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Madhu 14 15th December 2014 04:46 PM

nishaan ret pe....
 
Ek tasveer ko dekh kar kuch khyaal zahan me aaye..
aapke sath share kar rahi hoon...

Nishaan ret pe mit hi jayenge
jo dariya e gam ne chaha to..
Aao kuch aisa karein ki
Yaad zamaana rakhe...

Hath hathon me
bhale hi na ho kal..
Kadam ek doosre ke
Sang me jaana rakhe..

Rakhe ek doosre ko
Yoon dil me apne..
Yaad us rab ko
Jaise koi deewana rahke..

Kyon na mashroof ho
Ham kitni hi aur baton me
Baat ek doosre se karne ka
Koi to bahana rakhe...

sameer'shaad' 15th December 2014 04:57 PM

waah waaaahhhhhhhhhh kyaa khayaal pesh kiye hain Madhu saahiba aapne......

har panktii apne aap me ek misaal hai..... bahot khoob..

Hath hathon me
bhale hi na ho kal..
Kadam ek doosre ke
Sang me jaana rakhe..

Rakhe ek doosre ko
Yoon dil me apne..
Yaad us rab ko
Jaise koi deewana rahke..



likhtii rahiye.......

Shaad....

Hamdam 16th December 2014 12:06 AM

Ek achcha khayal pesh liya aap ne ...Madhu ji

Kyon na mashroof ho
Ham kitni hi aur baton me
Baat ek doosre se karne ka
Koi to bahana rakhe...

Kash hum ye mayne Zindagi mein samajh payein ,,,

Sanjay Sehgal

aru 16th December 2014 01:31 AM

bahut khoob Madhu jee .....acche khyaal hain aapke.....touching and sensitive...

Madhu 14 9th March 2015 05:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 473025)
waah waaaahhhhhhhhhh kyaa khayaal pesh kiye hain Madhu saahiba aapne......

har panktii apne aap me ek misaal hai..... bahot khoob..

Hath hathon me
bhale hi na ho kal..
Kadam ek doosre ke
Sang me jaana rakhe..

Rakhe ek doosre ko
Yoon dil me apne..
Yaad us rab ko
Jaise koi deewana rahke..



likhtii rahiye.......

Shaad....

Behad shukriya janaab...Aapki waah dekhkar bahut khushi hoti hai shaad jee....bas yoon hee sath banaye rakhein..aur daad ke sath meri galtiyon par bhi nazar rakhein to yakeenan kuch achcha likh sakti hoon main...:)

Madhu 14 7th April 2015 10:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hamdam (Post 473031)
Ek achcha khayal pesh liya aap ne ...Madhu ji

Kyon na mashroof ho
Ham kitni hi aur baton me
Baat ek doosre se karne ka
Koi to bahana rakhe...

Kash hum ye mayne Zindagi mein samajh payein ,,,

Sanjay Sehgal

Bahut bahut shukriya sanjay jee......

Madhu 14 15th May 2015 03:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aru (Post 473044)
bahut khoob Madhu jee .....acche khyaal hain aapke.....touching and sensitive...

ShukriyA arvind ji....jo aapko mere khyaal pasand aaye.........
Aate rahein .

Sagar Aashna 15th May 2015 06:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Madhu 14 (Post 473024)
Ek tasveer ko dekh kar kuch khyaal zahan me aaye..
aapke sath share kar rahi hoon...

Nishaan ret pe mit hi jayenge
jo dariya e gam ne chaha to..
Aao kuch aisa karein ki
Yaad zamaana rakhe...

Hath hathon me
bhale hi na ho kal..
Kadam ek doosre ke
Sang me jaana rakhe..

Rakhe ek doosre ko
Yoon dil me apne..
Yaad us rab ko
Jaise koi deewana rahke..

Kyon na masroof ho
Ham kitni hi aur baton me
Baat ek doosre se karne ka
Koi to bahana rakhe...


Wah ji wah.. kya kehne.
Yeh mujh se chhuut gayi thi, paDh kar bohot sukoon mila.
Bohot baDhiya.

Madhu 14 26th June 2015 09:22 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sagar Aashna (Post 477898)
Wah ji wah.. kya kehne.
Yeh mujh se chhuut gayi thi, paDh kar bohot sukoon mila.
Bohot baDhiya.

aapki inayaton ki bahut shukraguzar hooon sagar sahab....yoon hee sath dete rahiyega......
salamat rahein...

sunita thakur 26th June 2015 09:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Madhu 14 (Post 473024)
Ek tasveer ko dekh kar kuch khyaal zahan me aaye..
aapke sath share kar rahi hoon...

Nishaan ret pe mit hi jayenge
jo dariya e gam ne chaha to..
Aao kuch aisa karein ki
Yaad zamaana rakhe...

Hath hathon me
bhale hi na ho kal..
Kadam ek doosre ke
Sang me jaana rakhe..

Rakhe ek doosre ko
Yoon dil me apne..
Yaad us rab ko
Jaise koi deewana rahke..

Kyon na mashroof ho
Ham kitni hi aur baton me
Baat ek doosre se karne ka
Koi to bahana rakhe...


Madhu Bala ......bahut accha likha hai aapne, ehsaasoN ko jubaan dena bahut khoobi se kiya aapne....god bless u

Madhu 14 18th September 2015 09:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sunita virender (Post 480421)
Madhu Bala ......bahut accha likha hai aapne, ehsaasoN ko jubaan dena bahut khoobi se kiya aapne....god bless u

Thank u di.....aapki wishes yun hee milti rabein yahi dua hai....

Tkcr..love..
Madhu..


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