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Chaand 23rd December 2002 10:37 AM

Waalid ki Wafat Par [Nida Fazli]
 
DostoN ye ek Khoobsurat Rachna Shri Nida Fazli saahab ki aap sabhi ko pesh karta hooN, aap logoN ne mehboob ke baare me to bahut kuchh likha ya suna hoga ab ek Pita(Father) ke liye Putra(Son) ke jazbaat parhiye, aasha hai aap sabhi ko bhi pasand aayegi.

Waalid ki Wafat Par

Tumhaari Qabr par mai
Fatwa parhne nahi aaya,
Mujhe maaloom tha tum mar nahi sakte
Tumaari maut ki sacchi khabar
Jisne udaai thi, wo jhutha tha,
Wo tum kab the
Koi sukha hua patta, hawa se gir ke tuta tha,

Meri aankheiN
Tumhaare maNzaaroN me qeid hai abtak
Mai jo bhi dekhta hooN, sochta hooN
wo- wo hi hai
Jo tumhaari neknaami or badnaami ki duniya thi,

KahiN kucch bhi nahi badla

Tumhaare haath, meri ungliyoN me saaNs lete haiN
Mai likhne ke liye jab bhi, kagaz kalam uthata hooN,
Tumhe baitha huwa mai
Apni hi kursi me paata hooN,

Badan mai mere , jitna bhi lahu hai
Wo tumhaari
LagzishoN nakaamiyoN ke sath behta hai,
Meri aawaaj me chhupkar, tumhaara zehen rehta hai,

Meri BeemaariyoN me tum
Meri LachaariyoN me tum,

Tumhaari Qabr par jisne tumhaara naam likha hai
Wo jhutha hai,
Tum mujh me jinda ho
Kabhi fursat mile to, fatwa parhne chale aana.

By Nida Fazli

DostoN yadi koi galati ho to maaf kijiega, mai urdu ka achha jaankaar nahi hooN.

JheelEyes 17th January 2003 11:09 PM

Wah !!!
 
Assalam.o.Alaikum Chaand

Bohaaaaaaaaaaat Khoobbbbbb , lajawab post hay ap ki,

Keep it upper :o)) our aisi hi achi chezain post kartay rahiye

Allah Hafiz

Chaand 18th January 2003 09:41 AM

Shukriya dost apne is post ko parha or apne khayaalat se nawaza, par Maafi chaahuNga is Tareef ka asli haqdar mai nahi

shri Nida Fazli sahab haiN, mai to unke kadmoN ki dhool bhi nahi, ye rachna unki hi hai, mai to unka ek fan hooN.

Par aapki doNoN posts parhi sachmuch bahut achhi hai, Likhte rahiyega.

Ijaajat chahooNga,

Chaand

govind 19th April 2003 07:20 PM

hammmmmmmmmmm
 
dear,

ek galti ho to mauf ki jaati hai---

galti'o bhari tumhari gazal bahoot boaring hain...

Rani 20th April 2003 02:47 AM

Salaam

lol lagtha hai govind ko choti choti hi poems pasand hain.Mind na

karna govind par app iss poem ko pare na,phir comment karna.

chaand bohut hi niceeeeeeeeeeee poem hai.


w.s.
Rani

Chaand 28th April 2003 11:11 AM

Shukriya DostoN
 
Govind ji Khushi hui ke yahaaN appreciate karne ke alawa galatiyaaN batane wale log bhi haiN.

YakeeN jaaniye meri Urdu ki samajh itni achhi nahi hai to galati hone ki puri sambhawnaaeiN haiN, isiliye aapse gujaarish hai jab bhi koi galati ho to jaroor mention kijiyega is.se hame galatiyaaN sudhaarne ka mauka to milega.

Waise ye Post meri likhi hui nahi hai, Ye janaab Nida Fazli saahab ki hai, jinka ke mai fan hooN.

Agli baar galatiyaaN bhi jaroor mention kijiyega.

shukriya Aaabhaari....Chaand


Rani ji, Shukriya aapki is taareef ke liye, par ye sahi hai ki hame, hamaari galatiyaaN pata chaleiN or galatiyaaN bataane waale bhi apne hi hote haiN.

Ye Chaand aapka bhi shukrgujaar hai.

Monarch 4th May 2003 02:23 AM

chaand sahab maafi kijiyega... lekin is ghazal main 2nd line main jo alfaaz fatwa likha hai woh mujhe kuch galat saa lag raha hai.. waise meri urdu itni sahi to nahi hai lekin mere khaya se waha fatya hona chahiye tha.. just thats whati feel.. may be i am wrong..

thanks for the this posting such great stuff for us..

meena chheda 10th September 2003 08:53 AM

chaand dost,
Nida Fazli saahab ki rachna ho aur oose tum hamaare saamne roshni maie laao...... is se badh kar kya baat....
aabhari hu jo itni achhi rachna se hamae parichit karwaya...

sathh he..... jagjit singh ki gaayi hui..... par likha kisne hai woh yaad nahi..... muje yaad aa gayi... yah bhi ek pita ne apne betae ki maut par kahi hui hai...
chithhi na koi sandesh
jaane woh konsa desh
jaha tum chale gayae

Chaand 10th September 2003 10:32 PM

Shukriya Meena ji
 
Shukriya Meena ji, ye Rachna wakai bahut khoobsoorat hai ek roj TV par nida sahab ka programme dekhte hue ise pehli baar suna tha, Mene father ke liye likhi gai itni barhiya rachna is'se pehle kabhi nahi parhi thi.

