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sameer'shaad' 3rd August 2013 09:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by puneet singh (Post 453812)
Bhoot pyaari lines h bhaiya.. dil ko chu gayi..

behad shukrguzaar hoon aapkaa Puneet bhai........................

puneet singh 3rd August 2013 11:02 AM

Dil Ko Tumhari Yad K Aansoo Aziz The
Duniya K Koi Gham Samone Nahi Diya
Puneet..

sameer'shaad' 3rd August 2013 05:46 PM


Meraa aaj ka sher...

Kyaa jaane kyaa yaad rahaa kyaa bhool gayaa,
Kalam uThee par Naam Tumhaaraa bhool gayaa..


Shaad....

Taish 4th August 2013 08:55 AM

ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN,
vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai...


--Taish

puneet singh 4th August 2013 06:14 PM

ye dil bura hi sahi sare bazaar ise yu badnaam to na kar,
Ke kuch din tu bhi raha hai isme mehmaan banke
not mine..

Taish 5th August 2013 09:01 AM

Guroor Baichay Gein Na Iltajaa Khareedain Ge
Na Sar Jhukaayein Gein Na Sar Jhuka Khareedain Ge

--Qais(poora nama pata na hone ke liye maafi chaahunga...)

sameer'shaad' 5th August 2013 12:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by puneet singh (Post 453840)
ye dil bura hi sahi sare bazaar ise yu badnaam to na kar,
Ke kuch din tu bhi raha hai isme mehmaan banke
not mine..

Wah waahhhh.......... subhaan Allaah mere bhai.

sameer'shaad' 5th August 2013 12:55 PM

Aaj kaa sher..


Wo to acchaa hai ke jhumkaa teraaa bejaan hai sanam,
Choom letaa tere gaalon ko, gar isme jaan hotee........!!


Shaad....

Taish 6th August 2013 09:54 AM

Apne haq me mughey maang le,
Umr bhar chahunga maiN tughey...

--Taish

sameer'shaad' 6th August 2013 11:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Taish (Post 453875)
Apne haq me mughey maang le,
Umr bhar chahunga maiN tughey...

--Taish

mughey aur Tughey bahot confuse kar rahe hain yaar .......... sher ka lutf nahi mil paa raha hai.

sameer'shaad' 6th August 2013 12:34 PM

Aaj kaa sher.....


ye jo rehte hain mere dil mein Azaabon ki tarah,
Seena chalnee kiye dete haiN SharaaboN ki tarah...

Shaad.............

Taish 6th August 2013 05:21 PM

aazmaaya hai dostoN ko jab,
dushmanoN se mohabbat hui...

puneet singh 6th August 2013 06:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 453860)
Wah waahhhh.......... subhaan Allaah mere bhai.

Aapka bhoot bhoot sukriya bhaiya..:)

puneet singh 6th August 2013 06:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Taish (Post 453883)
aazmaaya hai dostoN ko jab,
dushmanoN se mohabbat hui...

bhoot kum lafzo m bhoot umda likh diya aapne bhaiya..

puneet singh 6th August 2013 06:31 PM

use shant samunndar ne duboyaa,
Jise tufaano ka bhoot andaaz tha..

Not mine

Aashique 6th August 2013 06:47 PM

Khuda Tere Naam Me Itni Rubayat Nahi..
Jitni Majnu Ke Liye.. Laila Ko Pukarne Me Thi..

sameer'shaad' 7th August 2013 01:58 PM

Aaj ka sher...

Haal ab bhi jo mera Poochte ho,
Gham mujhe dekh kar nahi hotaa..???

Shaad...

puneet singh 7th August 2013 06:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 453900)
Aaj ka sher...

Haal ab bhi jo mera Poochte ho,
Gham mujhe dekh kar nahi hotaa..???

Shaad...

Bhoot pyaari lines hai bhaiya.. maja aa gaya padh kar

puneet singh 7th August 2013 06:22 PM

gujar to jayegi ye zindgi uske bina bhi lekin,
Dil aksar tadpa karega pyaar karne walo ko dekh kar..


Puneet..

sameer'shaad' 8th August 2013 09:31 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by puneet singh (Post 453905)
gujar to jayegi ye zindgi uske bina bhi lekin,
Dil aksar tadpa karega pyaar karne walo ko dekh kar..


Puneet..

waah waaahhh kya baat hai puneet....... bahot khoob :)

sameer'shaad' 8th August 2013 09:31 AM

Aaj kaa sher..

Abhi tak to koi aaya na milne tanhaai ke sivaa,
kisi ko kehte sunaa thaa, Eid ka din hai...........

~Shaad~

puneet singh 8th August 2013 10:59 AM

baal bikhraaye unki kabar Pe jab koi mehrabi roti hai,
Khayaal aata hai mujhe ke mout kitnii hasin hoti hai..
not mine..

Taish 8th August 2013 01:52 PM

Meri Aankhon Ko Soojhta Hee Nahi
Ya Muqaddar Mein Raasta Hee Nahi...

