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sunita thakur 31st December 2018 01:10 PM

"Sab bhulaa diya maine"
 
Namaskaar dosto...arse baad bazm mein hazir hu apni aik adna si koshish ki saath...umeed hai aap esko apna thoda sa waqt jaroor denge :)


GamoN ko khush rehna sikhaa diya maine,
Tere bin bhi jee kar, dikhaa diya maine…!

Dard-o-sitam ki tumne koi kami na rakhi,
Ab na rouNgi, dekh..muskura diyaa maine...!

Aate jaate jo har pal yaad teri dilati thi,
kamre se us tasveer ko, hatta diya maine …!

Ab na teri yaad na teri koi aarzoo hai muje,
Dil pe haath rakh ke, sab dafnaa diya maine…!

Na suna.na ab kabhi be-baat ki kahaNiyaa,
Jo beet gya so beet gya, sab bhulaa diya maine...!

Naye saal mein, dil se kiya yeh vaada hai,
Darr na tu, Khud ko majboot banaa liya maine…!

'Sunita' phir na karegi teri baton par yakeen,
Danke ki chott par aaj tujko bataa diya maine…!
31.12.2018

:)

ahmadcameron 1st January 2019 04:18 AM

Mashallah bahut achey sher likhey hain aap ne eis radeef aur qafiye mein.....

Dhaval 1st January 2019 09:42 PM

Sister

Pranaam

Waise to main bada khushnaseeb huun ki aapki ees umdaah ghazal ko sab se pehle padhne ma mauqaa Mila thaa.. Jaisa ki Maine kaha tha ki Har sher bahot hi laajawaab hai apne aap me aur Har sher ke ehsaas bahot hi gehre hai.. Aik Dil ko chhu lene waali iss ghazal par mere Dil se dheron saari daad aur mubaaraq baad

Khush rahen... Apnaa khayal rakhne

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

Aapka

ChhoTu

sunita thakur 3rd January 2019 10:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ahmadcameron (Post 496734)
Mashallah bahut achey sher likhey hain aap ne eis radeef aur qafiye mein.....

Ahmad ji...aapko mere ehsaas pasand aaye...housla afjai ke liye shukriya.

:)

sameer'shaad' 5th January 2019 10:30 PM

GamoN ko khush rehna sikhaa diya maine,
Tere bin bhi jee kar, dikhaa diya maine…!

Waahhh

Dard-o-sitam ki tumne koi kami na rakhi,
Ab na rouNgi, dekh..muskura diyaa maine...!

waah waah kya baat hai...

Aate jaate jo har pal yaad teri dilati thi,
kamre se us tasveer ko, hatta diya maine …!

Ab na teri yaad na teri koi aarzoo hai muje,
Dil pe haath rakh ke, sab dafnaa diya maine…!


Kamaal ka likha hai dee aapne...

Na suna.na ab kabhi be-baat ki kahaNiyaa,
Jo beet gya so beet gya, sab bhulaa diya maine...!

Naye saal mein, dil se kiya yeh vaada hai,
Darr na tu, Khud ko majboot banaa liya maine…!

'Sunita' phir na karegi teri baton par yakeen,
Danke ki chott par aaj tujko bataa diya maine…!
31.12.2018

aahh bahot dard hai aapke kalaam me dee..... aankh bhar aayee merii...
bas duaa kartaa hoon aap hamesha khush raheN..

aapko bhi nayaa saal bahot mubaarak ho



:)

Madhu 14 7th January 2019 10:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sunita thakur (Post 496733)
Namaskaar dosto...arse baad bazm mein hazir hu apni aik adna si koshish ki saath...umeed hai aap esko apna thoda sa waqt jaroor denge :)


GamoN ko khush rehna sikhaa diya maine,
Tere bin bhi jee kar, dikhaa diya maine…!

Dard-o-sitam ki tumne koi kami na rakhi,
Ab na rouNgi, dekh..muskura diyaa maine...!

Aate jaate jo har pal yaad teri dilati thi,
kamre se us tasveer ko, hatta diya maine …!

Ab na teri yaad na teri koi aarzoo hai muje,
Dil pe haath rakh ke, sab dafnaa diya maine…!

Na suna.na ab kabhi be-baat ki kahaNiyaa,
Jo beet gya so beet gya, sab bhulaa diya maine...!

Naye saal mein, dil se kiya yeh vaada hai,
Darr na tu, Khud ko majboot banaa liya maine…!

'Sunita' phir na karegi teri baton par yakeen,
Danke ki chott par aaj tujko bataa diya maine…!
31.12.2018

:)

Namaskaar di
Deri se aayi aapki post dekh nahi payi ..aise to fb pe padhi thi par yahaan dubara padha to phir vahi aah nikal aayi...itna dard itni aasaani se likh Diya aapne...padhkar kuch der k liye kho Gayi main in Ehsason mein:(
Khush rahiye...
Likhti rahiye

sunita thakur 22nd January 2019 01:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dhaval (Post 496736)
Sister

Pranaam

Waise to main bada khushnaseeb huun ki aapki ees umdaah ghazal ko sab se pehle padhne ma mauqaa Mila thaa.. Jaisa ki Maine kaha tha ki Har sher bahot hi laajawaab hai apne aap me aur Har sher ke ehsaas bahot hi gehre hai.. Aik Dil ko chhu lene waali iss ghazal par mere Dil se dheron saari daad aur mubaaraq baad

Khush rahen... Apnaa khayal rakhne

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

Aapka

ChhoTu


Chottu...es gazal ko hi nahi...sabhi gazlon ko sabse pehle tumne hi pada hai :)
mere ehsaasoN ko samjne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.

pyar aur duaoN ke saath
sister :)


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