Dusra Geet jo aapne likha hai, Anand Bakshi sahab ne likha hai shayad (I'm not sure about it) Dushman film ke liye, Film me to sister ke liye gaya gaya hai, real life me is gaane ki history mujhe nahi maaloom.

Chalta hooN.

Chaand

khushiii 11th September 2003 01:01 AM

chand ji assalam u alaikum
sach aapne hum sab ke saamne jo nazm pesh ki hai us nazm se humein waaqif karane ka shukriya.yeh nazm yahan pe post hui sabhi nazmo se alag hai.
sach waldain ke liye jo mohobbat is mein pesh ki gai hai woh lajawaab hai
keep posting friend

Chaand 11th September 2003 08:46 PM

Shukriya Khushii Ji
 
Shukriya Khushiiiji, aapne is post ko parha, or khushi hui ke aapko ye post pasand bhi aai.

Sahi farmaaya aapne unka ye kalaam kuchh hatkar bhi hai.

Or HaaN Khushiii ji aapke profile se pata chala ke kal aapka B'day tha, kal to na kar paaya,........ Very Happy Belated Barthday to You.

Khush raho.

Chaand

meena chheda 11th September 2003 08:58 PM

chhand dost,
jaha tak muje pata hai ke jab se jagjit singh ke son ki akasmaat maut ho gayi tab se oonhe maine har prog; maie yah gajal gaate jaroor soona hai. is liyae muje laga ke yah ek pita apne bachhae ki maut par ga rahe hai...
jaankari k liyae shukriaa.
waakai maie nida ji ki gajal ka to kya kahna.......

musharrafhusain 29th September 2003 12:45 AM

Chand dost

mein behad shirminda hoon ke is nazm ko bohat der se parha mein ne.
mein behad shukur guzaar hoon aap ka ke nida faazli saheb ki itni khoobsoorat aur munfarid poetry father per aap ne post ki.
ham se shair ki.
mujhe zaati taur per yeh nazm bohat pasand aayee.
mein ne nida faazli saheb ko kaafi parha hai magar yeh nazm pehle naheen suni.
aap ne bohat ahchca kiya jo ise yahan post kiyaa.
mere father ki death bhi bohat jaldi ho gaee thee when i was 17.
us waqt mein ne ek shayr parha thaa jo aaj tak mujhe yaad hai balke mere dil per naqsh hai.
"UMR BHAR HAM AAP KI AAGHOSH MEIN PALTE RAHE
JAB HUE KHIDMAT KE QAABIL AAP RUKHSAT HO GAE"

Ek baar phir aap ka shukriya chaand.

musharrafhusain

Chaand 29th September 2003 11:35 AM

Shukriya dost
 
Musharrafhusain ji, sabse pehle to aapka abhinandan(welcome) karta hooN ke aapne Nida saahab ki is post ko itna maan diya, Nida saahab ko sun.na tak apne aap me kuchh seekhne jaisa hai.

Rahi baat deri se parhne ki to mere dost jindgi ki aapa-dhaapi (dour-dhoop) me na jaane kyaa kya chhoot jaata hai, so der se hi sahi aapki nazar to padi ispar ye bhi to baat hai.

Pita ki ahmiyat hamaari jindgi me is aasmaan ki tarah hai, wo hai ya nahi har waqt hamaare upar haath rekhe huwe haiN, so mere dost mai khud Nida saahab ka shukr gujaar hooN pita par itni khoobsoorat rachna likhne par.

Shukriya Dost.

Chaand

romana 31st October 2003 05:25 PM

hi
 
hi rakesh

hw r u well is rachna ko to hum pehle hi reply kar chuke hai its a really nice poem

but i wantred to ask u sumfin is this ur favourite poem
pls dont mind me askin i just wana know

aur hws life gng

take care
lu
roma

chaahat 17th June 2004 02:38 AM

Bahut hi achi rachna hai Nida ji ki.
Shukriya Chaand ji, jo aapne yahan post karke hum sab ke saath ise share kiya!

Chaand 17th June 2004 12:37 PM

Shukriya DostoN...
 
Romana....aapko reply bahut deri se de raha hooN...ji haaN kisi shaayar ki likhi kam-s-kam father par ....to mujhe ye sabse achchhi rachna lagi....weise bhi pehle hi keh chuka hooN...Nida saahab ka fan hooN mai.

