if a girl is too proud of her beauty then i guess this sher is appropriate...........

Patti Patti gulab kya hogi
Har kali mehr-khaab kya hogi
Jisne dekhi ho laakho haseen
uski neeyat kya kharaab hogi

nice one
 

patti patti gulab ho jati....
her kali mera khwab ho jati..
tune na dali ek maikasha nazar..
varna yeh shabnam bhi sharab ho jati.......

patti patti gulaab ho jaati
har kali mehvekhwaab ho jaati
tune daali na meh-fishaa(n) nazren
varna shabnam sharab ho jaati

Thora hat ke sher likha hai..arz hai....

Patti Patti gawaah ho jati..
Har kali ek raaz ho jati...
Accha huwa ke woh aaye nahi mehfil me
warna unki berukhi meri chahat ka saboot ho jati!!!!

kaisa hai??

brilliant....!!
 

wah ...!!

aapki shayri mein bhi dard aane lagaa hai shumaila ji......!!


adaab
maikasH

Shukriya maikashji...!!

Aapne ye baat kahke mere sheyr me dam daal diya!!

Hausla-afzai ka ek baar phir shukriya..:)

wah.....gaurav jee....ek sher se kitne sher ban gaye...majja aaya padke...:)