Meri Khani , Meri Jubani
 

Dosto Mein apana nigha dard likhea hai, aj betha c kafi udas c fir sochea aj khuli kvita likh k vekh lavan , hai bhut lambi shyd thonu bor kr deve . pr apna view dena na bhulna

Meri khani hai , meri hi jubani hai,
mein hi nayak han, mei hi khlnayak han,
mera hi hasa hai, mere chare pase ik gehra snata hai,
ghdi di tik tik mukdi nahi, jindgi wail di tran vdh rhi hai jo mukdi nahi,
kise kone te ja k mein khlo janda han,
hasde hasde hi udaas ho janda han,
inj lagd hai k jive koi menu dekh k buhe bhed riha hai,
hwa da bula jeha chlda hai , jive koi menu ched riha hai,
meri udaasi mera mkhol uda k sjna sjna kehdi hai,
ghoor k jd sheeshe wal dekhda han,
chehre te paee hr ik shy menu kuj khendi hai,
fir sochda han dunia metho mukh fer na lave ,
drda han kite gma di brat menu ikle nu vekh k gher na lve,
ghro v door nasda han, kise di mehfil vich malo jori hasda han ,
ik fulkari hth vich fd lenda han,
merian mithian yadan de sitare apne hthi jd lenda han,
kise nu vekh k meri jindgi ik doonga bhed bn jandi hai,
khani thodi madhm jehi pendi hai,
te fulkari mera kafan sfed bn jandi hai,
ik pal de lae roshni jehi mere chere te pendi hai,
khani nu mud snjeev kr lendi hai,
ikle beh k mein tdfda han,
mein khani vich ikla han shyd ese lae sb nu rdkda han,
mein khud nu behtr nayak sidh krn lae har rang is vich rangda han ,
sdian to bhtk riha han ik piar kise to udhara mangda han,
dove hth age kr mein kise nu gale laun di sochda han ,
pr khani vich mein mjak da patr han ese lae ehsasan to v sngda han ,
khani kd shru hoee eh ta pta nahi , shyd mere te vishwas koi na kr skea ,
hun ant da role mein kise de share tangda han ,
mein anjan c kise nu apne dil vich piro na skea ,
sari khani sunni jehi lagdi hai ,
jindgi bhr mein hk d nal kise da ho ni skea,
thokran kha kha mein bhut sikhea, pr hun sikhea ni janda,
Preet meri khani da ant kise Khuda de hth vich hai,
pta ni usde dil vich aje ki hai jis to aje es da ant lkhea ni janda .

Mere kol ta shabad hi nahi hai. sajan
 

Hello Mr prit pal
Je ye tuhade dil di kahani hai tan me tuhano kutch suggest karna chahanga.......

tussi tan apne dil da haal suna dita par kde sochya hai ki usdi bhi koi majburi ho sakdi hai ..............................
But tussi likhya bahut badiya hai.....
........................... Agar tussi kisi da bura ni kita tan rab bhi tuhade nal bura nahi kr sakda , honsa rakho .
Sajan with love .

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Aadab :)**Kahaani Parhkar Aapko Duwaaye Dene Ko Dilne Chaha Iss Liye Yahaan Aa Gayi Main :)**Filhaal Main Bas Itna Hee Keh Paaungi Ki Dard Mehsuus Kar Sakti Huun Aapki :)**Waise To Punjabi Mein Baatein Karni Mushqil Hain Mere Liye :) Haan, Seekhne Ki Kowshish Ab Bhi Jaari Hain Meri Par Seekhane Waale Koyi Nahee Hai Par Kabhi Na Kabhi Seekh Hee Lungi Shayaad**Ek Geet Na Jaane Kyun Dil Mein Baj Raha Tha Aur Ye Geet Aapne Bhi Sune Honge Zoruur :)**Pyaar Hotaa Hai To Hota Hai Ya Hotaa Hee Nahee~Iss Ke Baadle To Kisi Shai Kaa Asar Hota Nahee :)**Waise Aapke Bade Mein Aur Bhi Kuch Jaanna Chahungi Main, Aapke Abbu Jee Ammi Jee Aur Aapki Bachpan Ke Baade Mein Bhi Jaanna Chahungi Main :)**Kuch Bura Laga Ho To Mujhe Mafh Kar Dijiyega, Please :)? Dilki Gehraaion Kee Gehraaion Se Dher Dher Saare Phool**Heartily Thanks For Sharing With Us :)**Dilki Gehraaion Kee Gehraaion Se Dheron Duwaaon Ke Saath Ijaazat Chahungi Main :)**

ADAB SHIMUL JI ADAB , BHUT ACHA LAGA APKA REPLY PAD KR , MERE 4 SISTER AUR MEIN AKELE HOON, GHAR MEIN AMI, ABBU, HAIN, 3 SISTER MARRIED HAIN MEIN AUR MERI CHHOTI BHEN UNMARRIED HAIN, PESHE SE MEIN EK MENTALLY DISABLED AND PHSYSICALE DISABLED CHILD SPECIALIST DOCTER HOON, APNE AAP KA DARD KHUD KO SUNANA MERI ADAT HAI, APN GAM PAR APNA HI ADHIKAR JMA LETA HOON, AJJ TK MUJE KOI DIL SE DEKHTA VO MILA HI NAHI, MILE BHUT PAR HMARE DIL KBHI DIL SE MILE HI NAHI , IS LE E MERE DRD HI MERE SATHI BN GAE , AB AP BHI APNE BARE MEIN THODA BTAENGE YA AAM LOGO KI TRH APP BHI HME BUDHOO BNAENGE .