Aapki is taareef ke liye shukriya....tahe dil se.

Chahat123 ji...Shukriya tahe dil se aapka bhi....aapne ise parha pasand kiya, ye Chaand aapka shukriya ada karta hai.

Chaand

ghayalparwana 18th January 2005 09:18 PM

Thanks Chaand ji..

Parul 4th May 2005 07:26 PM

Dear Chand ji,

Thank you very much for sharing this here, and I can feel the value of this creation... It's such a true!

KunaaL 4th May 2005 09:29 PM

chaNd bhai....

aaj lag bhag 2 sal 5 mahine ho gaye aapko ye post kiye hue... na jane nida sahab ne ise kab anjaam diya hoga.. par iske ehsasoN maiN us waqt jo ravangi rahi hogi .. utni hi aaj bhi hai.. ye saboot hai is kalaam ke nekdili ka ... ye saboot hai ek bete ka pyar apne walid ke liye ... ye saboot hai ki wakai ehsaas kabhi mar nahi sakte... aur ye duniya wale chahe jitna badal jayen ehsaas ke saye se bachg nahi sakte ... bohat hi khoob .. aisa pyar har beta apne baap ko kare.. aur sach hai ki kuch sath aise hote hai jo kabhi nahi chooth sakte... aur baap bete ka sath bhi apne aap maiN ek mukaam rakhta hai ...

bohat bohat shukriya ise yahaN lane ke liye .. sharminda huN ki meri kismat ab layi mujhe yahaN ....

likhte rahiye yuN hi

aapka bhai

kunal

Chaand 4th May 2005 09:38 PM

Ghayalparwana or Parul ji, mai aap donoN ka hi pita ke prati prem samajh sakta hooN so socha ke ek or bete ki ye kriti aap donoN ki nazar karooN ...

KyoNki mai khud bahut hi prabhavit huva tha , jab Nida saahab ne ise khud gaakar sunaya tha ek TV Programme me...


Shukriya dostoN ise pasand karne ke liye.

Kunal mere dost......mai jaanta hooN ke tumhe khoob pasand aayi hogi Nida saahab ki ye rachna....

wo haiN hi itne mahaaN shaayar...

Khair...tum der se aaye...isme sharmindgi keisi...ham khud is jindgi ki daud-dhoop me jaane kya kya ...parhne or sun.ne se chook jaate haiN

So ...koi baat nahi...tumne parha pasand kiya ...ye khushi ki baat hai.

Chaand

komal5 5th May 2005 02:48 PM

hi!
 
....m wordless...its so touching!
bahot bahot bahot shukriya...ise share karne ka..! chhand ji!

Nida ji k naam Dil se salaam!
tc
komal

Pulkit_gupta 5th May 2005 03:18 PM

Tumhaari Qabr par mai
Fatwa parhne nahi aaya,
Mujhe maaloom tha tum mar nahi sakte
Tumaari maut ki sacchi khabar
Jisne udaai thi, wo jhutha tha,
Wo tum kab the
Koi sukha hua patta, hawa se gir ke tuta tha,

WaaaaH.. so touching!!


Meri aankheiN
Tumhaare maNzaaroN me qeid hai abtak
Mai jo bhi dekhta hooN, sochta hooN
wo- wo hi hai
Jo tumhaari neknaami or badnaami ki duniya thi,
KahiN kucch bhi nahi badla

Beautful!!


Tumhaare haath, meri ungliyoN me saaNs lete haiN
Mai likhne ke liye jab bhi, kagaz kalam uthata hooN,
Tumhe baitha huwa mai
Apni hi kursi me paata hooN,

Very Touching!!


Badan mai mere , jitna bhi lahu hai
Wo tumhaari
LagzishoN nakaamiyoN ke sath behta hai,
Meri aawaaj me chhupkar, tumhaara zehen rehta hai,

Amazinggggg... bahut hi asardaar!!

Chaand Bhai!!

This one is gem of a creation.. as expressive as a shayri can get...Har lafz me emotions ka flow hai... simply loved it!!

Thx for sharing it here! :)

chandsi 24th November 2005 06:32 AM

....m wordless...its so touching!
bahot bahot bahot shukriya...ise share karne ka..! chhand ji!

Nida ji k naam Dil se salaam!
tc
komal
&
CHANDSI..

------------
~a tender touch~

red_ruchika 16th April 2006 04:47 PM

ho to gai hai bahot der padne main,
par mujhe bahot acchi lagi...

sharifa_786 19th April 2006 05:41 AM

Hi,

bahoot khub......
Achha laga kuchh naya hatke padhne mila....


Allah hafiz.

mittal_pali 19th August 2011 11:52 PM


mittal_pali 20th August 2011 12:23 AM

Correction
 
Its 'Faatya' or 'Faatha' not 'Fatwa'.

Faatya or Faatha : is a Muslim prayer

Fatwa : is a legal opinion or decree handed down by an Islamic religious leader


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