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sameer'shaad' 20th November 2016 01:15 AM

~aansoo~
 


khushk aankhon me kho gaye aansoo
ek apne naa ho sake aansoo

jab chalee baat bewafaai kii
ham ne chupke se pee liye aansoo

aadmii kii yahii tamanna hai
haale dil bhii kabhii kahe aansoo

meraa hansnaa to usne dekhaa hai
is dafaa us ko bhii dikhe aansoo

mere qaatil ki ye tamanna hai
phool bankar girenN mere aansoo

jo agar paDh sako to paDh lenaa
Khat me bheje hain kuch mere aansoo

ye mere dil kii beimaanii haii
ab bhi aate hain yaad me aansoo

Shaad aise na yaad kar us ko
chal paDenge ruke ruke aansoo....

Shaad...

Mujahid Ali 20th November 2016 12:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 495197)


khushk aankhon me kho gaye aansoo
ek apne naa ho sake aansoo

jab chalee baat bewafaai kii
ham ne chupke se pee liye aansoo

aadmii kii yahii tamanna hai
haale dil bhii kabhii kahe aansoo

meraa hansnaa to usne dekhaa hai
is dafaa us ko bhii dikhe aansoo

mere qaatil ki ye tamanna hai
phool bankar girenN mere aansoo

jo agar paDh sako to paDh lenaa
Khat me bheje hain kuch mere aansoo

ye mere dil kii beimaanii haii
ab bhi aate hain yaad me aansoo

Shaad aise na yaad kar us ko
chal paDenge ruke ruke aansoo....

Shaad...



Kya baat hai shaad sahab
Kya rawaa ghazal likha hai aapne

Waqayee tehseen ke qabil hai ye ghazal
Maqte ne jaan nikaal diya

Bohat umda la-jawaab
Dua ke saath ijaazat

redtears_ocean 21st November 2016 11:54 AM

behtreen ashaar, khoob jaanaab ����

Madhu 14 21st November 2016 03:37 PM

mere qaatil ki ye tamanna hai
phool bankar girenN mere aansoo


Kya baat hai janaab..100 daad pesh hain is ek sher par....
Waah!!!!!

Matla behad asar daar to maqta seedhe dil ko chhoota hua....kamaal ashaar huye hain sabhi manikhej aur purasar..
Hamari daad ko bhi jagah dijiyega apni bazm me.....likhte rahiye aur bhi behtar..
.....bada intzaar karaya mahfil ko is baar par chaliye ghazal aisi pesh ki hai ki mafi di ja sakti hai....:)

Khush rahein..

Madhu..

Qasid 21st November 2016 07:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 495197)


khushk aankhon me kho gaye aansoo
ek apne naa ho sake aansoo

jab chalee baat bewafaai kii
ham ne chupke se pee liye aansoo

aadmii kii yahii tamanna hai
haale dil bhii kabhii kahe aansoo

meraa hansnaa to usne dekhaa hai
is dafaa us ko bhii dikhe aansoo

mere qaatil ki ye tamanna hai
phool bankar girenN mere aansoo

jo agar paDh sako to paDh lenaa
Khat me bheje hain kuch mere aansoo

ye mere dil kii beimaanii haii
ab bhi aate hain yaad me aansoo

Shaad aise na yaad kar us ko
chal paDenge ruke ruke aansoo....

Shaad...

Khoob ehsaas hue hai mere bhai mukhtasar si baat ko itni gehraayi mein bayaan kiya hai ki bas kya kahein.......yunhi bazm mein humhe nayaab nagme dete rahiye

sameer'shaad' 22nd November 2016 12:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mujahid Ali (Post 495206)
Kya baat hai shaad sahab
Kya rawaa ghazal likha hai aapne

Waqayee tehseen ke qabil hai ye ghazal
Maqte ne jaan nikaal diya

Bohat umda la-jawaab
Dua ke saath ijaazat


aapki inaayaton aur muhabbaton ke liye tahe dil se mashkoor hoon aapka janaab Mujahid Ali saahab......

Tashreef laate rahiyegaa

Shukriyaa

Shaad....

sameer'shaad' 23rd November 2016 10:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by redtears_ocean (Post 495214)
behtreen ashaar, khoob jaanaab ����

behad shukriyaa janaab......... arse baad aapka khat dekhaa behad sukoon o masarrat ka sabab huaa hai....... tashreef laate rahiyegaa

Shukriyaa

Shaad......

shakir ali 01 26th November 2016 07:53 AM

shad sahab bahut hi zabardast kalam se
sajaya he aapne bazm ko
yuhi Dillon ko khilate rahiye
super .,......peshkash

SHAKIR ALI

sameer'shaad' 28th November 2016 11:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Madhu 14 (Post 495222)
mere qaatil ki ye tamanna hai
phool bankar girenN mere aansoo


Kya baat hai janaab..100 daad pesh hain is ek sher par....
Waah!!!!!

