Shayri.com

Shayri.com (http://www.shayri.com/forums/index.php)
-   Aapki Shayri (http://www.shayri.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=32)
-   -   Aur barish ruk gayi hai... (http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=79931)

Madhu 14 21st June 2016 08:55 PM

Aur barish ruk gayi hai...
 
kahte the hamse kabhi vo
dil me ek hasrat jagi hai
aao hai mausam gazab ka
aur barish ruk gayi hai..

khatm apna ye safar ab
door jane ki ghadi hai
chal diye vo itna kahkar
aur barish ruk gayi hai

abra sare boondon wale
koi aandhi le udi hai
chup sa hai har ek nazara
aur barish ruk gayi hai..

dard itna badh gaya ab
khushk aNkhoN ki nadi hai
seene me kuch chan se toota
aur barish ruk gayi hai..

yun lage pairoN ke neeche
part sholoN ki bichhi hai
Kano me chubhte haiN nashtar
aur barish ruk gayi hai..

chal madhu kab tak rukegi
door tak koi nahi hai
lauTne ka vaqt bhi hai
aur barish ruk gai hai...

Madhu...

Mujahid Ali 21st June 2016 11:46 PM

Bohat khoob madhu sahiba

Kitni saadgi hai kalaam mai
Mujhe bohat achha laga

Nazm ka unwaan bohat suit kiya

Iss mubarak mahine mai zor-e-kalaam aur

Duaao mai yaad rakhey hamey bhi

sameer'shaad' 22nd June 2016 02:12 AM

bahut bahut haseen peshkash thii madhu ji.... yaqeen maaniye bahut acchaa lagaa aapka kalaam dekhna....

tahe dil se daad pesh karta hoon aati rahiyegaa.... shukriyaa

Shaad....

Qasid 22nd June 2016 09:16 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Madhu 14 (Post 493384)
Kahte the hamse kabhi vo
Dil me ek hasrat jagi hai
aao hai mausam gazab ka
Aur barish ruk gayi hai..

Khatm apna ye safar ab
Door jane ki ghadi hai
Chal diye vo itna kahkar
Aur barish ruk gayi hai

Abra sare boondon wale
Koi aandhi le udi hai
Chup sa hai har ek nazara
Aur barish ruk gayi hai..

Dard itna badh gaya ab
Khushk ankhon ki nadi hai
seene me kuch chan se toota
Aur barish ruk gayi hai..

Yun lage pairon ke neeche
part sholon ki bichhi hai
Kano me chubhte hain nashtar
Aur barish ruk gayi hai..

Chal madhu kab tak rukegi
Door tak koi nahi hai
Lautne ka vaqt bhi hai
Aur barish ruk gai hai...

Madhu...

Bahut hi khoobsurat nazm hui hai is baar, dheeron daad aapko Madhu aur aise ki ehsaas aur rawaangi badhti rahe yahi dua rahegi

sabaa kiyani 24th June 2016 10:47 PM


Aor baarish ruk gaeyi buhet buhet khoob nazm paish ki hey aap ney madhu jii
Daad qoobul kariye ������������

Madhu 14 8th July 2016 12:07 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mujahid Ali (Post 493385)
Bohat khoob madhu sahiba

Kitni saadgi hai kalaam mai
Mujhe bohat achha laga

Nazm ka unwaan bohat suit kiya

Iss mubarak mahine mai zor-e-kalaam aur

Duaao mai yaad rakhey hamey bhi

aapka behad shukriya mujahid sahab....

duayein hamesha doston ke sath hain..

salamat rahein...

Madhu 14 24th July 2016 12:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 493386)
bahut bahut haseen peshkash thii madhu ji.... yaqeen maaniye bahut acchaa lagaa aapka kalaam dekhna....

tahe dil se daad pesh karta hoon aati rahiyegaa.... shukriyaa

Shaad....

Hame bhi bahot achvha laga aapko bazm me dekhkar shaad sahab..inayat banaye rakhiyega...

Behad shukriya..
Salamat rahein..

Madhu.

Madhu 14 28th July 2016 01:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mast (Post 493388)
Bahut hi khoobsurat nazm hui hai is baar, dheeron daad aapko Madhu aur aise ki ehsaas aur rawaangi badhti rahe yahi dua rahegi

Behad shukriya anu...................

Khush rahein....

Azaz AHMAD 5th August 2016 11:48 PM

Bhot Khub Madhu Sahiba.. Kafi Zordaar Kalaam Raha.. Aur aakhri Makte Ka Sher Mujhe Bhot Hi Pasand Aaya.. BHOT Hi Khubsoorat.. . Likhte rahiye..

Madhu 14 8th August 2016 04:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sabaa kiyani (Post 493450)

Aor baarish ruk gaeyi buhet buhet khoob nazm paish ki hey aap ney madhu jii
Daad qoobul kariye ������������

bahut bahut shukriya saba ji...

aage bhi sath deti rahiyega...

khush rahein...

Madhu 14 1st July 2017 07:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Azaz AHMAD (Post 494010)
Bhot Khub Madhu Sahiba.. Kafi Zordaar Kalaam Raha.. Aur aakhri Makte Ka Sher Mujhe Bhot Hi Pasand Aaya.. BHOT Hi Khubsoorat.. . Likhte rahiye..

Bahot maufi chahti hun azaz sahab..aapko reply nahi kar payi...Aaj barish ne is nazm ki yaad dilayi tab apni bhool ka ehsaas hua...

Bahot shukriya aapka...age bhi hausla afzai ki ummeed rakhti hun

Aate rahiyega...
Salamat rahein..

sunita thakur 26th October 2017 05:00 PM

chal madhu kab tak rukegi
door tak koi nahi hai
lauTne ka vaqt bhi hai
aur barish ruk gai hai...


Madhu Bala.....poori nazm bahut acchi bani hai, par yeh ehsaas dil fareb rhe :)

mujib66 8th February 2018 04:16 PM

Wah wah wah

Bohut shaandar kalaam hai....mubarak ho.

Madhu 14 20th March 2018 07:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sunita thakur (Post 496230)
chal madhu kab tak rukegi
door tak koi nahi hai
lauTne ka vaqt bhi hai
aur barish ruk gai hai...


Madhu Bala.....poori nazm bahut acchi bani hai, par yeh ehsaas dil fareb rhe :)

bahot shukriya didi.......................:)

Madhu 14 20th March 2018 07:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mujib66 (Post 496417)
Wah wah wah

Bohut shaandar kalaam hai....mubarak ho.

aapka aana achcha laga...aate rahiyega.....


All times are GMT +5.5. The time now is 02:45 AM.

Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2019, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.