aao, tasleem kareiN
raNg-e-rivaayat ke khilaaf taaza'h Ghazal ke do misre hue haiN, mehfil ki nazar
aao, tasleem* kareiN, pehle se jaz'baat nahiiN maiN bhi kuch aur hooN aur tujh meiN bhi vo baat nahiiN tasleem* = Accept maikash |
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poori gazal bhi jaldi pesh kijiye...intejaar hai besabri se. :) |
ta'bedaar hooN Sunita jee aur shukurguzaar bhi, hauNsla-afza'ii ke liye
Jaise hi taqmeel hui, haazir karta hooN rab raakha maikash |
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Waahhhh janaab ummdah shahkaari koi aapse seekhe...
Jaise ke sunitaa bahan ne kahaa aapka ek sher muqammal ghazlon pe bhaari hai..... Zindabaad maikash bhai ... Shaad.... |
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Aur sher ke Kya kahne...aagaaz ye hai to anzaaam Kya hoga...😊intzaar rahega ..... |
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Amaa yaar, tumse baat hue arsaa ho chalaa! Tumhaari facebook waali Ghazal par kuch kehne ki gustaakhi kar baiTha tha, socha tha raabta karoge, Ghalati ho gayi ho to anjaan samajh kar muaaf kar dena bhai. Na-ehl ka shukriya tasleem farmaa lijiyega |
Do lines hi bohat kuch ke gayi. :)
Bohat khoob. |
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