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Aadab :)**I Am Glad That You Wrote A Bit About Yourself :)**I Have 6 Brother's Plus Myself**Hisab Kitab Rakhna Aur Karna Mera Kaam Hain :)**Waise Geeton Ke Zariye Behtar Baate Karleti Huun Main Aur Kabhi Kabhi To Mazak Bhi Karleti Huun :)**Iss Liye Ek Geet Ki Thodi Si Bol Likhh Rahi Huun**Hum Bande Hain Pyaar Ke-Maange Sab Kee Khair-Aapni Sabse Dostee-Nahee Kisi Se Bair :)**Signature Mein Jo Tasweer Hai Wo Meri "Little Prince" Ka Tasweer Hai :)**Iss Waqt Uk Mein Huun**Ek Baat Aapko Kehna Chahungi Main_Aap Aapna Dukh Khudko Na Sunaiyega Kyun Ki Dard Bharhta Hain :)**Waise Aap To Ek Bohot Achchha Kaam Kar Rahe Hain-Jaankar Dilko Achchha Laga :)**Aap Aapna E-Mail Address Agar De Mujhe To Maherbani Hogi**Dilki Gehraaion Ki Gehraaion Se Dher-o-Dher Saare Phool,Shukriya :)**Duwaaon Ke Saath Ijaazat Chahungi Main :)**

thanks shimuli ji , apka reply bhut acha laga , apke bare mein jan kr , my email address is dr.preet@sify.com ,vipdr.preet@yahoo.com , shimuli ji mein apne dil ka drd dil mein rkh leta hooon jb yeh bhr jata hai to ek khoobsurt nazam nilk aati hain , phir akele beth k jb use pdta hoon to dil mein ek khushi si hoti hai k yeh preet ne hi likha hai, muje koi jan pata , mera asli chehra pehchan pata esi meri kismt hi nhi, sb se beutiful tihfa muje jo mila hai woh hai k mein ek masoom bejuban bchon k sng has leta hoon .

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Aadab :)**Dilko Achchha Laga Jaankar :)**Dilki Gehraaion Ki Gehraaion Se Dher-o-Dher Saare Phool,Shukriya :)**Heartily Thanks :)**God Bless You :)**Duwaaon Ke Saath Ijaazat Chahungi Main :)**

Chitt Gairan De banere Nal La Leya,
Tainu Udna Sikhaya Sanu Ki Mileya :-(

Bahut khoobsoorat dard hai..
 

Preet ji jawaab nahi tuhaadaa. Bahut nivekeley shabd atey bahut hi nivekelee te sachi gall. Bahut Achha laggaa. Tuhaadey reply padh ke pataa laggaa ki tusi mentally te physically disabled bachiaaN de doctor ho. Bahut changgaa laggaa ki tusi bahut noble proffession wich ho. Main pichley 2 months toNN is mehfil wich aa rihaa haaN par ajj shaayad hun takk di sab toNN vadhyiaa rachnaa padhee. Thanks for sharing it with us. Ik cheez hor... Do u know why god created gap in our fingures? So that some one with fingures exactly of same size of that gap may come some day and fill that gap forever. It happens to everybody and it will happen to u. Te os din saanu invite karnaa na bhulnaa.

Ik sher tuhaadi nazar..

Sun-ke rudaad teri dil yehi kehtaa hai Qateel,
Miltee jultee hai meri kahaani bhi terey afsaaney se...

(Qateel Shafaaee)

Wasdey Raho

tilak...

Hello Preet ji

Tuhadi eh poem bahut hi sohni hai, tusi aapni kahani bahut hi vadhiya tarike naal biyan kiti hai, Really goood job

tilak ji bhut bhut shukria tusi apna time spend kita, kher tusi bhut achhi disha diti k jo unglaan da gap hai, oh kise dian unglan jo is siZe vich aa skn is lae bnia han, par tilk ji kuch lok ese bhi ta hoe hn jina dian dove hthan dian unglan hi apas vich sma gaean, fir asi vi ta ohi bdnsib han,

o mere malik ajj ta is mehfil de mashoor shyar bhi hajir han , mein ohna nu salam kehnda han, jo mere ghr aae, shukrya , heer ji , apna time spend kita , hun ta thodi koi navi poem di udik vich han

Speechless.............:(

thanks sunita ji tusi meri poem padi, ikali poem hi ni, mere dil di awaz v padi