--Noshi Gilani

sameer'shaad' 8th August 2013 11:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by puneet singh (Post 453911)
baal bikhraaye unki kabar Pe jab koi mehrabi roti hai,
Khayaal aata hai mujhe ke mout kitnii hasin hoti hai..
not mine..

Mere khyaaal se puneet, is sher me mehrabi ki jagah mehjabeeN hona chahiye...
fir se dekh lenaa ek baar......

Shaad.....

puneet singh 9th August 2013 12:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 453917)
Mere khyaaal se puneet, is sher me mehrabi ki jagah mehjabeeN hona chahiye...
fir se dekh lenaa ek baar......

Shaad.....

Haa bhaiya mehjabeeN hi hai.. wo sorry muje itni ache. Se urdu ke words nahi aate to.. isi karan mujse gazal Na Ban pati bhaiya.. :( choti moti maamuli shaayri to ban jaati hai but gazal.. aage se mai words ko or ache se dekh ke likhunga..

puneet singh 9th August 2013 12:40 AM

aap sabhi Dosto, bhaiyo or bheno ko meri taraf se EID ki bhoot bhoot mubarakbaad :)

Aaj ka sher..

Tamannna tere jism ki hoti to duniya se cheen leta mai,
Ishq teri rooh se h isliye khuda se maangte hain

Not mine..

Taish 9th August 2013 04:33 PM

muskuraa de kabhi vo yahi sochte,
jab bhi humse mile berukhi se mile...

--Taish

sameer'shaad' 10th August 2013 11:01 AM

Aaj ka sher...

Mere Maulaa use tu door kar Fikr o khayaaloN se,
Wo sheereeN naam labb pe ho to Rozaa TooT jaata hai...

Shaad....

vikass 11th August 2013 09:54 AM

Jo aakhon ki tajoriyon main chupaya tha daulat-e-sakoon.....
Apni nigahee sharafat se loot kar le gaya sari.... Vikas...

SULTAAN RAAJ 11th August 2013 11:02 AM

mera aaj ka sher..
 
jaha ke juba ka yki.N kiya "bhul gaye wo"..
par kal raat chand to phir niklega..

~@ :SULTAAN

puneet singh 11th August 2013 12:10 PM

kabr pe aaye wo meri apne hamsafar ke sath,
kon kehta h"DAFNANE"k baad"JALAYA"nahi jata..

Not mine..

sameer'shaad' 11th August 2013 02:31 PM

bahot acche acche sher post kiye hain aapne.................doston

Bahot Khuub......

Shaad.......

sameer'shaad' 12th August 2013 09:16 AM

Aaj ka sher..

Jab tak rahee hai Teergii*, Sab ne uthaaye Sar yahaaN,
Khursheed* jo aane huaa to Shaher saara so gayaa.

Teergii- darkness, andheraa
khursheed- sun, sooraj

~Shaad~

SULTAAN RAAJ 12th August 2013 11:23 AM

mera aaj ka sher..
 
aaye "SULTAAN" dard bya.N kar sake "abhi wo alfaz hi nahi bana hai"
warna.. hum par ek alag kitab hi hoti




~@ :SYLTAAN RAAJ

SULTAAN RAAJ 12th August 2013 11:26 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 453946)
Aaj ka sher..

Jab tak rahee hai Teergii*, Sab ne uthaaye Sar yahaaN,
Khursheed* jo aane huaa to Shaher saara so gayaa.

Teergii- darkness, andheraa
khursheed- sun, sooraj

~Shaad~

dil ko chune ka kaam kiya hai aapke likhe hue alfazo ne....
Bahut hi khub

puneet singh 12th August 2013 06:21 PM

Ek pal jo tujhe bhoolne ko sochta hu,
Meri saansen meri taqdir se ulajh jati hai

Puneet..

SULTAAN RAAJ 13th August 2013 10:59 AM

mera aaj ka sher.....
 
chod ke aana hi to tha...
sajaya bhi use "jis dil maine kiraye pe tha"



~@ :SULTAAN RAAJ

sameer'shaad' 13th August 2013 04:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by puneet singh (Post 453953)
Ek pal jo tujhe bhoolne ko sochta hu,
Meri saansen meri taqdir se ulajh jati hai

Puneet..

waaahhhhhhhhhhhh................................

sameer'shaad' 13th August 2013 04:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SULTAAN RAAJ (Post 453950)
dil ko chune ka kaam kiya hai aapke likhe hue alfazo ne....
Bahut hi khub

behad shukriyaa aapka Sultaan bhai.....................

aapka ye sher hame accha lagaa..

aaye "SULTAAN" dard bya.N kar sake "abhi wo alfaz hi nahi bana hai"
warna.. hum par ek alag kitab hi hoti

likhte rahiye...........

sameer'shaad' 13th August 2013 04:30 PM

Aaj ka sher...

phool aaye hain aise Gulshan mein,
tere Sehre ko jaise aaye haiN....

Shaad.....


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