki jine akhiyan to peeti hoye us bande nu sharaab da nasha ki hona he...aisi aankh de nashe di gal...

ena naine nu asi jhak lende
ae nain mere wal takde ne
teri soni soni ankhiyan wich
mere hi hanju vasde ne..

tu meri soni heer kude
tenu eh do naina dasde ne
koi tere jayi tasveer nahi
dohe palka vich eh vasde ne

ae nain mere wal takde ne
ena naine nu asi jhak lende

gal buliyan di hun aayi ta
aapa dove hi sharma baitha
tenu tak tak kamli hasne ha
asa khud nu seene la baithe

tere gore gore galan de
eh toye maari jaande ne
hun khad khad enj sharmaa vi na
sadi sud bud laayi jaande ne..

ae nain mere wal takde ne
ena naine nu asi jhak lende

zulfaa'ch disde mukhde to
hun kive nazar hata laaiye
dil kaabo karke baaithe hai
es dil ni ki samjhaa laaiye

zulfaa de badal kholi na
na mar jaaiye asi boli na
aapan enj hi lukh chupp badalaa to
chann teri deed kara laaiye

ena naine nu asi jhak lende
ae nain mere wal takde ne
teri soni soni ankhiyan wich
mere hi hanju vasde ne..

Haan yeh huyi na baat...

ek sundar seeee tasveer...mere hothon pe muskurahat aa gayi...

gal buliyan di hun aayi ta
aapa dove hi sharma baitha
tenu tak tak kamli hasne ha
asa khud nu seene la baithe

tere gore gore galan de
eh toye maari jaande ne
hun khad khad enj sharmaa vi na
sadi sud bud laayi jaande ne..

aise hee kuch arsa pehle likha thaa do akhiyon ke naam...tumse share karti hoon...shayad tumhein achha lage...

Chain jiya ka le gayin teri akhiyaan
Mujhe mujhse chura le gayin teri akhiyaan

Khanjar ki si dhaar teri akhiyaan
Paar jiyaa ke gayin teri akhiyaan

Jigar pe teer chala ke teri akhiyaan
Madhosh mujhe kar gayin teri akhiyaan

Mitaa ke barson kee doori teri akhiyaan
Aaj tayye kar faasle gayin teri akhiyaan

Bhula ke 'Khuda' ka naam teri akhiyaan
'Kaafir' 'Paras' ko bana gayin teri akhiyaan

khush raho

paras

Mast Ji
 

Mast Ji,
Kidda?Dua ai sada khush raho.Thwada likhya bohot changa lagya.Tussi lafzan nu badi changi tarah wakhaya ai.Dua ai sada hi aida hi likhdai rahogai.
Rab Rakha,
Kavita

hi
 

aarey wah wah

mast bhai kiya baat hai bhoot khoob waise punjaabi to itni aati nahi but i tried my best to understand this poem aur jitna samjhi hoo usse yahi laga ke its beautiful bhut sundar aur piyaari, bilkul masoom kitni piyaari tasweer banai aapne lafzo se.

keep on writing
bye

vow paras jee

wot abeautiful poem aap loog dard, piyaar, dosti aur inncoence ko aik hi poem mai kaise likhte ho maloom nahilakin aapki shayri mujhe hamesha pasand rahi hai cos its unique and yet it makes u feel as if u r a part of what u read.

keep on writing
bye

hi
 

anu ji
tusi bahut hi sona likhiya !! dil nu chu gaya hamesha di taarha....inni tarif wow...har lafz whicho pyar dhul dhul painda aw!!
Very very nicely sweeetyy cutely....written by hrt...i luved it....I read it like 5 times dunoo how many more times i will read it!!


great great work

Priya

Mast ji....

tuhadi waajh dil vichoo aayi ki uhdi aankan no bayan tusi yun kita.....


kujh cheta aaya saano vi...kithe sunya si.....

" MUDDAT BAAD JAMANE NE SAMJYA HAI...
PHUL NU SUNGIDA AE, PHUL NU KHAYEEDA NAHI....

PYAR BHAKSHDA HAI ZINDAGI NU ZINDAGI.....
PYAR PUJIDA AE, PYAR THUKRAIDA NAHI....."

