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sameer'shaad' 3rd January 2016 08:49 AM

~~*ye zamaanaa judaaiyon waala*~~
 


Aa raha ye khayaal hai jaise,
tum se milnaa muhaal hai jaise.

aaj dekha to maine paaya hai,
har khushi bhii malaal hai jaise.

ye zamaana judaaiyon waala,
ek pal ek saal hai jaise.

tujhko har waqt sochte rahnaa,
mere dil kaa kamaal hai jaise.

terii yaaden udaas gulshan me.n,
koii phoolo.n ki Daal hai jaise.

kyuu.n mujhe chain ab nahii paDtaa,
paagalon saa ye haal hai jaise.

main guzartaa huaa zamaanaa hoon,
tuu nayaa ek saal hai jaise.....

aru 3rd January 2016 11:26 AM

Kya baat hai Shoiab bhai.....bahut khoobsurat aashaar....last two lines to jaise naye saal ka tohfa de diya aapne.....simpy superb...

prasaxena 3rd January 2016 11:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 490058)


Aa raha ye khayaal hai jaise,
tum se milnaa muhaal hai jaise.

aaj dekha to maine paaya hai,
har khushi bhii malaal hai jaise.

ye zamaana judaaiyon waala,
ek pal ek saal hai jaise.

tujhko har waqt sochte rahnaa,
mere dil kaa kamaal hai jaise.

terii yaaden udaas gulshan me.n,
koii phoolo.n ki Daal hai jaise.

kyuu.n mujhe chain ab nahii paDtaa,
paagalon saa ye haal hai jaise.

main guzartaa huaa zamaanaa hoon,
tuu nayaa ek saal hai jaise.....

main guzartaa huaa zamaanaa hoon,
tuu nayaa ek saal hai jaise....

Wah wah shaad sahab. Umda sher kahe hain aapne. Rumani andaaz bhi kya kehne.

Praveen

Madhu 14 3rd January 2016 01:11 PM

terii yaaden udaas gulshan me.n,
koii phoolo.n ki Daal hai jaise.

Waah!! Bahut khoob bayangi....

main guzartaa huaa zamaanaa hoon,
tuu nayaa ek saal hai jaise.....

Kya kahne....umda..

Naye saal ki shuruat Bahut haseen ghazal se huyi hai shaad sahab...bahut khoobsurat sher kahe hain.....is muhabbat bhare kalaam par daad qubool kijiyega..
Aise hee mahfil me chaar chaand lagate rahein...

Aate rahiye..
Khush rahiye...

masti 3rd January 2016 02:13 PM

Shaad bhai....

Aapki tadap dilbtak pohunchi.....bohut khubsoorat.

sameer'shaad' 3rd January 2016 04:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aru (Post 490060)
Kya baat hai Shoiab bhai.....bahut khoobsurat aashaar....last two lines to jaise naye saal ka tohfa de diya aapne.....simpy superb...

bahut bahut shukriyaa aapka aru bhai...... merii ki taraf se shukriyaa qubool kijiyega.................

aate rahiyegaa....


Shaad.....

Qasid 3rd January 2016 09:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 490058)


Aa raha ye khayaal hai jaise,
tum se milnaa muhaal hai jaise.

aaj dekha to maine paaya hai,
har khushi bhii malaal hai jaise.

ye zamaana judaaiyon waala,
ek pal ek saal hai jaise.

tujhko har waqt sochte rahnaa,
mere dil kaa kamaal hai jaise.

terii yaaden udaas gulshan me.n,
koii phoolo.n ki Daal hai jaise.

kyuu.n mujhe chain ab nahii paDtaa,
paagalon saa ye haal hai jaise.

main guzartaa huaa zamaanaa hoon,
tuu nayaa ek saal hai jaise.....

Dil ke jab tootne ki awaaz na ho
khwaashishen ho par khwaab na ho

ek aisi tapish mein le gayi tumhaari baatein
baagh mein hum aur koi gulaab na ho

Bhai bahut naazuk bahut umdaa aur kaafi dil se likhi gayi rachnaa hai.....nacheez ki daad qubool farmaiyegaa aur yunhi bazm roshan rakhiYeGaa

ISHK EK IBADAT 4th January 2016 05:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 490058)


Aa raha ye khayaal hai jaise,
tum se milnaa muhaal hai jaise.

aaj dekha to maine paaya hai,
har khushi bhii malaal hai jaise.

ye zamaana judaaiyon waala,
ek pal ek saal hai jaise.

tujhko har waqt sochte rahnaa,
mere dil kaa kamaal hai jaise.

terii yaaden udaas gulshan me.n,
koii phoolo.n ki Daal hai jaise.

kyuu.n mujhe chain ab nahii paDtaa,
paagalon saa ye haal hai jaise.

main guzartaa huaa zamaanaa hoon,
tuu nayaa ek saal hai jaise.....

bahut khoob rahi aapki yeh koshish Shaad bhai........................

sameer'shaad' 8th January 2016 08:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by prasaxena (Post 490067)
main guzartaa huaa zamaanaa hoon,
tuu nayaa ek saal hai jaise....