Matla behad asar daar to maqta seedhe dil ko chhoota hua....kamaal ashaar huye hain sabhi manikhej aur purasar..
Hamari daad ko bhi jagah dijiyega apni bazm me.....likhte rahiye aur bhi behtar..
.....bada intzaar karaya mahfil ko is baar par chaliye ghazal aisi pesh ki hai ki mafi di ja sakti hai....:)

Khush rahein..

Madhu..



bahut bahut shukrguzaar hoon aapki is darjaa muhabbat, khuloos aur pazeeraai ke liye mohtarmaa...

aap jaise aala shoraa ki nazar gar khaaksaar ko naseeb ho jaae to kalaam me sone chaandi ke wark chaDh jaate hain.....

dil ki garaaiyon se mashkoor o mamnoon hooon aapkaa... aamad banae rakhiyegaa


Shaad..........

bhushan 16th December 2016 03:30 PM

Bohot khoob shaad bhai.....ye lehza bhi bahot khoob raha...
Waaah

Aapka apna
Bhushan

sunita thakur 21st December 2016 11:28 AM

Shaad bhai....hamesha se aap khoob hi likhte ho, so kya tareef karu aapki shayri ki, haa yeh baat alag hai ki kuch ehsaas aise hote hai jo seedhe dil par asar karte hai, lagta hai ki yeh mere dil ki baat hi kahi hai....aisa hi ek ehsaas...!!

jo agar paDh sako to paDh lenaa
Khat me bheje hain kuch mere aansoo


:)

sameer'shaad' 30th December 2016 09:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sunita virender (Post 495404)
Shaad bhai....hamesha se aap khoob hi likhte ho, so kya tareef karu aapki shayri ki, haa yeh baat alag hai ki kuch ehsaas aise hote hai jo seedhe dil par asar karte hai, lagta hai ki yeh mere dil ki baat hi kahi hai....aisa hi ek ehsaas...!!

jo agar paDh sako to paDh lenaa
Khat me bheje hain kuch mere aansoo


:)

tahe dil se aapka shukr guzaar hoon Sunita dee.... aapne jo alfaazon ki gahraai me chupe hue ehsaason ko pakad liyaa hai, aur pasand kiyaa hai....

aage bhi aapke pyaar aur duaaon ka talabgaar rahungaa......... aati rahiyegaa

Shaad........

sameer'shaad' 30th December 2016 09:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bhushan (Post 495385)
Bohot khoob shaad bhai.....ye lehza bhi bahot khoob raha...
Waaah

Aapka apna
Bhushan

bahot bahot shukriyaa aapka Bhushan saahab.................

nacheez ke kalaam ko pasand karne ke liye shukriyaa

Shaad..........

sukanya 8th March 2017 09:31 PM

Samandar sa baną dete hain Ansoon
Na gava inhein Anmol hain Ansoon

Kuch Shaakh tufanon mein hilte hain jab
Baraste hain fir kuch Ansoon

Aaya jo toofan chala bhi jayega
Ek Indradhanush bhi layainge ye Ansoon

Beautiful poetry Shaad.Remember that Tears are really precious.Kčep Smiling

sameer'shaad' 17th March 2017 08:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by shakir ali 01 (Post 495265)
shad sahab bahut hi zabardast kalam se
sajaya he aapne bazm ko
yuhi Dillon ko khilate rahiye
super .,......peshkash

SHAKIR ALI

derii se jawaab dene ke liye muaafii ka arzmand hoon.....
aur shukrguzaar hoon jo aapne mujhe is laayaq samjha , is kalaam ko pasand karne ke liye tahe dil se shukriyaa aapka... aate rahiyegaa

Shaad....

sameer'shaad' 17th March 2017 08:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sukanya (Post 495684)
Samandar sa baną dete hain Ansoon
Na gava inhein Anmol hain Ansoon

Kuch Shaakh tufanon mein hilte hain jab
Baraste hain fir kuch Ansoon

Aaya jo toofan chala bhi jayega
Ek Indradhanush bhi layainge ye Ansoon

Beautiful poetry Shaad.Remember that Tears are really precious.Kčep Smiling


kyaa baat hai Sukanya dee... aapne bahot hi khoobsurat kalaam ke andaaz me jawaab diyaa hai, mujhe aapke ehsaas behad pasand aaye.... aur bahut shukriyaa aapka jo aapne is kalaam ko pasand kiyaa hai...

aate rahiyegaa , duaaon ka talabgaar

Shaad....

sameer'shaad' 17th March 2017 08:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Qasid (Post 495226)
Khoob ehsaas hue hai mere bhai mukhtasar si baat ko itni gehraayi mein bayaan kiya hai ki bas kya kahein.......yunhi bazm mein humhe nayaab nagme dete rahiye

aapki daad aur duaaon ke liye tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon mere bhai...
aate rahiyegaa , aapka saath banae rakkhen..

Shaad...


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