Aedaan hi likhde raho......

bhai ...

aap to jante hio ... main punjabi main jara sa week hun ... par ye samajh main aa gaya mere ... bhai dil chu liya aapne .... yun hi likhte rahiye ....

aapkaapna

kunal

Chain jiya ka le gayin teri akhiyaan
Mujhe mujhse chura le gayin teri akhiyaan

Khanjar ki si dhaar teri akhiyaan
Paar jiyaa ke gayin teri akhiyaan

Jigar pe teer chala ke teri akhiyaan
Madhosh mujhe kar gayin teri akhiyaan

Mitaa ke barson kee doori teri akhiyaan
Aaj tayye kar faasle gayin teri akhiyaan

Bhula ke 'Khuda' ka naam teri akhiyaan
'Kaafir' 'Paras' ko bana gayin teri akhiyaan


Kitni saral aur kitni sundar ankhiyon ka bayan kiya hai aapne paras ji mujhe reply mein itne komal aur aziz bhav dene ka shukriyaa...

aage bhi yunhi saath dete rahiyeGaa

-aapka apnaa

kavita Ji..

Mein theek ha..te naale umeed hai ki tusi vi theek hi hovoge...tuhada atoot saath paa ke hi mainu jyada to jyada punjabi vich aapne khayal dasan da mauka mildaa hai...aage bhi rab kare hamesha tusi mere saath dende raho te mein enj hi likhdaa ravaa

rab rakha
Mast

romana ji aapne na aati huyi bhasha mein bhi mujhe samajhne ki koshish ki iska behad shukriyaa...aur koshish yahi thi ki aap sabki nazar mein yeh tasveer chalke...aur shayad is kalaam ka maqsad pura hua hai

aap aage bhi yunhi saath dete rahiYeGaa

-aapka apnaa

Priya ji...hamesha di tarah tusi dil khol ke mere khayaal padhe eh sun ke badi khushi hoyi.. yes it's writteb by hrt..and that's why u loved it...umeed hai aap bahut baar ise padhe aur har bar mein aapkar yeh ek asar chode...

likhte rahiYeGaa

-aapka apnaa

Aman veer...

bahut khushi hoyi bhrava sun ke ki tuhanu eh waajah sunaayi ditiya..naale bahut hi sona khayaal tusi sade kol chad gaye ho..

PYAR PUJIDA AE, PYAR THUKRAIDA NAHI

badi sachhi gal keh gaye tusi..veer ji

eda hi hameshaa saath dende rehNaa

kunal bhai tumhara dil chuna bahut asaan hai mere liye kyonki mera ghar hai mujhe maloom hai kaise ise sajaana hai...

aage bhi yunhi saath dete rehNaa

-tumhara apnaa

Namaskar
 

Namaskar mast ji

Twade e rahna wekhe.........badey changi lagi.Tussey punjabi wich enna sonna likhdey ho sannu hun pata lageya.Punjabi wich pehle baar main kissey di rachna wekhi ya.Changa lagaya padke.
Aage bhi ehi umeed rakhange ki tusse hoor naayab rachnai punjabi chey pesh karoge.

sukanya ji...tuhanu pehli vaar apne punjabi di nazm ich paakar sanu vi vatheri khushi hoyi hai...umeed hai aage vi tusi sada haunslaa bhadhande rahvoge....

likhde rehNaa

-rab rakhaa

:) Boht hi vadiya likhya tussi!!!! tuhaade agle punjabi di post di udeek rahegi Veere!

Take Care..

~Priya

tuhaade jaye padhan vaale hon ta likhan da mazaa dugnaa ho jaanda hai...zaroor agli post vi tuhaanu jaldi hi milugi ....

ise tarah saath nibhaaunde rehna...

tuhada aapna

wow....mast bhai punjabi
 

wow.............mast bhai, tusi v punjabi ho....bahut vadiya lagiya tuhadi punjabi shayri padke.....highlight kitey step behad pasand aaye....punajbi jado romantic mood vich hon taaN aida di pyari shayri saamne aaundi hai....nice work.

kush raho te kushiya.n maande raho :)

Sunita Di.. kuj 7 saala de baad reply de rahya hai bura na manya par tuhadi badi meharbaani aaj mainu apna likhya e punjabi geet chete aaya....

edaa hi saath dende rehaa karo...

ki gall hai badshaho tusee taaN cha gaye ...tuhdi peshkash 11 saal purani , kinne dunge pyar bhare jazbaat .. hai o rabba ,,,lagda hai ishq sir cher ke bolda si tadd...:D:D:D:D reps ++++ pending???

Hamdam

Veer ji sahi keha oo din hi hor si. Tusi 11 saala baad pdheyaa ta mainu vi vaapas ethe aaun da maukaaa milayyaaa. Tuhada bathera shukriyaa sanjay sahab.

aunde rehnaa

bahut khoob............................................. ...

Shukriya Sahab..................................

Prabhjyot ji, badi meharbaani jeda tusi maine time kad ke padya naal h mere dil da haal sanjha kitta, enj hi aande raho ta likhde padhde raho