Wah wah shaad sahab. Umda sher kahe hain aapne. Rumani andaaz bhi kya kehne.

Praveen


aapki inaayaton se behad mamnoon hoon saxenaa saahab.... tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon apki aamad par...

Shaad.......

sameer'shaad' 8th January 2016 09:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Madhu 14 (Post 490073)
terii yaaden udaas gulshan me.n,
koii phoolo.n ki Daal hai jaise.

Waah!! Bahut khoob bayangi....

main guzartaa huaa zamaanaa hoon,
tuu nayaa ek saal hai jaise.....

Kya kahne....umda..

Naye saal ki shuruat Bahut haseen ghazal se huyi hai shaad sahab...bahut khoobsurat sher kahe hain.....is muhabbat bhare kalaam par daad qubool kijiyega..
Aise hee mahfil me chaar chaand lagate rahein...

Aate rahiye..
Khush rahiye...



aapki nawaazishen sar maathe par madhu saahiba.... khushi hui jaankar ke ye adna sa kalaam aapko acchaa lagaa... koshish karunga aage bhi aise koshishen aap doston ko pasand raha karen............

Dhaval 9th January 2016 03:10 AM

Shaad bhaii

Namaste...kaise hain aap?

Hameshaa ki tarah ehsaason ko lafzon me ba khoobee pesb kiyaa hai aapne...dil se daad aur duaaen...aapko padhnaa hameshaa se ahchchha lagtaa hai..

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

Aapka

Dhaval

sameer'shaad' 11th January 2016 06:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by masti (Post 490078)
Shaad bhai....

Aapki tadap dilbtak pohunchi.....bohut khubsoorat.


aabhaari hoon aapka sarika jee jo aapne is adnaa si koshish ko khaas tavajjoh di... aatii rahiyegaa aapki duaaon ka talabgaar.... khush rahiye

Shaad....

sameer'shaad' 11th January 2016 06:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mast (Post 490099)
Dil ke jab tootne ki awaaz na ho
khwaashishen ho par khwaab na ho

ek aisi tapish mein le gayi tumhaari baatein
baagh mein hum aur koi gulaab na ho

Bhai bahut naazuk bahut umdaa aur kaafi dil se likhi gayi rachnaa hai.....nacheez ki daad qubool farmaiyegaa aur yunhi bazm roshan rakhiYeGaa


aapne dastak kyaa dii, bazm raushan ho gayee aur ek alag hi khushboo se surkhroo huii hai....

mujhe aapka saath mil gayaa isse badee daulat aur koii nahi mujh gareeb ke liye....

jis muhabbat aur jis khuloos se aapne mujhe aur meri ghazlon ko nawaazaa hai main karzdaar ho gayaa hoon aapka.... Allah pak ye inaayat barkaraar rakhe.... aapka saath aur pyaar yunhi miltaa rahe......

Shaad....

KunaaL 15th January 2016 09:48 AM

Sab kuch bohat accha hai bhai.. seedha saaf aur aala .. mujhe behad khushi hoti hai aise kalaam padh ke..

Meri mubarakbad tumhare naam

Kunaal

sameer'shaad' 16th January 2016 01:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT (Post 490120)
bahut khoob rahi aapki yeh koshish Shaad bhai........................

behad shukriyaa aapka tahe dil se Rajinder jee.... tashreef laate rahiyegaa....
aapke aane ka muntazir rahunga

Shaad.........

sukanya 8th February 2016 07:54 PM

Shaad

Bahut Khoobsurat likha hay.

Zindagi tufaanon ka sailaab hay jaise
Duubte ko tinke ka sahara hay jaise

Saal naya kab puraana ho jaye
Aane wala kal har sawaal ka jawaab hay jaise.

God bless you

sabaa kiyani 6th March 2016 10:50 AM

wah wah sameer shad g buht khoob

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 490058)


Aa raha ye khayaal hai jaise,
tum se milnaa muhaal hai jaise.

aaj dekha to maine paaya hai,
har khushi bhii malaal hai jaise.

ye zamaana judaaiyon waala,
ek pal ek saal hai jaise.

tujhko har waqt sochte rahnaa,
mere dil kaa kamaal hai jaise.

terii yaaden udaas gulshan me.n,
koii phoolo.n ki Daal hai jaise.

kyuu.n mujhe chain ab nahii paDtaa,
paagalon saa ye haal hai jaise.

main guzartaa huaa zamaanaa hoon,
tuu nayaa ek saal hai jaise.....



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